April, the spring of the year, is the peak season of spring. In this season, the poet should write down the love in his heart and the mood of the season. Poets should compare such a spring scene to "you" in their hearts. What kind of spring scenery is there this season?
This April should be like the spring scenery in Jiangnan written by Su Dongpo. That goose yellow is a blooming life; That green contains infinite vitality; That tender life, fresh scenery, in such a season with a sacred light.
This sacredness is as clear as the holy water in front of the Buddha, and as beautiful and shining with the light of love as Bai Lianhua in the Buddha's heart. In this season, "you" has surpassed this season: "you" is the flower of a tree, a swallow flying with spring, beautiful and light, with love, warmth and hope.
The charm and Excellence of this poem lies not only in the beauty of artistic conception and the purity of content, but also in the skillful form and the beauty of language. Overlapping metaphors are used in the poem, and the image is beautiful without any suspicion of carving. On the contrary, it highlights the artistic conception and purity of the poem-the feeling of freshness and nature is revealed in the gorgeous decoration.
In form, poetry adopts the principle of poetic beauty of Crescent Poetry School: emphasizing the harmony of meter, the sculptural beauty of language and the musical sense of meter. This poem can be said to be the perfect embodiment of this principle, and the leap of words and the harmony of rhythm have almost reached the extreme.
There are more than 50 existing poems by Lin, such as You are April Day on Earth, which are full of individuality and unique. Reading her poems, essays and even novels has no sense of distance at all, as if the author is on the opposite side-her works like to use the word "you" to remind you at all times.
Reading her works is like talking to her, just like in her salon. Lin's extremely logical and thoughtful words seem to be in her ear. She is also very strict about her words. In order to express her thoughts accurately, she uses English words in many works. Similarly, in order to accurately express her thoughts, her articles are syntactic and Europeanized. Poetry genre combines western and classical styles and expresses profound and lasting thoughts.
Extended data
You are April Day on Earth, a classical poem by Lin, was first published in the first volume (1April 5, 934). There are two opinions about the writing intention of this poem: one is to mourn Xu Zhimo, and the other is to express the hope for his son and the joy brought by his birth.
In this regard, his son Liang Congjie said in "Suddenly April Day on Earth": "My father once told me that" You are April Day on Earth "was made for me by my mother in the joy after my birth, but my mother never told me about it herself."
Overall evaluation:
"You are April Day" has the same sentence structure from one paragraph to four paragraphs, forming a complex stack and a symmetrical movement. The love in my heart contrasts with the rich pictures in April, and the rhythm is bright. Sentence structure connects pictures, and emotions are like ripples on the water. The work is not only beautiful but also easy to sing, lively and moving.
"The fifth verse of the poem/You are love, warmth and hope,/You are April on earth!" It is an ending action, using abstract love, warmth and hope to compare you in your heart. It's amazing. It's beautiful. "You are April Day on Earth" echoes the opening of the poem from a distance, with changes in repetition, and the poem rotates and flows without any sense of stagnation.