Wu Yishu's letter to his classmates is full of chicken soup. Why do experts say it is junior high school students' level?

As a medical student in Tsinghua, Wu Yishu is an example for everyone to learn. At the invitation of her alma mater, she wrote a letter to her classmates. Netizens praised him for his calligraphy, but he didn't buy what he wrote. They think that Wu Yishu's article is full of chicken soup, lacking in qualitative content and looks empty. Experts also believe that her writing level is the level of junior high school students, which makes everyone confused.

Wu Yishu still has real talent and practical learning, and he also has a plan for life. Of course, half of her planning is due to Ann's help and the other half is due to her own efforts. Wu Yishu was also a headache girl at first. She doesn't like studying very much and is very naughty. At this critical moment, Wu Yishu's parents' educational methods played an important role. Wu Yishu's parents gave her timely guidance and inspired her enthusiasm for learning. Wu Yishu's parents attach great importance to communication and companionship with their children and accompany them through the whole student life. There seems to be no absolute genius, and parental guidance is very important.

In the later student days, Wu Yi's surname did not say that she was imprisoned. On the contrary, learning has become an indispensable part of her life. Wu Banmei's parents are very open-minded, and her children love poetry, so they allow her to study without worrying about her academic performance. The only requirement is to let her have a good learning attitude. Therefore, Wu Yishu still likes learning very much. It is this enlightened educational concept that has made Wu Yishu. Wu Yishu didn't live up to his parents' expectations and made a big splash on the stage of China Poetry Conference.

After becoming famous, Wu Yishu still lives under the care of his parents. Wu Yishu's parents blocked interviews and advertising invitations for her, and she wanted her to study hard. Wu Yishu was finally admitted to Tsinghua University with excellent results. The key is to go. For a time, Wu Yishu became the focus of attention. After Wu Yishu went to Tsinghua, her alma mater invited her to write a letter to her younger brother and sister, but in the eyes of netizens, it was all chicken soup, and experts also thought that her writing level was the level of primary school students.

The picture above shows a letter from Wu Yishu to his alma mater's younger brothers and sisters. Calligraphy is really beautiful, but the content of expression is full of chicken soup, which can be described as full of chicken soup. Judging from Wu Yishu's writing style, thinking is still the same as writing a composition. Wu Yishu first explained why she wrote this letter to her younger brother and sister. The second paragraph began to write bits and pieces of high school life, nothing. However, the article should not end so early. The third paragraph seems to be the sublimation of moaning without illness, which is very exciting to read. But from the dribs and drabs of school to the final emotional sublimation, it is a bit abrupt, a bit redundant in the middle, and it looks unnatural. From the perspective of exam-oriented composition, it is understandable to write like this. On the contrary, there is a blend of scenes, reflecting the author's feelings in the details, and the expression technique is quite good.

But in general, it's all chicken soup. What is chicken soup with full flavor? To put it bluntly, it is very emotional to read but has no substantive content. Simply put, it is empty. This is the problem of Wu Yi Shu's article. There is nothing wrong with what experts call "junior high school students' level". Junior high school students are a little immature in writing because of their own experience and lack of understanding, and what they write lacks strong substantive content support. A really good article is readable, can withstand scrutiny and can reflect profound cultural connotations. Experts say that Wu Yishu's writing level is the level of junior high school students, which is true.

However, we should not ignore the fact that Wu Yishu's own cultural literacy is still there, but her writing thinking has a kind of inertia, and she can't get out of the exam-oriented composition in her student days. So experts say that her writing is at the level of junior high school students. Of course, Wu Yishu has a long way to go. In the future, he can still write articles without chicken soup flavor and get rid of the inherent constraints of junior high school students' writing mode.