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Three miles southeast of Huangzhou is Husha Lake, also called Roche Store. During the purchase of farmland, I got sick because I went to Tian Xiang. Pang An, a native of Wenmaqiao, has always been skilled in medicine and hard of hearing. I went to seek treatment. Although Anchang is deaf, he is brilliant, drawing words on paper instead of numbers.

Very profound. I said in the play: "I use my hands as my mouth and my eyes as my ears." It' s different for a while. " After his recovery, I accompanied him to travel to Qingquan Temple. The temple is two miles outside the salary gate, and there is a fountain where Wang Yi washes pens less. The water is very sweet. It faces the orchid.

Stream, stream flows west. Yu Zuoge said, "The green shoots at the foot of the mountain are shorter than the streams, the sand road between the pines is clean and mud-free, and the rain cries at dusk." Who knows that life is not short, and you can still see the flowing water in the west, so don't sing yellow chickens with white hair. "This is a Japanese drama.

Return.

There is a township sand lake in Sanli, southeast of Huangzhou, also called snail shop. I bought a few acres of land there and got sick because I went to see the quality of the fields. I heard that Pang An, a native of Maqiao, was often skilled in medicine, but he was deaf, so I went to see him.

Pang An is often deaf, but he is smarter than the average person. He writes to him with paper, and he can understand what others mean in a few words. I joked with him, "I use my hands as my mouth and your eyes as your ears." We are all contemporary freaks. "

After he recovered from his illness, he accompanied him to visit Qingquan Temple. The temple is more than two miles outside Qishui County, where there is a pen washing pool of Wang Xizhi. The water is very sweet, there is Lanxi under the pool, and the stream flows west. I wrote a poem: "The short blue buds at the foot of the mountain are immersed in the stream, and the sandy soil in the pine forest is clean and sludge-free." At night, discipline crows in the drizzle. Who says people are no longer young when they are old? You see, running water can still move westward, and the white-haired old man can still be the rooster who announces the dawn. "On this day, I got drunk and went back.

Precautions:

1. stage: check

2. Pang Anchang: Name of person

3. Wu Ying: Smart and savvy.

4. Play: Just kidding

5. do: just.

6. Alien: A strange person

Sweet: sweet

8. rustle: the sound of wind and rain

9. rules: cuckoo

The title of this article is You Sha Hu, and the focus of writing is not "you" but "feeling", which is obviously different from ordinary travel notes. First I wrote "Tian Xiang" in Husha Lake, then I got sick, so I sought medical advice and met the famous doctor Pang Anchang. After I got sick, they traveled to Qingquan Temple together, and the author wrote words to express their feelings.

The following passage shows that there is also the possibility of rejuvenation and permanent youth in life. There is no need to grieve in vain and lament that time flies. This will undoubtedly give people in adversity courage and confidence.

& lt Remember visiting Chengtian Temple > "Night Tour of Chengtian Temple" and "Tour of Hengshan Mountain"?

2. Teaching emphases and difficulties:

1, be familiar with the main idea of the article and recite the full text.

2. Learn the methods of taking notes, drawing scenes and expressing feelings in this article, and experience Su Shi's fresh, simple and concise language style.

3. Appreciate the profound connotation of scenery description and lyric sentences, and try to figure out the author's thoughts and feelings in scenery writing.

4. Sort out the author's travel order and understand his well-organized travel characteristics.

Night tour of Chengtian Temple

First of all, the author introduces:

Su Shi: (1037-101) Zi Zhan, named Dongpo lay man, was born in Meishan, Sichuan. Famous litterateur in Northern Song Dynasty. Su Xun, his father, and Su Zhe, his younger brother, are both famous political commentators, collectively known as the "Three Sus", and both belong to the "Eight Masters in Tang and Song Dynasties". He is a versatile writer, who has made outstanding achievements in poetry, ci and prose, and has a far-reaching influence on later generations. His notes are different from the general notes that objectively record people, events and things, and mostly start from the description of daily life fragments, or express feelings, or see things according to facts. Their distinctive feature in art is that they use as few words as possible to vividly and casually render a mood or a state of mind. Summarize it in four words-short and pithy, deep and heavy.

Su Shi always dared to stick to his own opinions on the political affairs of the country all his life, no matter whether his opinions were correct or not, he refused to be a smooth bureaucrat, did not blindly follow, did not practice favoritism, and always maintained the spirit of black and white, as good as appearance. When dealing with life difficulties, he is good at adjusting his mentality, treating all changes with a "normal heart" and advocating letting nature take its course to achieve psychological balance. When all kinds of misfortunes hit, he treated them with an open mind.

