Very smooth. Well, not bad!
First, stay calm when writing.
Second, you can use scrap newspapers, etc., and write it twice.
Third, for such large characters, it is best to use a slightly thicker brush, such as a small fighting brush (also called a grasping brush). This will make the strokes fuller.
Fourth, a few words:
The four strokes of the word "天" are too loose and do not show the solemnity of the celestial phenomena.
The first stroke of the word Tao is too small.
The word "pay" (cursive font is also required) is missing a horizontal line at the bottom on the left side; the writing method of the word "zhou" on the right needs to be changed.
For the word Qin, the first three horizontal strokes on the left side can be abbreviated, but they must be felt by others; for the word force on the right, the strength is not strong enough, and it seems to have no power. You can also make the stroke longer and thicker, it will be even better!
What do you think?