She picked up chopsticks, reached for brightly colored dishes, gently picked up a piece, put her left hand under the chopsticks, and followed them carefully. The veins stood out suddenly, and the veins stood out for a while. She put the dish in her mouth carefully and tasted it carefully.
Grandma stretched out her right foot and slipped into the shoe. Her muscular hands clung to the door frame and gently lifted her left foot. The tight foot is carefully inserted into the shoe mouth, and then plunged into it. Then she stomped a few times to make her feet comfortable and went out contentedly.
4, near, closer, the team leader finally came to his side, like a Taishan standing in front of him, shouting: "Hand in homework, hand in homework!" He smiled "hey hey", his expression was so funny and mysterious. Suddenly, he plunged into it, broke away from the leader's arm like a slippery loach, and his feet ran away like oil.
There is an old woman at the crossroads, with a slight hunchback and a fat figure, walking hard on the empty road with an umbrella. The wind came at me with heavy rain. She bent forward hard, grabbed the umbrella, stepped back half a step and staggered forward.
6. The young man ran well, running at a constant speed from the beginning. He ran with his head held high like a pony: his stride was symmetrical, his stride frequency was compact, his pedaling was strong, and his waist was relaxed-the whole movement was elegant and elastic.
7. Xuan Shi's steps are even, his arms swing back and forth, and his steps are getting faster and faster. He leans forward as if he were going to fall, struggling to run forward quickly. At the end of the race, she held her head high and stood out, and finally won the first prize.
8. In the first winter training of Lang Ping's volleyball career, the coaches began to give Lang Ping a "small stove". Long-distance running-Lang Ping ran round and round the 400-meter track ... his head was swollen, his chest ached and his legs could not be lifted. Stop? Don't! The brain gives clear instructions and moves on ... Sweat has wet the hair into locks, and the sweat flows from the forehead to the mouth, which is bitter and astringent. How I want to lie on the runway at once and stretch my limbs to relax! Suddenly, a strange smile climbed up the corner of her mouth-she suddenly remembered that when she was a child, she always looked forward to tasting the taste of not jumping again, but now she really tasted it, bitter and astringent.
Detail description is to describe the tiny links or plots in an article. The position of detail description in article description seems to be idle or redundant, irrelevant and dispensable; But they are all carefully set and arranged by the author and cannot be replaced at will. An article, with proper details, can set off the atmosphere, portray the characters and reveal the theme. In junior high school Chinese textbooks, we can find many examples described in detail.
1. Detailed description of the scene. For example:
(1) On the grass behind the sawmill, Prussian soldiers are practicing. (The Last Lesson by Dude)
(2) We boarded the ship, left the trestle and sailed far away on the calm sea like a green marble table. (Mo Bosang, "My Uncle Yule")
In front of us, there seems to be a purple shadow coming out of the sea in the distance. (Mo Bosang, "My Uncle Yule")
The description of the social environment in the above sentence (1) truly and simply shows that a person's country is occupied by the enemy. In this lush land of France, the enemy practiced trampling here, which greatly destroyed the beautiful scenery of this small town in northeast France. This detail reveals the social roots of the tragedy of The Last Lesson to readers. The scenery descriptions in the second sentence and the third sentence are in sharp contrast, showing the different moods of the Phillips before and after seeing Yule, and using the environmental description as a foil. Sentence (2) is lively, showing their happy and proud mood. Sentence (3) is gloomy, which shows that they are full of disappointment and depression.
2. Description of clothing details. For example:
(1) Although wearing a gown, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it hasn't been mended or washed for more than ten years. (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji)
(2) This Mr. Fujino, it is said that he wears clothes too carelessly and sometimes forgets to tie a knot; ..... What they said is probably true, so I saw him not wearing a tie in class once. (Mr. Fujino of Lu Xun)
The above sentence (1) described that the gown was dirty and torn, and it was not washed or mended for a long time, which not only showed that Kong Yiji was poor and had only one gown, but also showed that he was lazy and refused to wash and mend his clothes. He refused to take off such a robe because he was afraid of losing his status as a scholar. The detailed description of this dress reveals Kong Yiji's laziness and face-saving, and profoundly reveals Kong Yiji's social status, ideological character and education. The second sentence is an anecdote about Mr. Fujino. On the one hand, it shows Mr. Fujino's frugality, on the other hand, it shows his easy-going, informal, careless and careless character.
