Mom said: Son, when you grow up, you will have many hurdles to cross by yourself.
Dad said: Son, there is no obstacle, as long as you find more tools.
Grandpa said: son, don't rush if you can't get through. Come back and discuss with grandpa, and grandpa will help you.
I am very happy to live in a warm family, with my mother's love, my father's support and my grandfather's help ... my childhood dream is not magical and brilliant. I live in the warmth of my family like an ordinary child in Qian Qian, live a quiet and happy life, and grow up happily under the wings of my parents. But when the wind and frost of the years took away my parents' young faces, I was pushed to the forefront of life by the torrent of reality, and I had to face it myself like an adult.
When I first quarreled with others and didn't know how to deal with it, when I regretted my failure, when I was misunderstood for helping others, when I was cheated for the first time in buying and selling things alone ... I always came home crying and asked for help as usual, but my father ignored me, my grandfather just looked at me kindly, and only my mother caressed my head warmly, which was meaningful.
After listening to my mother's words, I fell down again and again, got up again and again, treated others' criticisms kindly, treated my own failures correctly, helped others sincerely and honestly, and traded honestly with others ... I gradually realized that it might be painful for me to deal with these obstacles that were not difficult to see later independently, but the painful transformation brought me a mature understanding of life and a feeling of life. In my mother's words, I grew up with this hurdle.
However, there is a hurdle that still stands in front of me, and that is the college entrance examination! I almost tried my best to cross it, but until this morning, I was still hesitant to cross it. I'm tired of countless test paper drills. I hate the tense and lifeless competitive atmosphere. I accuse the system of selecting talents of destroying my body and mind and depriving me of the right to create freedom ... I want to betray, study my whimsy independently and accept my life freely. However, I can't: mom told me that you can do it, son; Dad accused me of avoiding being a hero; Grandpa comforted me. This is the reality in China.
I know, I've been trying, but I can't get through this. I just feel that my youth has been spent on a lot of knowledge that has nothing to do with my interests or future development. There are many concepts that I can find as long as Baidu takes a look. Why bother to remember some topics? I just need to come up with some ideas. Why practice over and over again ... I spent a lot of time understanding and creative research.
I told my mother what I thought: My mother said, son, you are right, but you have to cross the college entrance examination yourself.
I told my father what I thought: Dad said, son, there are many hurdles in life that you can avoid, but you can't get around the college entrance examination. There are ways to learn, and there are ways to take exams. If you try to find them, the college entrance examination can be easier.
I told my grandfather what I thought: Grandpa said, son, grandpa didn't have a chance to take the college entrance examination and lost the opportunity to go to college for further study. He has been very sad. There are more free academics, more systematic and profound knowledge and many accomplished experts and professors in universities. As long as you cross the college entrance examination, your interest will be developed more widely and deeply, and your creativity will be stronger.
Yes, although I have all kinds of feelings that I don't want to cross the college entrance examination, now I'm here, sitting here like 6.5438+million candidates. ...
Excellent Composition of Guangdong College Entrance Examination in 2007: Developing in Transmission
Skills become more and more exquisite in transmission, culture becomes brilliant in transmission, technology develops in transmission, and human beings grow in transmission. In our life, communication is everywhere. Parents pass on their life experiences to us, teachers pass on their cultural knowledge to us, and we always live between the receiver and the transmitter. We always refine and sublimate what we accept in our hearts, and add our own opinions. This process is development.
The development of things is inseparable from communication. We can clearly see this from the development of calligraphy, from the ancient seal script to the small seal script in Qin Ming, to the official script, regular script, running script, song style, cursive script, and finally to the calligraphy art of blooming. This process includes the inheritance and development from generation to generation. From complexity to simplicity, from ancient times to the present, generations of calligraphers, after accepting the skills handed down by their predecessors, carry forward their essence and discard their dross through their own thinking, research and innovation, and develop into good fonts from generation to generation. If they don't pass it on from generation to generation, can they raise calligraphy to such a high level in just one generation? This is obviously a fantasy.
