To revise an article, we should go from the whole to the part, and then from the part to the detail, that is, we should revise the important and core things first.
Therefore, to modify the article is to start with the framework on the basis of clarifying the core idea. If there is a problem with the framework, subsequent revisions will only cure the symptoms, not the root cause.
Thinking: Revise the article from a local or overall perspective, and consider whether this key position is appropriate and which sentences look gorgeous but useless.
(1). The modification principle is at the beginning.
Investigate whether the beginning can lead to the core idea of the article, whether it is attractive and whether it can arouse the interest of most readers.
At this time, you should put yourself in the position of the reader and read your article critically.
At the same time, you should remember that the main function of the beginning is to "let the reader continue reading the article."
Thinking: The key is to attract curiosity and find out whether it is true or not.
(2) Modify the principle of ending.
See if there is a button at the end, whether it can create a curse and lead to a topic. , and the core-whether it can stimulate readers to actively share articles.
(3) Three principles of subtitle modification.
First of all, look at the relevance between the subtitle and the core theme, and see whether each subtitle serves the theme, which is the most basic criterion to test whether the subtitle is qualified.
Second, judge whether the subtitles are concise and powerful, and whether they are enough to attract attention.
You can take out the subtitles separately, so that you can feel the feeling of each subtitle to the reader more intuitively.
Third, adjust the logical order between the subtitles to see if there is any logical confusion or fluency.
You can read all the subtitles from top to bottom, so you will have a more intuitive feeling.
2. Revise the article and change your mind.
Your expression should correctly convey what you want to express. Sometimes you think you've made it clear, but you haven't. Even if it is clearly written, readers may not be able to understand it. Your case should be in line with the theme, not contradictory. In other words, an article should stand up in the underlying logic and stand up to judgment in values.
How to take the exam? You can challenge your own article to see if you can easily refute the statements and cases in it, or you can rely on the judgment of friends or even "outsiders".
Thinking: Many times, readers can't receive all the knowledge and ideas correctly, which is easy to cause misunderstanding because of the unsmooth words or logic.
3. The first step in polishing the details is: word for word, deleting words and changing sentences.
"Delete" means to delete the useless, and "change" means to change the useful better.
Good-looking is the whole good-looking, not the local good-looking words, words and sentences.
This is the first step for us to polish the details: deletion. Delete what is useless and replace it with something that can be used. You should remember that a good article is not a good sentence or a good paragraph, but a good detail and whole.
Polish your mood from beginning to end.
The specific skill is empathy. Imagine yourself as a reader, what kind of emotions you will have when you see this article, what kind of scenes you will substitute, and then start from the end, how to express the words upside down, in order to be more touching. Thinking: Some articles will make readers feel sad, and some articles will make people feel passionate after reading them. This is emotional fluctuation and * * *.
5. Read the whole article aloud and listen to it.
There are generally three ways to modify an article by reading aloud.
First, read it to yourself and modify it yourself.
Second, read it to others and modify it according to others' reactions.
Third, ask others to read it to yourself.