Cut into the angle: stick to your dreams
Dreams may come true.
Senior three, class 25, Roy Xu
Bi Shumin said: "We can be imperfect, but we work hard." Perhaps some people are still confused on the road of life, as if the sky is full of haze. But some people have found the sun named "Dream", which shows the obstacles on the way forward and the direction of progress. Fan, a vegetable vendor in Zhejiang, is 52 years old, but he still pursues his dream firmly. Although reality sometimes traps you, as long as you have the center to stick to your dreams, the light of your dreams will shine into reality. (center)
"Either die fast or live better." Liu Wei, who lost his hands due to electric shock since childhood, decided to choose the latter. It is difficult for a normal person to learn the piano, but he finished it with his feet and was very successful. Once he practiced until his feet were covered with blisters, and he never gave up. In the end, he won the championship on the stage of China's Got Talent and realized his dream of "music". Real talent is to show your talent with your life. He is never afraid of the shackles brought by reality. He played the song of life with his feet, stuck to his dream, and the light of his dream shone into his reality. (parameter 1)
Dreams are more powerful because they grow against the wind. Xiong Suqiong, general manager of Shenzhen's largest five-star hotel. But who knows, before that, she was just a female worker who brushed the toilet. She did not fear the reality, and obtained a master's degree in hotel management through unremitting efforts. Finally, she walked all the way to the present and achieved the enviable achievements of others at this time. She said: a toilet worker also has his own dream. She is flying against the wind, jumping over the reality that blocks her, and the light of her dream shines into her reality. . (argument 2)
Suffering is the promotion ladder for winners, the baptism water for believers and the bottomless abyss for losers. Those who have the courage to stick to their dreams will despise difficulties and live like sunflowers. Van Gogh, a painter who painted in misery, may have taken everything away from him, but his heart is always longing for the sunshine of dreams, like a proud sunflower, always chasing the sun. Van Gogh was never afraid of the darkness of reality, so the light of dreams entered his color world. (argument 3)
I always think of Bing Xin's words: "A successful flower, people are only surprised by her present brilliance!" However, at the beginning, her buds were soaked with tears of struggle and shed blood rain of sacrifice. " What a powerful sentence. Is it wrong to dream about us? (famous saying, quoted argument)
We keep writing about our lives, whether noble or humble, wonderful or ordinary. But as long as we stick to our dreams, everyone's life can shine. (Personal View Deepening Center)
Like many of my peers, I was struggling in my senior year. Every morning, when the hazy fog turns the city into a Wang Yang, we start sailing. We live on a huge ship, and every day we encounter big winds and waves. But I am not afraid, because I have been sticking to my dream, and the light of my dream will shine into my reality.
Score: 46 points.
The title of the composition is quoted from the film "Dreams May Come True" directed and performed by Xu, and the song "Dreams May Come True" was sung for a while. Personally, I think it should be an argumentative essay with clear center, rigorous interpretation, appropriate metaphor, clear personal views, rich feelings and thoughts. In addition, prose can quote materials or not. Argumentative papers must quote materials.
Model essay 2:
Cut into the angle: stick to your dreams
Stick to your dream
Fan, a 52-year-old vegetable vendor in Zhejiang Province, only attended primary school for three years and worked as an auditor in Peking University to revise the ancient books of his ancestors. Maybe there are countless people who stick to their dreams like him, because they all have a dream in their hearts. Maybe to satisfy your vanity. No matter what kind of people, as long as they stick to their dreams and have the courage and perseverance to realize them, they will all succeed.
Liu Ye: The Armless China's Got Talent
Liu Wei, a pianist who lost his arms. Just to stick to his piano dream, he learned to play the piano with his feet and kept working hard. He practiced piano for more than 7 hours every day, and in the last year, his piano level exceeded Grade 7, becoming the champion of China's Got Talent. He said: "Everyone should have a dream; And always stick to your dream and try every means to realize it. There are only two ways before me, either to die quickly or to live wonderfully. No one stipulates that you must play the piano by hand. At least I have perfect feet. " Yes, stick to your piano dream. So, as long as you stick to your dream and have the courage and perseverance to realize it, you can also succeed!
