Keywords: 400 words in the fourth grade of Adventure Primary School
Words: 400 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 400 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is Underwater Adventure. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. I went diving in Hainan Island and looked at the endless sea. I'm just imagining what the underwater world is like. I finally got what I wanted. I put on my diving suit and started my underwater adventure. I gradually sank to the bottom of the sea. I found that the underwater world is not as dark as I thought, and colorful fish are swimming around me. Soft corals sway on the bottom of the sea. Like a dancing fairy, the lazy little starfish lay motionless on the stone. Suddenly something slowly approached me. When I looked carefully, it turned out that a crab had climbed on my instep. I quickly took back my feet. Underwater world is really great. Teacher's comment: The author adopts the form of poetry, but obviously lacks understanding of poetic language. If these sentences are connected and punctuated, we will find that they are actually a narrative. We usually distinguish styles by language composition. Poetry has a poetic language structure, and narrative has a narrative language structure. If we understand this article according to the narrative, we should say that the author wrote it with great care. When a person goes to a completely strange place (underwater world) for the first time, his senses may not go deep into the depth and details of his environment, but here we find that the author's description of underwater is still very rich and delicate. (Xue Le China Outstanding Teacher: Teacher Ma Bin) June 4, 2009 17: 02: 00.