Comprehensive correction (***9 places): On that day, Mr. Chen told us the story in the literary masterpiece Xu Shui. Look, his manners and talents are simply

It doesn't look right

3. Excellent and excellent repetition

The students were attracted by his vivid story, and the word order was reversed.

Staring at the wrong words

6 Listen to every word of Teacher Chen.

7. Staring at his every move is not properly matched.