Is the word "Longevity is better than Nanshan" appropriate in Song He Map?

Yes, since it is a map of pine cranes, it means that there are pine cranes and Songshan Mountain. The inscription "Longevity" is also related to Nanshan.

If it is more appropriate, it is suggested that the inscription can be "Songhe Yannian" and "Songhe Changchun", and it is best to match rhyming words, such as "Spring and Autumn is not old" and "Sun and Moon are bright". I wish the elderly to prosper forever like the sun and moon, and Changchun is not old like Songbai crane. Are very elegant birthday greetings.