Natalie: A mermaid with one leg.
Natalie of the South African national swimming team suffered a car accident during training and had to amputate her leg. Having no legs is a fatal blow to swimmers. But in order to stick to her dream of participating in the Olympic Games, she started training again three months later. She waved her arms and splashed water, persisted in her fiery Olympic dream, and finally became the only two athletes who participated in both the Olympic Games and the Paralympic Games in Beijing in 2008, and successfully realized her Olympic dream. It was Natalie's insistence on the dream of the Olympic Games that made her successful.
Zhang Jiahuan: A girl in a wheelchair.
"I have been very lucky. The disease just tied me to a wheelchair and left me with a beautiful voice, which made me realize my dream. " This is an autumn rhyme poem by 17 year old girl Zhang Jiahuan. Suffering from congenital muscular dystrophy since childhood, she can't play and run on the grass like children of the same age. However, because he insisted on singing his dream, Zhang Jiahuan paid unbearable pain to ordinary people. She learned to swim to exercise her vital capacity. Finally, she traveled around the world in a wheelchair and brought her singing to every corner of the world. It is because of her persistence in her singing dream that Zhang Jiahuan realized her own value.
Countless disabled people and determined people told us about their experiences of persisting in their dreams and constantly striving to realize them. Imagine: What can't we healthy people do? (47)
Model essay 3:
Cut into the angle: stick to your dreams
It's not too late to be kind.
In universities such as Peking University and Tsinghua, thousands of students sit in the same classroom with elite students from all over the world every day. Many of them are over 50 years old. They stick to their dreams and beliefs and study day after day. Maybe people will laugh at them: they are over 500 years old and it is too late to study. In fact, it is not too late for the heart to belong.
It's not too late to be kind. There was a period of melee in Japan, when Tokugawa Ieyasu was in his 60s, he made up his mind to unify the whole country and establish the Edo era. At that time, his name was Noshin Oda, and he was an ally of Tokugawa Ieyasu. However, due to the mutiny of his subordinates, Nobuyoshi Oda failed to complete his hegemony and was beheaded. As a result, the national war resumed, and Tokugawa Ieyasu, then 60, was determined to finish the unfinished business of his allies. It is not too late for the Tokugawa shogunate he established to unify Japan with strong military strength. At the age of 60, Tokugawa Ieyasu sent troops to conquer the world, unify Japan and establish the Edo era. Do you think it is too late for them to take part in the study?
It's never too late to have a heart. Jiang Ziya didn't help King Wu until he was over 80 years old. On the river bank, Jiang Ziya, who is over 80 years old, is still fishing straight, waiting for Zhou Wuwang to "take the bait". Finally, Zhou Wuwang came. Although he was 80 years old, he was invited to help him destroy the Shang and Zhou Dynasties. Jiang Ziya was appointed Prime Minister at the age of 80, and helped King Wu destroy the Shang and Zhou Dynasties, established the Zhou Dynasty, and saved the people from the mire. Because Jiang Ziya loves the whole world, it helps King Wu's ambition, and at the age of 80, he can help King Wu unify the whole country. Are you too late? It's never too late to have a heart.
It's never too late to have a heart. Yugong can still move mountains to learn wisdom. Under the Taihang Mountain, Zhisou said, "It is too expensive, but it shows its ignorance." Nearly a hundred years old, Gong Yu still led his children and grandchildren to move mountains, day after day, year after year, and finally moved the sky, so that the immortals moved away from the two mountains and opened up a way for their children and grandchildren to go out. Gong Yu has a heart for children and grandchildren, and a persistent heart. He firmly believes that as long as he persists, he can succeed, so he moved mountains with his children when he was nearly 100 years old. Zhisou said he was ignorant, but he believed in himself and finally moved to heaven. It's never too late to have a heart. Gong Yu is almost one hundred years old, but he still insists. Compared with him, are those ordinary students still in time?
