Writing an article is too subtle.
The center is prominent, the language is clear and the writing is concise. Although the article needs to be revised to increase literary talent, it is not satisfactory. Try to tell things with the least number of words, take fewer detours and say less useless words. Generally speaking, the style of writing will not be stereotyped in the third grade, so it is suggested to practice writing with expository writing as the main part and argumentative writing as the auxiliary part. In the eyes of scholars, these two kinds of characters are as common as the regular script of classmates' calligraphy, and it is difficult to write well.