After reading Caishanzi, comment on the model.
On the steep and seemingly endless mountain road, a mountain bearer was bent by the weight on his shoulder. Sweat flowed down from his dark skin and dripped on the bluestone board. But he didn't lose heart, but kept climbing. The top of the mountain is getting closer and closer to him. This is the picture that comes to my mind after reading the article "Mountain Miners".
This article is about Feng Jicai, a painter, who went to Mount Tai to sketch, and found that the mountain bearer walked slowly, although he was carrying heavy things on his shoulders. Mountaineers travel twice as long as tourists, but not slower than tourists. What is the reason? The simple words of mountain pickers contain a simple truth: "We don't have any shortcuts ... we must keep going." What do you mean by "a strength"? "One strength" means going forward bravely, making unremitting efforts and finding the right target. It is precisely because of "one strength" that the mountain bearer walks fast.
In our daily life, there are also many people who have the spirit of "one strength" like a mountain bearer. For example, Liu Xiang, the Olympic champion, makes unremitting efforts in the playground every day, identifies the target and practices squatting, starting and hurdling. The devil's training finally won him the Olympic gold medal. Isn't this also the spirit of "one strength"? Scientists also have this spirit. They work in the research room in obscurity. Later, they finally sent the satellite into space and let high-tech products enter the homes of ordinary people.
After reading the article "Mountain Picker", I hid the book and thought: Do I also have the spirit of "a force"? No I don't. How can I compete with mountain pickers? I remember once, my mother asked me to clean the room. I thought it was easy to do at first, but later I thought it was a little difficult, so I put it aside and waited for my mother to do it.
Feng Jicai drew a picture after he came back from Mount Tai. On a steep and seemingly endless mountain road, a mountain bearer in a red vest was bent by the burden on his shoulders, but he climbed up step by step. Feng Jicai hung the picture in front of his desk because he needed it. I also hang this picture in my heart because I need it, too.
Comment on the second fan of Caishanzi
Recently, I read an article by the writer Feng Jicai, "Mountain Pickers". This article mainly tells the story of a mountain-bearer in Taishan Scenic Area who determined his goal, made unremitting progress step by step, and finally climbed to the top of the mountain. It is this spirit that has benefited me a lot.
From the spirit of Kanshanren's determination and unremitting efforts to the goal, I saw the bright spot in Kanshanren. This reminds me that in normal study and life, some people just flinch when they encounter difficulties and will never succeed. Some people work hard, but they give up when they hit a wall. Some people have made unremitting efforts towards their goals, achieved their goals and achieved success. Facts have proved that a clear goal, combined with unremitting efforts, equals success.
Clear goals are the premise of success, so take learning as an example! A classmate made up his mind to get more than 90 points, so he listened carefully in class, took notes carefully, and took the time to do exercises after class. He is sure to get good grades in the exam. Another student has no ambition. He played pranks in class and talked to his classmates. He plays hard after class. Speaking of exams, his grades can be imagined. Success needs unremitting efforts to pave the way
Whenever I encounter problems in my study, I will think of the lesson "Mountain Picker" and think about it repeatedly until I am full of confidence. I seem to have a magical and powerful power, and the image of a mountain runner is deeply imprinted in my heart.
Doing things should be as persistent as picking mountain people.
Comment on Fan Wensan's Mountain Picker
If you want to travel to Mount Tai, you must pay attention to those special civilian workers-mountain porters.
When traveling in Mount Tai, Feng Jicai met a mountain picker and learned that his job was to pick goods and sell them up the mountain. Because of the heavy burden and the winding mountain road, the climbers walked slowly and laboriously. Feng Jicai caught up with him on the mountain road. But when you come to the rest area, you will always find that the mountain bearer behind you has rested in the rest area. What's going on here? Feng Jicai didn't know until he asked. It turns out that mountain climbers don't look at the surrounding scenery like tourists. Their only goal is to climb to the top of the mountain. For this goal, they walked wholeheartedly. While tourists are still enjoying the scenery, they have quietly surpassed the tourist group.
Yes, the reason why mountaineers are so "fast" is precisely because they have clear goals, solid steps, and the belief of sticking to the end without distraction.
After reading this article, I can't help thinking of the well-known fable "the tortoise and the rabbit race". Although the rabbit in the story ran very fast at the beginning of the game, it was distracted and fell asleep in the middle. A tortoise is different from a rabbit. Although running slowly, but the serious attitude towards the game makes it turn defeat into victory. I think the key to the success of this game is not the speed, but whether you treat the game with your heart and concentration!