Second, the writing background:

In the second year of Yuanfeng, Su Shi was arrested and imprisoned because he was different from Wang Anshi who advocated political reform at that time, and wrote poems to satirize the new law. After he was released from prison, he was demoted to be the deputy envoy who should stay in Huangzhou forever. This is a job with no right, so he cultivated land in the east of the old camp in the county, sometimes playing in the mountains and rivers, singing mountains and rivers, feeling heroes and expressing his depressed mood. During this period, many touching essays and words were written, such as the famous Red Cliff Fu and Niannujiao Red Cliff Nostalgia.

Third, read the text aloud and master the pronunciation and pause of words:

1, accurate pronunciation:

Surname Zou

seaweed

2. Reading rhythm:

Those who think/get something for nothing, then/go to Chengtian Temple/find Zhang Huaimin.

Under the court/if the water is empty, the water/algae is horizontal, and the cover/bamboo and cypress are also shaded.

But/less idle people/like me.

Fourth, translate the text and master the key words:

1, words:

1 undress and want to sleep: desire, plan, will.

② Moonlight entrance: door, door.

(3) Those who have no fun in reading will go to Chengtian Temple to find Zhang Huaimin, who is still awake and walking in the atrium: reading and thinking; Then, then; Also, also; Sleep, sleep; Phase, together, together.

4 under the court, clear as water: clear and transparent.

⑤ The algae in the water cross each other, so do the shadows of bamboo and cypress. Dude, it was.

But there are few idle people like my ears: but, just; Ears, that's all.

2. Translated text:

V. Appreciating the text:

1. Briefly describe the author's writing ideas.

Clear: Want to sleep → Set out → Find Zhang Huaimin → Walk in the atrium → Draw scenery → Express feelings.

2. Divide the level of the article and summarize the meaning.

Clarity: the first layer: (the first paragraph) narrative, explaining the time and reason of walking on the moon.

The second floor: (the second paragraph) write about the scenery, and write about the scenery in the court under the moon.

The third floor: (the third paragraph) lyric, expressing feelings in the face of moonlight and bamboo and cypress.

3. What emotions did the author express in the article? What words can be expressed?

Clear: Joy in the World shows the author's excitement and joy.

"Nothing" and "Looking for Zhang Huaimin" show the author's happy mood at that time, but also reveal a sense of loneliness.

4. The article "Where there is no moon at night, where there are no bamboos and cypresses" is obviously inconsistent with reality, because you can't see the moonlight every night, and bamboos and cypresses are everywhere. How do you understand the meaning of this sentence?

Qing: Although the moonlight is not bright every night and bamboo and cypress are not everywhere, the beauty of nature is everywhere. As long as you are open-minded and indifferent to fame and fortune, you can enjoy endless fun in the beautiful nature wherever you go. The author understands this true meaning through "which night" and "where". This is also the reason why the author can remain optimistic and enterprising.

5. Language with good taste:

(1) Find out the sentences describing moonlight.

Qing: The courtyard is as empty as water, and the water is covered with bamboo and cypress.

(2) There is no word "month" in the whole sentence, and there is no word that is not written "month". What are the advantages of writing like this?

Qing: write moonlight first, "the water is empty and bright", and a pool of water is clear and transparent, which can be inferred from moonlight; Following the description of things in the water, "algae crisscross", crisscross and sway, which can be inferred from the clear moonlight; Finally, it is pointed out that "Guy Bai Zhu Ye Ying" can infer the depth of moonlight. The night tour begins in June and the month is deducted everywhere; Writing for a month is not a heavy color, but a few strokes, and the realm is exhausted; Write about the moon, unknown, starting with the shadow of bamboo and cypress. The author is undoubtedly a brilliant hand of chanting the moon, and the scene of this moonlit night is really wonderful.

6. The friendship between the author and Zhang Huaimin is not directly described, but the intimacy between the lines can be seen. Please find out the relevant words to understand.

Qing: From the article Sui went to Chengtian Temple, we can see that he went to "find" without thinking. And "I haven't slept with the people" shows that two people "know fairly well". The relationship between the two people is very close, which is fully reflected in Walking with the Atrium. At the end of the sentence, "But there are few idle people like my ears", which directly shows that the author and Zhang Huaimin are like-minded.

Subject of intransitive verbs:

The author described the beautiful scenery under the moon when he visited Chengtian Temple at night, and expressed his depressed mood that his ambition was hard to pay.