The core of communication is development. In novels, you can often see such a passage: "Now I will teach you this set of martial arts, and I hope you will carry forward the martial arts handed down from ancestors." Although the scene of this martial arts novel is fictional, it objectively reflects that human beings hope to develop their knowledge to a new height through inheritance. Nowadays, everyone is paying attention to the Olympic Games, and everyone is looking forward to it. In fact, the Olympic spirit is also a kind of transmission, which is also for development. In the first relay, the Olympic spirit has developed from "faster, higher and stronger" to "green Olympics and people's Olympics". With the development of the times, the Olympic spirit has gradually developed into a modern social science system including peace, environmental protection, competition and ideals. In the one-stop relay, it has developed from a national sports meeting in an island country to a grand festival that will be celebrated all over the world, and even the war will stop. The transmission of each station contains the needs of development, so the core of transmission is development.
We have experienced all kinds of transmission in our life and study, and witnessed great transmission again and again. We learned how Confucianism developed from generation to generation, and also witnessed how Christianity grew in communication. Zhang Qian learned Buddhist scriptures in Kwai Tianzhu and went to the Western Regions ... This great transmission has told us time and time again that development is needed in the transmission, and development is the fundamental purpose of the transmission. So, let us carry the hope of our predecessors, use our wisdom to carry forward what our predecessors passed on to us, and leave brilliant traces in history!
Evaluation has a profound understanding that "development is inseparable from communication" and "the purpose of communication is development", from which the central argument is derived. It is innovative. In terms of content, the article uses great writers in history, such as calligraphy, Olympics, and the mission of Tang Priest. Rich in materials, profound understanding of society and life, and outstanding characteristics of argumentative essays. Of course, there are also some intellectual mistakes in calligraphy and Olympic Mathematics. A typo.
20 12 excellent composition of Guangdong college entrance examination: born at the right time
I remembered the sentence at the beginning of A Tale of Two Cities. This is the most prosperous era, this is the most depressed era. We will always wander, struggle and walk alone in the cracks of the times, and we can't find a foothold on earth or in heaven. But I think that no matter what era we live in, we should face the world and live with forgiveness and love.
Dickens, who lived in the19th century, experienced social unrest at the beginning of the reform, and the contradiction between the British aristocrats and the poor at the bottom intensified, and his assets were actively wandering in the market under a false veil. It was not a good era, in other words, it was not an era suitable for the development of literature and art. However, Dickens, who lived in that era, did not give up in despair or write his life with a pen. On the contrary, he prescribed a good prescription for Britain at that time: forgiveness and love. He wrote A Tale of Two Cities and Oliver Twist. He didn't write the history of the revolution, but he captured the atmosphere of that era. He told people with a story that revenge is over and bloodshed can only cause more bloodshed. Only forgiveness can save the world. Kindness, like Dickens, seems to be the least suitable for that dark age, but it can face it bravely, influence that society with its own strength, and make the most suitable at the most unsuitable time.
In the modern 2 1 century Iraq, I seem to see this power again? ? Kamal, an eight-year-old boy who lives in Baghdad? Hashim. He walked on a land full of sorrow and suffering. There is a poem describing the Middle East in this era. "The hearse on the hillside comes and goes day and night." For teenagers, there is no fun, no hot meals, only cigarettes and war. Many people prayed in slums and refugee camps not to be born here in the afterlife, but Kamal didn't. He took a camera to record every bit of Iraq, every warm picture: an old man sat at the door of the bookstore reading, the sun rose slowly from behind the palm trees, and there were free drinks outside the cafe. This is a bad time, and no child wants to live. But Kamal recorded this love and warmth with the power of his Weibo, encouraging every Iraqi to live bravely and hard, which is the most suitable redemption in the most unsuitable period.