3. Description of language details. For example:
(1) Mother often said, "As long as this Yule comes back, our situation will be different. He is really a man with a way. " Mo Bosang is my uncle Yule.
(2) Mother said unhappily, "I'm afraid it will hurt my stomach. Just buy a few for the children, but don't eat too much. If you eat too much, you will get sick. " Then he turned to me and said, "As for Joseph, he doesn't need to eat this kind of food. Don't spoil the boy. " (Mo Bosang, "My Uncle Yule")
The above sentence (1) shows that Mr. and Mrs. Phillips heard that Yule made a fortune outside and changed their views on him because of his economic status. They pinned their hopes on him to change his family's economic situation and hoped that he would come back as soon as possible every day. It fully shows Phillips' personality characteristics, such as selfishness, greed, vulgarity, ruthlessness and mercenary. Sentence (2) is the mother's grandiose expression: in front of two girls and son-in-law, she seems to cherish herself and care about others; Love children and attach importance to education &; #0; & amp#0; The essence is to look after face and save money. Hypocrisy and meanness are exposed.
4. Description of operation details. For example:
(1) Kong Yiji panicked, held out five fingers to cover the plate, bent down and said, "Not much, I don't have much." (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji)
If he doesn't answer, ... he will pay nine pence. (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji)
(3) "... yell, help me take off my coat, ... Damn, it's so hot, it looks like rain ..." (Chekhov's chameleon)
(4) "Oh! ..... Brother Eldrin, put on your coat for me ... It seems windy and cold ... "(Chekhov's chameleon)
In the above two sentences (1) and (2), the verb "Gai" accurately describes Kong Yiji's forced and helpless action when he gave one of his few fennel beans to the children, and when the children refused to leave after eating fennel beans, which showed his kindness. The action of "Pai" vividly reveals Kong Yiji's pedantic character, who is ostentatious even though he is desperately poor. The "military coat" in sentences (3) and (4) is a special symbol of the czar's police dog, a symbol of Ralph's status, and a tool for him to put on airs and scare people. The action of "taking off your coat" shows not the hot weather, but the timid psychology of "judging" the wrong dog and sweating all over. The action of "wearing a coat" does not mean that the weather is cold, but covers up the cold and chilling psychology of insulting the general just now. The details of "taking off" and "wearing" outline the ugly state of the tsar's slave who bullies the weak and fears the hard and flatters.
5. Description of psychological details. For example:
(1) I wonder if you realize how attached a child is to you standing there! (Wei Wei, "My Teacher")
(2) Shouldn't they force these pigeons to sing in German? (The Last Lesson by Dude)
The sentence (1) expresses the thoughts and feelings of reverence for Teacher Cai, which shows that a primary school student is extremely excited about his teacher. When the young Frenchman heard the cooing of pigeons on the roof of the school, he showed deep feelings of contempt, hatred and cherish for the language of the motherland.
There are many kinds of detailed descriptions, so I won't list them one by one. Every detail in the article contains new ideas, thought-provoking, thought-provoking, and we must carefully ponder its wonderful points when reading. Detail description refers to grasping the subtle and specific typical plots in life and describing them vividly and meticulously, which is reflected in the description of people, scenery or scenes. It is the most vivid and expressive technique, and often tells the truth, goodness, beauty and false ugliness of characters with wonderful pen and ink for readers to appreciate and evaluate.
Such as "my uncle Mr. Lu Xun" detailed description in the article:
"They helped the driver on the bus, one squatting and the other kneeling. Dad took tweezers to break the glass for rickshaw drivers, and uncle washed it with boric acid. "This description vividly reflects the excellent qualities that my uncle and father care about and love the working people. The description of a series of small gestures, such as helping, squatting, kneeling, clamping and washing, fully shows uncle's meticulous and enthusiasm.
See the truth for details. This kind of detailed description enriches the characters' images, endows them with flesh and soul, and highlights their distinctive personalities, thus making them more vivid.
Detail description plays an extremely important role in expressing characters, narrating events and reappearing environment. Writer Lee Joon once said, "Without details, there is no work of art.. True detail description is an important means to shape characters and achieve typicality. " Write people as if they see people, and write scenery as if they are near the scene. This is the main purpose of detail description.