The short story of the text "Learning Chess" that we have studied is also about this truth. Two people learn chess from a chess master at the same time. One person listens attentively, while the other person is always thinking about playing swan and eating swan meat. The result can be imagined: the former achieved something, while the latter got nothing. The same teacher, the same teaching environment, the world apart is that two people have completely different learning attitudes!
In fact, in life, we can't do many things well, isn't it because we are half-hearted? Some students learn piano on Monday, painting on Tuesday and calligraphy on Wednesday. They seem to know everything, but none of them study hard. When some students do their homework, they think about how to get through computer games, and as a result, the quality and efficiency of their homework are greatly reduced.
I benefited a lot from mountaineers. Yes, don't you also have a spirit of being a mountain bearer and sticking to the end wholeheartedly when you are doing things and studying?
Comment on the Mystery of Mountain Picker
I like the mountain sweeper in Chinese textbooks best. I like its truthfulness, simplicity and enlightening significance.
This paper describes the working scenes of climbers who have climbed Mount Tai all the year round, and praises their valuable spirit of optimism, openness, down-to-earth, perseverance and courage to climb the peak.
In order to let me really feel the hardships of mountain pickers, learn from their enterprising spirit and overcome the difficulties in life and study, my father took me to climb Mount Tai as soon as the final exam was over. Although I went into battle empty-handed, I was caught up several times by the mountain-picker behind me on the way. Halfway there, my legs seemed to be filled with lead and I couldn't move any more. I tried to give up climbing several times. Finally, inspired by the spirit of going back to the mountain, I gritted my teeth and almost persisted in rolling and climbing, and finally climbed to the top of Mount Tai! Dad gave me a thumbs-up and praised me, but I think this kind of praise should belong to the mountain watcher!
When I came back from Mount Tai, I carefully read The Mountain Picker again. After reading it, I seem to see a group of mountain pickers with dark skin and simple smile, sweating along the rugged and steep eighteen plates of day order, struggling upward ... What a simple and great group of people! Their spirit of down-to-earth, perseverance, perseverance and forging ahead towards the goal is not a true portrayal of the hardworking and brave spirit of the Chinese nation. Isn't it the source of strength we need to realize the great Chinese dream and the dream of national rejuvenation? !
Comment on Wu Wen, a fan of The Mountain Picker
There are many great occupations in the world, such as: soldiers who defend the motherland, doctors who heal the wounded and rescue the dying, firefighters who arrive at the first time when they are in danger ... This summer vacation, there is such a profession that attracted my attention. He is an ordinary and great mountaineer.
How noble you are, mountain porters. In order to let tourists eat delicious fruits and drink delicious drinks, you carried the burden of 100 kg, walked hundreds of miles of mountain roads, and climbed up and down tirelessly ... Although the work was very hard and tired, you still insisted so hard to provide necessities for tourists.
If you don't see it with your own eyes, you will never realize the greatness of the mountain bearer through a text. When I climbed the Tianyou Peak in Wuyi Mountain, I saw the mountain climbers with my own eyes, and I realized their greatness. They are all shirtless, with towels around their necks to wipe their sweat and a long pole on their shoulders. There are two ropes tied to the pole, and boxes of water and all kinds of food are tied to them. They should be over 60 years old, not to mention the steep mountain road, but they let the sweat fall one after another, but they didn't mean to stop at all. ...
Thinking of our usual life and study, shouldn't we be like climbers? No matter what you do, you should set yourself a goal and stick to it. The road ahead may be smooth or rugged, but as long as we persist, the rugged road will end. On the contrary, even if the smooth road is at your feet, if you don't persist, you will eventually achieve nothing.
The moment I finished reading the text, the figure of Mountain Picker was deeply imprinted in my mind, and the spirit of Mountain Picker always inspired me to keep moving forward.
Comment on Liu Wen, a fan of The Mountain Picker
Late at night, I turned on the desk lamp and turned over the books in my hand. Suddenly, the words "Look at the Mountain Man" jumped into my eyes, so I calmed down and read it carefully.
What a simple image it is to be a mountain bearer, but the shock he gave me is enormous. Rough image, simple words, in my mind for a long time. Climbers climb the mountain once, and the distance they walk is about twice that of tourists. However, they never say that they are tired, but climb silently step by step. As tourists, let's take a break and look around. I don't know how fast this minute has passed. The respectable mountain watcher is just a little more persistent and persistent than us, so he left us behind as soon as he left. At the moment, I seem to see a mountaineer wearing a red vest and a white jacket, slowly climbing to the top of the mountain, his dark skin shining in the sun. Tourists ask questions, and I am even more surprised to see the answers from mountain people. "Where we have a shortcut, also won't argue with you a way? You walk fast, but look around on the road and always stop when you play around! We are not like you. Not as casual as you. You can do anything you like. You can't step on it, let alone stop. In that case, we can't reach the top of the mountain in two days. You must stick to it. Although we are slow, we will run ahead of you after a long walk. You see, is this the reason? " Yes, there are no shortcuts for climbers, only the determination and perseverance to climb wholeheartedly.
