Revision of counselors' practical writing manuscripts

1. How to modify the manuscript depends on the theory of literary criticism.

If a famous teacher is about your age, it is better to invite him than to invite someone older than you. The manuscripts of people with inferiority are getting worse and worse, and only those with rich imagination are getting better and better.

One. The manuscript style is 1.

Popular, popular is to make people understand. Every time Bai Juyi writes a poem, he must recite it to the old woman until she understands it.

2。 Elegant.

Elegance is not made. But what Si Kongtu said: "The image beyond the image means the unexpected" Conclusion: The revision of the manuscript must be based on the style of the manuscript.

Two. Argumentative paper revision 1.

The revision is to highlight the argument. Because some authors have the habit of writing while thinking, the argument is not prominent.

It's time to change. 2。

Argumentation: If the argument is insufficient or outdated, it should be adjusted. 3。

Argument: revision is for the sake of logical rigor. Three.

Revision of narrative 1 The main line and the dark line are connected together, and the two lines require seamless alternation.

2。 Is the order of narration properly arranged?

3。 The application of six elements in narration.

Of course, not all narratives must conform to the six elements, but the six elements are a standard of narrative quality. Four.

Poetry revision 1 modern poetry revision.

Make sure the theme is more prominent. Language is more concise.

2。 The revision of metrical poems has changed the sentences of solitary, flat, solitary, total loss, solitary, three-tailed and three-tailed into homophones.

3。 Artistic conception (1) Poet's mood and connoisseur's realm Miracle wrote a poem "Early Plum", which blossomed in Qiancun, Zita Law last night.

Zheng Gu said: Whether it is early or not, it is early. Miracle changed this poem to "In the old village of Zita Law, a branch blossomed last night". In fact, this is unnecessary.

Zheng Gu's mind is not the mind of Miracle. One branch is the realm of the heart, and several branches are the realm of objective reality.

Wang Anshi's "A few plums in a corner, cold ling alone, knowing far away that it is not snow, because there is fragrance" wrote the light joy in my heart. The synaesthesia of poetry is "Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan". Why did Wang Anshi choose the word "green" instead of twenty words? This is the synaesthesia of poetry.

The word green is used here as an adjective and a verb. "As you said, love touches sadness with happiness". How can happiness touch sadness?

This is metonymy and synaesthesia. (3) Usually, when writing poems, metaphors should be used to modify them from ontology and vehicle.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) Modification of novel and drama 1 The cause, process and result of the plot of the characters in the novel background are all modified according to these links. 2。

Drama should be revised in theme, style and time. Six.

Document modification: 1. Change the dialect into Putonghua 2.

Change Mandarin into a dialect. Seven. Modify 1 according to frequently asked questions.

Separated but insurmountable. It's beside the point.

"Write a thousand words, pull Wan Li" article taboo, taboo will be changed. 2。

The sentence is not fluent, and the sentence is not fluent, which affects readability and must be changed. 3。

The layout of the article is unreasonable and the manuscript will be discounted. The use of long and short sentences adds charm to the manuscript.

4。 Grammar.

There must be laws to modify sick sentences, but there is no law to modify them. I suggest reading Wen Xin Diao Long to discuss literary criticism and China linguistics.