We can't choose our own life or death, but how many people are trapped in their untimely lives and end up depressed. For example, Li Yu, a poet who died of national subjugation and Jia Yi, who was most worried and angry all his life, died of illness. If they can face up to their age and change things with their own strength, will history be different?
Whether we were born in prosperous times or depressed times, we should all do our part. Not a cruel force, not a ruthless force, it may be weak, accompanied by suffering, but it can bring light in the abyss and defend our love in tenacity? This is the whole interpretation of being born at the right time.
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At the beginning of the article, it is pointed out that there is an inseparable relationship between "individual" and "times" and the attitude that "individual" should adopt towards "times" and "world". This kind of thinking and viewpoint is obviously the further "thinking" of candidates on the basis of reading and understanding raw materials. Then, the article uses two examples to illustrate his point of view. Dickens, who lived in19th century, and young Iraqi photographers in 2 1 9th century realized the value of "individual" to "times" with literature and cameras respectively. In the "dark age", the unique significance of "forgiveness" and "kindness" in Dickens' works lies in the fact that "sadness is everywhere and people are in poverty", which fully, profoundly and meticulously explains the basic view that people can live a "useful life" in every period. In the last two paragraphs, the author denies the outlook on life, pointing out that since "we can't choose our own life and death", at any time, "taking out our own strength" can be said to be "born at the right time", thus strengthening the main idea of the article. It can be seen that this article is a good examination room composition, centering on the theme of "People can live a useful life in every period" from beginning to end, with prominent center, clear views, profound thoughts, full argumentation and rigorous structure.
However, there are several grammatical errors and punctuation errors in this article, and some knowledge can be expressed more accurately and rigorously.
20 15 excellent composition of Guangdong college entrance examination: open your arms and embrace nature.
A scholar knows what's going on in the world without going out. In modern society, people can know the weather tomorrow by turning on the TV. You can see the list of biological species with a click of the mouse. But my friend, can you put down your mobile phone for a while, open your arms and embrace nature?
"Everyone is not an island." John? Downey wrote in meditation. Humans evolved from apes, living by nature and living by nature. It can be said that we are children raised by nature and exquisite works of art of nature. Since the industrial revolution, science and technology have built a wall between human beings and nature. Man and nature seem to be "far away", but in fact they are only one step away.
The ancients began to embrace nature very early and set an example for modern people. Wang Wei's leisure of "I will go to the water to stop my path, and then sit and watch Yun Qi" is amazing; Perilla's "misty rain life" is admirable. Even in modern times, there are thousands of "donkey friends" in Qian Qian who are practicing and feeling the great rivers and mountains of the motherland; Haruki Murakami draws inspiration from nature through long-distance running day after day. Put on running shoes, you don't have to worry too much, you can run to embrace nature; Wear headphones, you don't have to care about worldly disputes, you are the god in your own world. As long as we have a heart close to nature, it is really not difficult for us to embrace nature with open arms.
Embrace nature, you can gain a peace and feel a happiness. Look at the sky and clouds, measure the rain and snow, and don't care about the insurmountable eyesight, because where the eyesight is, there is the most beautiful place. Climbing high and looking far, what you see is the lofty sentiments all over the mountains, which is a kind of "small luck". How can this little certain happiness be felt by sitting at home alone?
There is a poem in Gu Cheng: "The grass is seeding/the wind is shaking the grass/we stand quietly/don't talk/it's beautiful." In fact, we embrace nature. Why do we need to know the names of flowers and birds? Isn't it beautiful to listen to the birds singing softly and smell the flowers quietly? The grass grows and the warbler flies, and the clouds roll and the clouds are comfortable. Nature has its own beauty. Branches and leaves wither and the seasons change, and nature has its own growth law. As long as there are eyes that find beauty, what is not beautiful in life? When is nature not beautiful?