Tokugawa Ieyasu conquered the world at the age of 60, Jiang Ziya helped King Wu at the age of 80, and Gong Yu moved mountains at the age of nearly 100. Who dares to say that he is old and it is too late to do anything? In fact, it is not too late for the heart to belong. As long as you want to do it, you can pursue your dreams like those older listeners. (45 points)
Model essay 4:
Penetration angle: perseverance
Perseverance is the guarantee of success.
Fan, a vegetable vendor in Zhejiang, who is over 500 years old, became an auditor in Peking University. What makes him prefer to live an embarrassing life and be criticized, but also insist on his dreams? In my opinion, it is perseverance. Can he succeed? I think so. Because perseverance is the guarantee of success.
Perseverance can turn the impossible into reality. Many people may not be optimistic about Fan, but throughout the ages, many people like him have succeeded by perseverance. Look at how Liu Bang, a street hooligan, started the inheritance of a great man, how Liu Bei, who sold straw sandals, became king in Shu, how Zhu Yuanzhang, a farmer, established the Ming Dynasty, and how Obama, a street hooligan, was elected as the first black president of the United States. They all used this perseverance to turn these impossibilities into reality. It is perseverance that makes them strong in difficulties, Fan Guoliang.
Perseverance can make people overcome many difficulties and reach heights that ordinary people can't reach. Qian Weichang is such a person. He was admitted to Tsinghua University with excellent results in liberal arts. When he learned that the country wanted to rejuvenate the country through science and technology, he resolutely abandoned literature and science and knew nothing about physics. Physics is inscrutable, and it is conceivable that it was difficult for China to make achievements in this field at that time. But with his tenacious perseverance, he died nine times for the country, but he did not regret it. With this tenacious perseverance, he overcame many difficulties and eventually became an international master of physics, making important contributions to the country. Perseverance makes him stand out from the crowd, from a lower starting point than being beaten to a height that ordinary people can't reach.
Perseverance is an important guarantee for a country's strong development. After the founding of the new country, many places are still in their infancy. Faced with the restrictions of foreign powers, we overcame all difficulties with perseverance and developed satellite missiles. With perseverance, Yuan Longping worked day and night in the fields and developed hybrid rice under the scorching sun. Tianhe No.1 scientific research team is pioneering and enterprising with tenacious perseverance. After decades of hard work, they finally succeeded in developing Tianhe-1 supercomputer with the world's first computing speed, breaking the monopoly position of the United States in this respect. China has made achievements in all aspects, relying on the spirit of perseverance.
We will naturally encounter all kinds of difficulties in our study. As long as we have strong perseverance, we will be able to overcome difficulties and climb the mountain of college entrance examination. Please don't doubt that perseverance is the guarantee of success. With perseverance, we can turn the impossible into reality, overcome many difficulties, move towards success and make ourselves stronger. (46 points)
Model essay 5:
Persevere in your dreams.
In February this year, 52-year-old vegetable vendor Fan came to Beijing to work as an auditor in Peking University. Like thousands of audit students, he lived an embarrassing life in Beijing and persisted in their dream of revising the ancient books of his ancestors. Old vegetable vendors are holding on to their dreams with perseverance, so should we, holding on to our dreams with our beautiful youth and strong perseverance.
( 1)
Deaf, he didn't complain, didn't give up, didn't sigh. On the contrary, he loves life more than most people. He acts silently with strong perseverance, grasps the throat of life and guards his deep dreams. Finally, he became a great musician. He is Beethoven. It is strong perseverance that makes him full of confidence in the future, and it is strong perseverance that inspires him in music creation; It is strong perseverance that makes him stick to his inner dream and make the dream tree blossom beautiful flowers. Beethoven is still like this, then we must work hard and stick to our dreams with strong perseverance.
(2)
Defeated, he didn't commit suicide on the Wujiang River like Xiang Yu, nor did he indulge in debauchery like Li Yu. He put down the dignity of the king of a country, and was willing to be a pawn of Fu Cha, trying to please Fu Cha, so as to make a comeback in the future. In countless supercilious glances and ridicule, he did not fear or flinch, but still supported himself with perseverance and guarded his dream of rejuvenating the country. Many things happen. Finally, the myth that "three thousand Yue families can swallow Wu" was created, and the country was successfully restored. He is Gou Jian. He warned us with actions that we should never lose our dreams and persevere.
