Because Xiao Fuxing wrote good compositions, this composition "A Portrait (Revised)" won the prize in the Beijing Children's Essay Competition when Xiao Fuxing was in the third grade of junior high school. But it can't be said that it was only revised for Xiao Fuxing, because when the Chinese teacher handed it to Xiao Fuxing, it was a big book containing the twenty winning essays in the essay competition. Ye Shengtao revised these twenty essays.