It is true that nature is beautiful, but we should also cherish it and never let the beauty within our reach become unattainable. Chai Jing's Under the Dome aroused people's awareness of environmental protection. Last year's "APEC Blue" also showed us the government's determination to govern the environment. I believe that what we embrace must be pure nature.
"Harmony between Heaven and Man" has always been advocated by Confucianism. Friend, please turn off the TV for the time being and slow down the mouse. Open your arms and embrace nature.
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The argument of this argumentative paper is "open your arms and embrace nature". "Embrace with open arms" is the way to perceive nature; "Embracing with open arms" also reflects the eager yearning for nature-embracing with open arms is naturally not far away. The core word of the composition materials of the provincial college entrance examination is "perception of nature". This paper expounds closely on "understanding nature" and writes out the way and effect of "understanding nature". The content of the article accords with the meaning of the question.
20 12 excellent composition of Shanghai college entrance examination: breaking the cocoon and reborn
Stanford University in the United States once conducted an experiment to test the IQ of newly enrolled students and then randomly divide them into classes. After a stage, things developed unexpectedly. Some talented people who were put into ordinary classes fell into mediocrity, while some people with medium qualifications who were put into gifted classes made great achievements. Why is this? (Typical cases lead to deep thinking)
It turns out that many gifted students take it for granted that the placement is based on test scores, thus questioning their abilities and subconsciously walking into the cocoon where they are labeled. The word "I can't" is like the spell of Tang Priest, which obliterates the glimmer in their hearts and binds all the possibilities. (Analyze the reasons and pave the way for the following discussion. )
On the other side of the world, there is such a clumsy person who broke free from the shackles gracefully and resolutely began an unknown journey. He is Paul Cézanne, the father of modern painting, a second-rate painter who was rejected by the Paris Academy of Fine Arts for "abusing color".
Diligent and eager to learn, he likes painting, but his talent is average, and his father who tries to get him into the financial industry is determined not to follow; Impressionism swept the world, but he didn't want to give up a glimmer of hope in his heart and wanted to explore a new road, even if it brought endless ridicule. (Give a powerful example)
However, hundreds of years later, no one can forget that there is such a monument in the history of art that he, Paul Cézanne, broke free from the only bondage in the world and started the era. In fact, what makes us lose our way is never the peak of a thousand miles or the valley of a hundred miles, but the inferiority and cowardice hidden in our hearts. After it, life is a billion possibilities. You know, gifted wizards have always been a minority, and most of the people who are vacillating in life today are us. The difference is that they have confidence in themselves and persistent pursuit. (The analysis is very pertinent)
No one is born mediocre, only those who are willing to be mediocre. (epigram! )
"If you really want to be a writer, write carefully every day, but your classmates don't want to read it, and no one reads it online, and no one in the publishing house wants to publish your work. At this time, you have to think in your heart, I will stick to it, and one day applause will ring. " Giddens Ko, a writer who became an instant hit in those years, looked at the road he had traveled and smiled heroically. It is hard to imagine that such a sunny expression will appear on the face of a person who has written more than 60 books but has been silent and nameless, as if talking silently. This case is vivid and convincing. Excellent language. )
If you don't cherish your own dim light, what can you expect from a bright world? If you dare not take a step in your own life, what can you expect from the vast sky? (two rhetorical questions, powerful and true! )
Sometimes, a person must break out of the cocoon in the process of falling, and then grow wings; Sometimes, a person must open his heart and open up a whole new world for himself. A winding path leads to a secluded place. I didn't get to the point until I got here. )
You know, life is too short, don't use other people's eyes to prove your existence; Life is long enough for you to express your legend. The language of poetry is full of philosophy. )
The brief comment of this article focuses on how to treat your life vividly. The title itself creates a suspense, then throw it away and explain it. Tell a famous psychological case first, then tell a story of a western painter and three vivid stories of modern writers, interspersed with epigrams. Finally, it came naturally. In a few words, less is better than more. I'm afraid it's rare for exam articles to be written so easily and interestingly.