The leaves of Chuyang withered all night, the water was clear and round, and the wind and lotus rose one by one.
My hometown is far away. Why go? I live in Wumen and have been traveling in Chang 'an for a long time.
Do the fishermen in May remember each other? Boat, dream into furongpu.
-Su Mu covered [Song] Zhou Bangyan
This word is easy to remember. The quiet scenery described at the beginning, burning agarwood to cool off the heat, the environment of these two sentences is very quiet. There are birds singing in three or four sentences, and it is pointed out that it rained last night and there were birds' movements, indicating that sunny days are coming and the atmosphere is relaxed and happy. Five or six sentences are delicate and detailed, with a sense of form, echoing in the ear like music. End the ascent with a lotus-like lightness.
Xiaque's lyric is more touching than Shangque's. He also used vernacular words, which is quite different from his exquisite style. One or two periods appear where you live, not in your hometown. Three or four sentences of homesickness overflow on the paper. Ask the fisherman in his hometown if he misses himself to show his strong yearning for his hometown friends. The last two sentences entered the dream. Hierarchical, meticulous division of labor, smooth lines. It is unpredictable to recall old friends from the battlefield and dream of old Holland. Predecessors commented on Zhou Bangyan's lyrics, which are "good at writing scenery and chanting things, exquisite words, tortuous layout and changing cycle." (Zhang Yan, etymology). Wu shichang once said: "Sometimes there are stories in the long tunes and minor tunes of Muslims, which are very organized and organized. It not only wastes pen and ink, but also increases the beauty of structure and the essence of phonology. " ("Linz Xinhua" by wu shichang; Beijing Publishing House, 200 1, 1, printed in one edition; Page 179). This small print proves that it is true.
From the above analysis, we can see the scene in front of us: one morning in Bianjing in the midsummer of May, it just rained last night, which was very hot and humid, and the owner just woke up; Smell the residual smell of agarwood used last night, listen to the birds singing around, and it is even more silent. Get up and watch the lovely movements of birds. Outside, the lotus blooms after the rain. After sunrise, the raindrops on the lotus leaves gradually evaporate. Lotus stands upright on the clear water in the wind ... then the author falls into memories, misses his hometown and dreams of returning to his hometown. ...
This word, like Zhou Bangyan's previous words, has many advantages in refining words. The last three sentences are even more exciting, and they are worthy of being the terminator described in the book. Wang Guowei once commented: "Jade Case" is beautiful in poetry, "The leaves are dry and rainy, the water surface is clear and round, and the wind is rushing", which can really win the lotus god. (Article 36 of "Words on Earth"); Sapphire case should be mistaken) more elegant charm than "lotus leaves are infinitely blue and lotus flowers are of different colors"; In terms of smallness and elegance, it also won the prize that "Xiao He only shows its sharp corners, and dragonflies have long stood on it". Make a careful analysis: the surface of fresh green lotus leaves is still dripping after the rain last night. However, the author carefully observed the evaporation process of water droplets, and the image was subtle and afterwards. When the lotus leaves shake, there must be noise, which leads to the effect of music and extraordinary techniques. After that, the word "lift" makes the continuous upper gate have a style of character without losing its charm; From the point of view, the author is very particular. First a raindrop, then it swells and falls to the surface of the water, and finally it looks at the whole pond from a distance, as if taking pictures.
In addition to the above three sentences, there is still a lack of "burning agarwood to relieve the heat", that is, knowing that the owner just woke up in the morning. The word "Xia Shu" is silent, which means infinite sleepiness. This is also the author's first feeling after waking up-drowsiness and agarwood's sense of smell. Then there is "birds singing clearly", the voice is audible, and the word "shout" is more humanized. Everything in the author's mind is so lovely and noisy in silence, just like writing "cicada and manic forest are quieter, Tonamiyama is more secluded" to set off the surrounding silence. Four sentences of "invading the eaves", visual feeling; When I heard birds chirping, I thought of going to see them, and then I saw the lotus flowers, which brought back memories. The context is clear, but meticulous and reasonable.
Xiaque is divided into two places-"Wumen" and Bianjing, which arouse different feelings of the two places through the lotus scene; I will talk about "Yu Lang" in my hometown and "I" in Bianjing, and then go back to the lotus in my dream and the end of the lotus. The way to describe the lyrics is to understand, but it is reasonable. The first part depicts the scenery, nuanced, no one in the scene, realistic everywhere; When the next movie comes, the overall situation will be clear and the artistic conception will be fully opened; And from the memory and questioning of my hometown, I revealed a faint and deep homesickness. Moreover, the phrases in this word are like vernacular Chinese, without allusions or poems, which is very different from his previous words. The lines between the lines are calm and calm with bitterness, which is really human.