(3)
Sima Qian, who was in prison, did not commit suicide by taking poison, was not depressed, and did not forget his heavy responsibility. He suffered a double blow both physically and psychologically, but he never bowed to his fate. He still stuck to his dream and devoted his life to the completion of Historical Records. If Sima Qian hadn't stuck to his dream at that time, then we wouldn't have seen the masterpiece Historical Records. His example tells us that it takes great perseverance to protect dreams.
Whether Beethoven, Gou Jian, who was deaf, or Sima Qian, who was imprisoned, they all gritted their teeth at critical moments, held on to their dreams with strong perseverance, and performed magnificent lives!
(Score: 49)
Model essay 6:
Cut-in angle: enjoy the process
The scenery on the road is also very important.
In order to restore ancient books, a 52-year-old vegetable vendor went to Peking University as an auditor after only reading for three years, and the way out was slim. Is it courage and perseverance, or an unrealistic and stupid fantasy? Many people disagree. However, as far as I am concerned, why must the behavior of the elderly be branded as successful or not? You know, success is important, but the scenery on the road to success is not important?
Success is a harvest, and the scenery on the road to success is another harvest after failure. After listening to a story, the little white rabbit found that he didn't eat fish. Practically speaking, the white rabbit is a failure. Because it didn't get the result it deserved-getting food. But did the white rabbit really get nothing? No, it saw the scenery by the river, she enjoyed the tranquility when fishing, and it knew the feeling of surprise when the fish was hooked. Aren't these the important gains of the little white rabbit? You can't succeed, but you can see the scenery that other rabbits can't! Isn't this a wonderful thing?
Success is the result of hard work, and the scenery on the road is the reward after your failure. Super girl, once popular all summer. I don't know how many girls with dreams jumped into that arena. How many people can succeed? Just when people blamed those girls, they thought of the unknown girl and said, "Although I spent so much money, I still don't regret it. I will come again next time. " I applaud the lady, yes, no regrets! Even if you don't succeed, you still don't regret it! Must it be solved? It is enough to work hard for your dreams. Sweat, tears, crying faces and smiling faces in the process of hard work are the most beautiful scenery. When she is old, she can still have those beautiful scenery and recall those shining past. At this time, the smile on her face is no less than the smile after success.
What did you get from your success? After the failure, what changed because of the scenery on the road. I read a passage in Reader: "Maybe when they grow up, they will become grocery store owners who can play clarinet, vendors who can draw pictures and beautiful scenic spots on the road." Yes, not everyone who learns musical instruments will become Beethoven, not everyone who learns painting will become Leonardo da Vinci, and not everyone who learns dancing will become a flamingo. However, even if it is not successful, it will be different after seeing the scenery on the road. Also a lot more courage, more confidence, a little more indifferent, successful people get applause from flowers, unsuccessful people get different changes after seeing the scenery.
Success is very important, so is scenery. Don't stare at the top, look at the scenery on the roadside! In this way, even if you fail, you will have different good memories.
Walking in the streets of Beijing, an old vegetable vendor was holding a tattered old book and reading it carefully in the sun. The wind is blowing. Who says it's not beautiful? (48 points)
Model essay 7:
Cut into the angle: stick to your dreams
Stick to your dreams.
Thousands of auditees in Peking University, Tsinghua and other universities are stubbornly sticking to their dreams. Even if their dreams are difficult to realize, even if they are embarrassed again, even if their prospects are slim, they still insist and have no regrets. It is precisely because of these people who persist in their dreams that many successful people have emerged in society. Persisting in dreams is a stepping stone to success.
