But from the arrangement of four lines, the last three words of the first line are inclined downward, the last two words of the second line are inclined downward, the third line is the best, and the fourth line is inclined upward from the third word. This situation of just 28 words shows that you are not calm in the process of writing.
It is said that words are like people, and your character depends on your words. Usually, you will lack self-confidence at the beginning of doing things, and you will be excited when you evaluate them correctly.
So judging from your handwriting, there is basically no problem with the strokes, and the handwriting is beautiful. The key is to practice "quietness" and hold your breath. When you pick up a pen, you should try to forget all other thoughts and meditate between the lines, so that your calligraphy can be improved.