This reminds me that during the summer vacation, I made up my mind to recite a dictionary of Chinese idioms. As soon as the book came back, I couldn't put it down and read it like a treasure. I recite three pages a day when I make a plan. Three days later, I recited some, but I never recited them again because of homework and exams. Now even the shadow of the dictionary has disappeared. It is this practice of giving up halfway that has led to my failure so far. Compared with watching the simple deeds of mountain people, I feel ashamed. Mountain climbers have to carry heavy loads to climb Mount Tai and walk in front of tourists, but I can't stick to idioms, I really shouldn't. As the saying goes: "There is a road to diligence in Shushan, and there is no limit to learning the sea." In the future, I will change this bad habit of giving up easily and treat life and study with diligence and perseverance. I believe there must be a rainbow after the storm. In the night, the cool breeze brushed my face, and suddenly I seemed to come to Mount Tai. Not far away, a mountain bearer trudged step by step to the top of the mountain with a heavy burden on his back. ...
Comment on Wen Qi, a fan of The Mountain Picker
I often hear adults and teachers teach me: "Persistence is the most important thing, don't be half-hearted, don't give up halfway!" " Today, I learned the text "Mountain Pickers", which made me really understand the profound truth of the word "persistence", that is: persistence, persistence, and persistence in the end is victory!
The article "Mountain Picker" tells the story that when the author Feng Jicai climbed Mount Tai, he met the mountain pickers three times, and each time he quickly surpassed the mountain pickers, but he always got there first. It turns out that tourists who walk fast in a short time, walk for a while and stop along the way; The weight-bearing climbers who walk slowly in a short period of time, although taking the same road as tourists, never stop and keep going. So, when the tourists stopped to enjoy the beautiful scenery while walking, the mountain gatherers quietly caught up and walked to the front. No wonder the longer the road, the climbers can always get to the front. Isn't this the result of watching mountain people work hard? Isn't this a strong proof that persistence is victory?
In fact, such examples can be seen everywhere. Take me for example, when I do my homework, I always write and play for a while, so there seems to be a lot of homework that I can never finish. Other children have finished writing and come out to play with me. I haven't finished my homework yet. It seems that you can't do anything while playing, stop while doing it, have a goal in mind and keep moving towards it. Huang Jing, a new classmate, transferred to our class in the fourth grade. When Huang Jing transferred to another school, she didn't become a class cadre. But after she changed her job, she set a goal in her mind, and she must be the captain. As a result, Huang Jing is very careful in class and always gets good grades in exams. She also has a correct attitude towards learning and corrects her mistakes as soon as she makes them. In the new semester, Huang Jing really became the squadron leader, and she was ecstatic. How worthy of my study is her enterprising spirit towards the goal.
Marx once said: "Life is like an ocean. Only a strong-willed person can reach the other shore. " Persistence more often means sticking to the end in the face of difficulties and setbacks and never giving up. "People who made great achievements in ancient times were not only superb talents, but also perseverance." It is persistence that has created a generation of great men, such as Socrates, Beethoven, Lu Xun and Comrade Mao Zedong. ...
However, many of us just can't hold on. The difficulties on the road ahead, in the eyes of many people, are just "the end of the mountain", but I don't know if I persist for a while, it will be "a bright future"; The unpredictable situation in the sky of life is just a "storm" for many people, but I don't know if it will be a beautiful rainbow if it persists. What should I do?
"Infinite scenery on a dangerous peak", only through hardships can we reap the heavy joy of victory. Like climbers, we must keep our feet on the ground, step by step, despite all the difficulties, and finally reach our destination. Therefore, in addition to persistence, we must have will, perseverance and perseverance, and pave the way for persistence with perseverance and perseverance. As long as we can persist for one more day, the hope of victory will increase by one point. Whoever can persist to the end will win.
Perseverance can conquer any peak in the world. My friend, when you are exhausted and desperate, please don't give up. Please persist for a while, and you will eventually reach the other side of success and enjoy the success and joy brought by persistence.
Comment on Fan Wenba, The Mountain Picker
Seeing the simple words of Shanren made me understand the true meaning of life. Up to now, I can't forget what the mountain runner said, which seems to have left a deep imprint on my heart.
