It’s great that you can pay attention to your writing while studying!
Judging from the photos, you are not careful enough in writing and have no sense of the structure of words. For example, in these few words, you even wrote one wrong word - Wanlixue "Feng" should be Wanlixue" "Gone with the Wind", while the word "Qin" fell apart, and there was no vertical line beside the word "city".
Based on your current writing habits, I suggest you buy a character copy. First, practice writing square and square words. Each stroke must be accurate, clear and straight, rather than rushing to practice. What "body". After getting rid of the bad habit of carelessness, you can find a copybook you like and practice hard. I believe you will make great progress. During this period, if you can find a good teacher nearby, you will make faster progress!
I spoke hastily and spoke more bluntly, so please don’t blame me if I offend you!
Hope this helps.