In the college entrance examination room, candidates usually spend about 45 minutes writing, especially the speed of marking teachers is so fast-it's not that teachers are irresponsible, but that time is tight and tasks are heavy. Statistics show that a teacher must "read, smell, ask and cut" a composition in about 2 minutes, sometimes it will be shorter. At the same time, the composition of college entrance examination accounts for almost half of the total score of Chinese, and its importance can be imagined and self-evident.
Based on the above reasons, it is decided that if you want to win the high score of the college entrance examination composition, you should try your best to achieve the following five "keywords".
Bright and clear
Including the theme, structure, form and other aspects of the article, try to make it clear so that the marking teacher can see your article at a glance.
Specifically:
1. Theme-You can put forward main ideas, viewpoints, opinions, etc. The article is conveyed to the marking teacher through the first attached sentence, so that the marking staff can "get a glimpse of the whole leopard" without reading the full text, that is, they will not "occupy" or "waste" more precious time, and they will have a clear understanding of your composition.
Please look at the beginning of a high-scoring composition in Beijing 20 10, which reads: "Look up at the stars, where there are our dreams. Down-to-earth and silent struggle are the only choice to realize your dreams. " This is the center of the article. Start with the theme, showing the theme and center.
2. Structure-Layering, juxtaposition and contrast can be adopted. Let the reviewers have a clear and profound understanding; You can also use rhetorical devices such as parallelism (paragraphs), personification, and questioning to make the reviewer understand the structure of your article at a glance. For example, 1988 has a high-scoring composition entitled "Habits" in the national college entrance examination: "Just like a stream is used to rushing, the sea is used to roaring, I am used to meditation and daydreaming, and I am used to expressing my feelings in my diary."
3. Form-you can use inscriptions, postscript, letters, diaries, fables and other forms; Or summarize the main sentence of each paragraph in concise language and put it at the beginning of the paragraph; Or separate the philosophical sentence and the "proud sentence" that reflect the central meaning of the article into paragraphs, which is the highlight of the article and can make commentators shine at the moment.
For example, a high-scoring composition of Shanghai 20 10 used the inscription: "If a country does not understand the truth of sustainable development, it will not make a difference in the development of 2 1 century."
4- completeness-due to improper time allocation of candidates, the article is headless or anticlimactic. This will not only fail to meet the requirements, but also deduct points. More importantly, the meaning of the article is incomplete, so it is difficult to give reviewers a sense of integrity. Such an article will certainly affect the score.
As Lin Shu, an expert in modern history, said, "It is difficult to write for the people." Reviewers always pay more attention to the last part of the article, and often leave an overall impression in their minds, thus setting the grade of the article. If you want to get high marks in the composition of the examination room, the ending must echo the beginning, so that the head and tail are rounded and the structure is complete.
For example, the beginning and end of an essay entitled "Be your neighbor" in Guangdong Province on 20 10: "Being your neighbor makes me feel very happy." "Being your next door really makes me happy."
5, washing practice-college entrance examination composition, whether writing argumentative, narrative or prose. Be sure to wash and practice concisely, not verbose, but treat equally: if it is a material composition, the material should be simply quoted and refined, not copied in large chunks; If it is a propositional, semi-propositional or topical composition, the narrative of events and stories should also be treated differently according to the style, and it should be concise and summarized as far as possible, especially argumentative essays. The text is concise and clear, and the words are rich in meaning. The reviewers will definitely like it.
For example, Shanghai's college entrance examination composition "Facing the Sea" has such a wonderful saying:
The sea is different from a big river. The river flows slowly, such as Lao Dan's "quiet and subtle, keeping mysterious and holding one"; Moreover, the vicissitudes of life have changed a lot, such as Zhuang Zhou's "Let the hole reach and escape". The majestic potential of the sea, the pride of the sea, and the tranquility of the sea-in the face of such a sea, what I heard was Meng De's "Martyrs in their twilight years are full of courage"; What I see is a white "solitary sail from the sun"; I think of Zi Shou's "the moon is now full at sea, and the horizon is * * * at this time".
Be flexible
The so-called flexibility means that people and things can be written "perfectly" and "coincidentally" on the basis of real and reasonable life. Because of the limitations of candidates' living environment, field and vision, candidates can and should write like this, which is essentially different from making things up, and coincides with the requirement of "learning from others' strengths and synthesizing them into one" advocated by Mr. Lu Xun. For the sake of typicality, a person's clothes can be from Shandong, his hat can be from Beijing, and his face can be from Zhejiang ... The purpose is to write down the personality characteristics of the characters and the essential attributes of the problems.
For example, articles selected into the text, especially novels, narratives and argumentative essays, are such masterpieces that have been passed down to this day and are often read and updated.
give exact information
This is very important, as the saying goes, "details determine success or failure", but it is often ignored by students.
The detail here means that the face is clean and not scribbled, so that black ink balls can be seen everywhere; The handwriting is neat, and the font can't be big or small: either it exceeds the grid or it "hides" in a corner of the grid, which looks dazzling or awkward and eye-consuming; Try to avoid typos, because three typos will deduct 1 point. When writing, when you encounter words and phrases that you are not sure to write correctly, you should use synonyms and synonyms instead of "hard" writing and hard use; Sentences should be fluent and coherent in meaning-after writing, if time permits, it is best to read them through, and with the help of a sense of language, make some changes to the uneven, unclear and ambiguous places without affecting the expression of meaning and the comprehension of the marking teacher; If the style meets the requirements, especially if it is written in letters, we should pay attention to this problem.
Because seemingly insignificant details play an invisible and decisive role in the score of the composition. After all, a pleasing face is like a "beauty" with delicate facial features. Who can have the heart to destroy her spirit and charm? The composition is naturally the same.
Of course, writing a good college entrance examination composition may be more than the above five points, but if you can really do this, why worry about not getting high marks in your college entrance examination composition?
I hope my answer will satisfy you!