"One step is not true, and one stop is even worse. In that case, we can't reach the top of the mountain in two days. You must stick to it ... "I read this sentence. It naturally reminds me of my real life: eating snacks, drinking water and urinating when I do my homework every day. Finally, I scribbled my homework and watched TV. Don't write a stroke, let alone concentrate on your homework.
If life is a peak, there are many attractive "traps" on the way to the peak, and there are also many joys of success; There are countless bumpy roads and many smooth roads. However, in my life, there is no persistent spirit like a mountain bearer. I always fish for three days and dry the net for two days. Too lazy to do anything, procrastinating. Take this summer vacation for example: I am always too lazy to do my homework during the summer vacation. I always think: if I don't do my homework today, will there be one tomorrow? I must do my homework tomorrow, which wastes precious time. Finally, school will start in five or six days, and my homework is still motionless, which is really self-inflicted. I always sleep until 12 every day and get up at 6 o'clock to make up my homework. Finally, it took a lot of effort to make up the summer homework, but the handwriting was still so sloppy. As soon as school started, I was embarrassed to show it to the teacher.
After reading this article, I feel very ashamed. My personality is like a tourist in The Mountain Picker. I can leave whenever I want and stop whenever I want. However, there are people around me who work as hard as handyman. Let's say Qiu Chaopei from our class. He has the persistent spirit of handyman. Every time he goes to a public area, he always works hard and "fights" until the last moment for the "thumb" of our class. He works hard step by step in his studies and is always praised by his teachers.
I believe that in my future study and life, the spirit of mountain-bearer can inspire me to go forward bravely and move towards the peak of my life.
Comment on Fan Wenjiu after Reading The Mountain Picker
I read the article "Mountain Pickers" today. When I first read the text, I was deeply attracted. When I close my eyes and think back, the plots in the article will appear in front of my eyes one by one. I seem to see a mountain runner in a red vest, carrying heavy objects on a steep mountain road that seems endless. I seem to hear the simple and meaningful words of seeing the mountain man again. At this time, a question appeared in my mind: Why do mountain pickers often surpass the tourists in front of him?
After reading it carefully, I gradually solved the mystery in my heart. It turns out that compared with tourists, the purpose of climbing mountains and the way of walking are very different: tourists climb mountains only in an instant, and they spend a lot of time walking around and looking around; However, watching the mountain man is to survive, step by step, and walk assiduously.
Think about our usual life and study, shouldn't we be like a mountain watcher? No matter what you do, you should set yourself a goal, be down-to-earth and do it persistently. The road ahead may be
It's flat, maybe rugged. As long as we can do this, no matter how rough the road is. On the contrary, even if the apartment is at your feet, you will be indecisive and accomplish nothing.
Seeing the figure and words of the mountain people inspired me to overcome all kinds of difficulties in my study and get good grades.
Comment on Mountain Picker 10
I accidentally saw a photo of Mountain Man on the Internet and remembered an article I learned in school, namely Mountain Man, so I read it again.
When we were at school, we learned an article with similar truth very early, which was Mr. Feng Jicai's "Mountain Picker". At that time, we just felt the hardships of mountain-carrying workers, the perseverance of character, and some of the heaviness in life that we didn't have as much as the manager. At that time, I just hoped that one day I could witness the faces of mountain gatherers, cast respectful eyes on them, talk with them and feel the truth of life in the mountains.
But in the constant cognition and experience, I gradually felt another deeper thing, which may also be the profound implication of Mr. Feng Lao. The so-called profundity can be replaced by the words of a mountain runner: "Where do we have a shortcut, and we are not on the same road as you?" You walk fast, but look around on the road and always stop when you play around! We are not like you. Not as casual as you. You can do anything you like. You can't step on it, let alone stop. In that case, we can't reach the top of the mountain in two days. You must stick to it. Although we are slow, we have walked a long way and we will run ahead of you. "
I remember in my elder sister's space state, she once said that the whole world will make way for you if you have a goal, and a leader I know in Wu Jian, Henan, once talked about his experience, saying why he can struggle with a boy who has no college experience all the way to his present position. The important reason is that as long as the leader gives him the task, no matter what method, how long and how difficult it is, he will always finish it. Therefore, he will learn more during this period. This is why I, a college student, have been working for three years and I am still worried about food and clothing.
I am 26 years old and have suffered too much loss, too much admiration and too much confusion. I feel the same way in my work and love life. Seeing more, there are more unnecessary burdens, so it is easy to feel all kinds of fatigue in life, but what you think in your heart is often not realized, and what you pursue is often not achieved, so you feel sorry for yourself and live more tired than you should.
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