In the way of narration, this paper is original. The title "Visiting Friends in the Mountains" gives people the impression that the author is going to visit friends in the mountains, but after reading the third paragraph of the article, readers will suddenly realize that the author is going to ancient bridges, Woods, mountain springs, streams, waterfalls, cliffs, white clouds, larks, fallen flowers, fallen leaves, stones and thunderstorms, all of which are friends of nature.
The whole story is described in this way, which makes readers enter the picture and the author's state of mind, as if these friends in nature are not only the author's, but also each of our readers, so they feel more cordial.
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This article is imaginative and novel, full of childlike innocence and romance. For example, "when I close my eyes, I really become a tree. Roots grow from my feet, deeply plunge into the soil and rock strata, and breathe the vitality in the depths of the strata. My hair grows into a crown, my hands become branches, and my thoughts turn into tree juice, which flows in the annual rings, and finally grows tree seeds, which are taken to distant mountains and waters by birds."
The author imagines himself as a tree, so that the tree and "I" can be integrated. Another example is: "Hello, Grandpa Cliff! The high forehead is engraved with the wisdom of metaphysics, and the deep canyon is full of clear Zen. Looking up at you, I think of hermits and monks of all ages. You are also a meditation, and the cloud takes the scroll of the heavenly book, but from your handwriting? " In my imagination, Cliff seems to be a wise man.
From this, it can be seen that imagination makes the scenery lifelike, aura flying, and also makes the writing lively, such as the smoothness of a stream, which occasionally arouses beautiful waves. After reading this article, you will never feel bored and trite. You will always be moved by the author's innocence, and will always be infected by the passion flowing between the lines.
Really, if you feel the author's heart with your heart and see the poetic picture through language, you will enter the "fairy tale world" described by the author. With the help of imagination, personification and metaphor, the language is full of rhythm and shows the beauty of the scenery in the mountains.
Li Hanrong, a member of the Chinese Writers Association, a member of the Shaanxi Provincial Political Consultative Conference, a famous poet and essayist, and Li Hanrong's excellent essays were selected as Chinese textbooks for middle schools in China.
Over the years, he has written about 3,000 poems, more than 3,000 essays and more than 30 short stories in People's Literature, People's Daily, Poetry Magazine, Novel Monthly, Youth, Prose, Prose Hundred Schools and Star.
As well as Genesis, Vineyard, Poetic World and Supplement of United Daily News in Taiwan Province Province. More than 2000 poems, essays, essays and novels have been published in more than 0/00 newspapers and periodicals at home and abroad.
Prose was reprinted by Xinhua Digest, Selected Prose, Information Card, Extracurricular Reading for Middle School Students, Writing for Middle School Students, and Chinese Teaching Guidance for Middle School Students. , and has been selected into the creative research department of the Chinese Writers Association.
Selected Prose of China published by Changjiang Literature and Art Publishing House 1997, Selected Prose of China and Selected Prose published by Changjiang Literature and Art Publishing House 1998, Selected Prose of China published by Lijiang Publishing House 1999, Selected Prose of China in 2000 and 200/kloc-0.
Since 1997, his prose works have been selected by 15 into the national annual anthology. The work "Visiting Friends in the Mountains" was selected as a textbook for nine-year compulsory education.
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