It takes courage to stick to your dreams. Li Dazhao, a famous revolutionary and revolutionary martyr, stuck to his dream of realizing productism all his life. Even in prison, he was calm and humble, and even if he was executed, he was fearless. How generous it is! It is because of his persistence in his dreams that he has the courage not to be afraid of strong enemies. If he didn't have the courage to persist, how could he choose to devote himself? Maybe he will betray the * * * production party and go to the enemy camp, or he was just an ordinary person, so there would be no such heroic deeds. In addition to Li Dazhao, Xia was also a courageous man. He died as bravely as Li Dazhao. Although * * * productism is still far away, the victory of the * * * production party has become a reality. So it takes courage to stick to your dreams.
It takes perseverance to stick to your dreams. The famous dancer Tai Lihua is physically disabled, but she still insists on her dream of becoming a dancer. The difficulties in the training process may have made her miserable, but she overcame all the difficulties with tenacious perseverance and finally performed a perfect "Guanyin with a Thousand Hands" on the stage. If she has no perseverance, she will choose to give up when she encounters some difficulties, there will be no theory of persisting in her dreams, and there will be no indomitable Guanyin. It is because of Wei Liu's tenacious perseverance that he can realize his dream of music, live a wonderful life and get the title of "China's Got Talent". It is precisely because of Sima Qian's perseverance that he can endure the humiliation of imprisonment, realize his dream of writing books and leave valuable wealth for future generations. So it takes perseverance to stick to your dreams.
Persisting in dreams requires unremitting efforts. Li Shizhen persisted in her dream of writing medical books. Through unremitting efforts, he climbed mountains and mountains, braved difficulties and tried drugs himself. Finally, the famous Compendium of Materia Medica was produced. He insisted on his dream to Mei and became an all-round fighter. He worked tirelessly and trained hard, and finally became a soldier king. So it takes unremitting efforts to stick to your dreams.
Stick to your dreams and work hard for them, and the door to success will open for you. (score: 5 1)
Model essay 8: Narration
Cut into the angle: stick to your dreams
Stick to your dreams.
"The stage is as big as the heart".
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"How big the heart is, how big the stage is" is the advertising slogan of CCTV, and it is also what Grandpa often uses to encourage me. Yes, as long as you dare to think, as long as you can persist, you can dance your most beautiful dance on the stage of life.
I am a lively and cheerful girl, and I especially like basketball since I was a child. My dream is to be a sports reporter, who can send the most timely and fresh sports information to the audience. There was a class reunion, and everyone had a heated discussion about their ideals. When others think about my ideal, I proudly say, "I want to be an excellent sports reporter, so that you can see my figure on the sports channel, and then you will all be my audience." Just as she was immersed in a beautiful vision for the future, a girl disdained to say, "You still want to be a sports reporter like that, with such a short figure and poor English. What can you do to compete with others? " I think you should give up early. "I was particularly sad to hear her words and ran home.
When I got home, I closed the door and cried alone. Grandpa ran over and asked me what was wrong. I cried and told him what had happened. Grandpa touched my head and said with a loud smile, "Silly granddaughter, you were defeated so soon?" ? Didn't you say you must be a sports reporter anyway? Do you still remember the slogan of CCTV? ""The stage is as big as the heart. " "Silly granddaughter, as long as you persist and work hard, you will definitely realize your dream." "But Grandpa, my figure is so short and my English is so poor." I said sadly. Grandpa said, "Silly girl, you are short. You can be more flexible than others. You can make up for your poor English. At the beginning, many people said that Deng Yaping was short and unfit to play table tennis, but didn't Deng Yaping become a world champion through her own efforts? "
After listening to grandpa's words, I was suddenly enlightened. Yes! As long as I dare to think, as long as I can persist and work hard, I will succeed! From then on, I stopped paying attention to what others thought of me. I just work hard for my goal and fight for it.
"The stage is as big as the heart." No matter how many difficulties and setbacks there are in the future, I will stubbornly stick to my dream. Just like Fan, a 52-year-old vegetable vendor in Zhejiang, and like many students in Tsinghua and Peking University, no matter how bleak their future is, they stubbornly stick to their dreams. "The stage is as big as the heart." Friends, have you remembered this sentence?