2. How to modify the composition of the article can be divided into two steps: the first step is to "find fault"; The second step is "operation". "finding fault" can be checked from the following aspects according to the writing requirements: first, check whether the examination questions are correct; Second, check whether the center is clear; Third, check whether the materials are typical; Fourth, check whether the content is specific; Fifth, check whether the level is clear; Sixth, check whether the sentence is fluent; Seventh, check whether punctuation marks are clear. That is, to correct the problems existing in the article. According to the size of the original "fault", it can be divided into two types: large reform and small reform. Major changes refer to the defects of the whole article, such as deviation from the theme, unclear center and improper details. , need to be rewritten. Minor changes mainly correct mistakes in language and writing by adding, deleting, modifying and adjusting. Specifically, "adding" means enriching the content of the article and increasing it. Make repetitive content and wordy sentences concise and clear. "Change" is to make unreasonable and unsmooth sentences reasonable and fluent. "Tone" means making necessary adjustments to the unreasonable structure and incorrect word order of the article. In addition to mastering the above methods, we should also pay attention to the following points: First, the combination of the whole and the part. The whole and the part are interrelated and inseparable. To modify words and phrases, we should proceed from the needs of the full text and analyze them in the specific language environment of the whole article or paragraph. Second, we should combine revision with observation. The problems found in the revision may not be solved by "reasonable imagination", such as the content is not specific and the materials are inaccurate, and we often need further observation. Only by further investigation, observation and analysis can we collect more specific and accurate materials. Thus solving the problems of inaccuracy and non-specificity. Third, the combination of self-revision and asking people to help revise the article should be based on self-revision. But when you encounter problems that you can't solve in the process of revision, you can also ask others to help you revise them. If you can read the manuscript to others, ask them for their comments, so that you can be inspired and then modify it. Before writing, students should always consider what to write, how to write and so on. What materials to choose to express this center, how to arrange the structure of the article, etc. And draw a blueprint for the composition to be written. As the saying goes, "sharpening a knife does not mistake a woodcutter." In this process, students should think carefully and pay attention to constantly revising their ideas and writing plans. It is best to list the revised outline while thinking, so as to make the thinking clearer. It is difficult to write a good composition in a hurry. Writing and revising, and finishing the next draft. In other words, in writing, if you find something wrong with what you have written, or realize that the original idea is insufficient, you should correct it in time. Of course, you should pay attention to writing in one go, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't revise it during writing. Sometimes when you are writing, you will find that there is something wrong with the original idea and you need to modify it. After writing the revised first draft of the composition, students should read it carefully line by line to see if there are any punctuation errors. Are there any typos, improper words, and incorrect sentences? You should also consider whether the ideological content is healthy, whether the content is specific, whether it is centered and organized, and make all-round corrections. For example, if a product is inspected in the factory and a composition is well written, it is very important to correct it at this time, and we must not be careless.

3. How to format this format with WORD (with pictures)? Open Word, and then right-click the toolbar-select Drawing. So the drawing toolbar appears at the bottom of the window. At this point, you first click the text box button on the toolbar, and then a dotted box "Create graphics here" will appear in the blank space of WORD. Then drag the box with the mouse and the box can be copied. Make several copies. Next, select the arrow tool on the toolbar and draw arrows between boxes. The curved arrow is located in AutoShape on the Drawing toolbar. Click AutoShapes-Connectors-The second in the second row is. Then drag it between the boxes you want to connect. Finally, enter the text you want in the box.

