Comments that know calligraphy and cursive script add a lot of points! How is this calligraphy written?

I can only say from my aesthetic point of view: well, the overall feeling is not bad, and it needs to work hard, and the roundness and strength of lines need to be greatly improved, but some words in cursive script are not written like this, such as "four, sea", and cursive script has its own way of writing. The seal also looks proper, the fluency is not very high, or the words are taken care of. It would be nice to play as an amateur. If you are a professional, you still have to work hard. Lack of theoretical knowledge, learning more, learning more brushwork, that's all.