4. How to write a good official document 1. Diligence in writing articles is not innate, and the best hand depends on practice. "Literature is precious, and the essence lies in practice". Tang Biao in the Qing Dynasty said in his book Reading Composition Spectrum: "It is better to write one article than to read ten articles", "Scholars only like reading more, but don't like writing more articles; I don't know that reading more is borrowing people's time, and doing more is really for yourself. Its benefits are far from perfect. " Therefore, we should not only read more books, but also practice hard. Any good article cannot be separated from hard practice. The writing ability and skills of official documents and other manuscripts are also tempered from hard practice, and diligence can make up for it. Only by writing more and practicing constantly can practice make perfect and write freely. "We want to write, but we just don't know where to start." In my opinion, we might as well start with "matchbox" and "tofu block", sort out the minutes of the meeting and reflect the situation, so as to write frequently, write more and stick to it for a long time. For example, we can start with notices, memorabilia, meeting minutes and other styles. , the content is relatively simple, the structure is simple, the length is short, and gradually turn to work opinions and opinions. We can also start with stylistics with strong standardization and high degree of model, such as methods, regulations and regulations, and gradually expand to non-standardized and model stylistics such as leadership speeches, research reports and empirical materials. You can also start from your familiar fields and gradually expand to other fields, so that you can give full play to your advantages in knowledge and business and enhance your writing confidence. There is a saying like this: "always look at your heart, writing often gives birth to flowers." By practicing writing, we can exercise our thinking ability and broaden our knowledge. As long as we persist in practicing writing diligently, are not afraid of failure, and are good at summing up experiences and lessons, we will gradually get started and our writing level will certainly improve gradually. Second, is there a "secret" that can be used for reference and improve the level of official document writing? Our answer is no. So, are there any rules and methods to follow in official document writing? Our answer is yes again. Everything has its inherent connection, that is, regularity. Any material product and spiritual product has its own unique methods and skills, and official document writing is no exception. To improve the writing ability of official documents, we should consciously read some model essays for reference. Only when we read more and get familiar with it can we gradually get familiar with the tone and practice of the article. For example, at the beginning of summary, report and presentation materials, we usually summarize our achievements with "good economic and social benefits" or "all work shows a good trend". In the news reports featuring leaders, there are usually statements such as "* * * leaders personally attended the meeting and delivered important speeches" and "* * * leaders took pains (according to the weather changes, they can be changed to" braved the heavy rain ","braved the cold "and" braved the scorching sun ") to express their condolences. When analyzing problems, we usually use the phrase "While conscientiously summing up our work, we should clearly see that there are still some outstanding contradictions and problems" to enhance our sense of crisis. Similar sentences include: opportunities and challenges coexist, pressure and difficulties coexist; In the end, it is usually "to push all work to a new level with more high morale, more full enthusiasm, more pragmatic style and more diligent work" to boost the morale of cadres and workers and enhance their confidence. But we should also realize that reading is reading other people's books, and writing is writing our own articles; Reference only draws nutrition from it and becomes its own thing after digestion; Instead of copying mechanically, imitating plagiarism and drawing a gourd ladle. Third, being willing to think about theoretical viewpoints is the lifeblood, life and value of the article. Therefore, we must pay attention to the ideological nature of the materials and the correctness of the views. Only from the height of theory and the overall situation, pay attention to the combination of theory and practice, and extract a clear point of view, the article will have a direction, depth and strong guidance. Only in this way can you have vitality. Deep and thorough views and flashing thoughts come from deep thinking after mastering objective things. As the saying goes, "Think a thousand times". So before writing an article, you must wait and see, get familiar with your heart, concentrate your thoughts and thoughts and think carefully. Only in this way can you turn your thoughts and materials into systematic language and the systematic language into written words. Therefore, before writing official documents, when writing articles, we should improve our ability to plan the layout of articles. The most fundamental thing is to exercise our thinking seriously and strengthen the training of logic and order of thinking activities. Mao Zedong once said: "Writing an article should be logical, that is, we should pay attention to the structure of the whole article and the whole speech, have the relationship between the beginning, the middle and the end, and have internal relations, so as not to conflict with each other." Only by seriously thinking about the content can we plan the layout of the article. Only in this way can you write a well-structured, logical and coherent article. You should make an outline or memorize it. This is an important process of drafting official documents. Writing a manuscript according to the outline has many advantages: it can help you organize the materials; Can make you think more thoughtfully; In order to avoid writing while thinking, it is thankless to write. The outline must be made on the basis of grasping the leadership's intention. The more detailed the outline, the better. Don't just list big topics, but also list small topics. Even if you write several layers of meaning in each small topic, you should consider which layer of meaning is put in which topic. For shorter official documents, you don't have to make an outline, but you must make a good draft. However, we should also understand the layout of the manuscript. With a good outline or a good draft, the article is half finished, and the drafting of official documents will be handy. Fourth, there are usually two basic requirements for choosing materials to write official documents: "going to heaven and going to the ground." Landing means mastering information and basing on reality. The document focuses on practicality, which is the first and most essential feature of the document, and also the starting point and destination of the document. Therefore, before writing an official document, we must master a large number of information materials, and after identification, screening, analysis and synthesis, we will transform the relevant materials into the contents of the official document. Collecting materials requires good materials.