1. Zhuzhi Ci (Liu Yuxi) was rewritten into a composition (300)
At the head of Baidi City, at the foot of Baiyan Mountain, local people came and went, singing local folk songs, and living their lives. Like a fish in water. However, the poet is from the north and was driven here. Looking at this scene and this situation, he has a different feeling in his heart.
Qutang Gorge is one of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. With mountains on both sides and rapid water flow, the situation is the most dangerous. In ancient times, it was known as "Qutang is the most dangerous place in the world". There are many reefs and dangerous shoals in the gorge, and at the mouth of the gorge there is "Yanlidui", which is a huge rocky beach. "Qutang is noisy with twelve beaches, and people say that the road has been difficult since ancient times." This describes the dangerous situation of Qutang Gorge. "Noisy", the noisy sound coming from the flowing water on the beach. "Twelve shoals" is not an exact number, but there are so many dangerous shoals that one can imagine their dangerous situation.
Facing the Qutang Gorge with its stormy waves crashing on the shore and many dangers, the poet couldn't help but associate the danger of the river gorge with the world and human sentiments at that time: "I often hate that people's hearts are not as good as water, and they can easily make waves in a flat land. The reason why Qutang Gorge is so dangerous is , is it because there are dangerous shoals in the water, and the world will have waves even if it is flat, so it is hard to guard against it. It is true that the "human heart" is more dangerous than the water in Qutang Gorge. This is the poet Liu Yuxi's heartfelt words. After he failed to participate in Yongzhen's reform, he was repeatedly framed by villains, attacked by powerful people, and was exiled twice for twenty-three years. His painful experience made him deeply feel that the world was difficult and dangerous, so he became cynical. Words. The long-lasting hatred shows the incomparable resentment that has been buried in the poet's heart for a long time against those who are accustomed to making trouble, causing trouble, and framing innocent people. The danger of Qutang is mentioned in "human words", which means that it is known to everyone; The poet laments the dangers of the human heart with the word "everlasting regret". The subject is the poet himself, pointing out the human condition he has realized through his real-life experience and observation, and clearly expressing his attitude towards it. There is a turning point between the two sentences. , also has depth, using Qutang as a metaphor for the dangers of the human heart, the transition between people's words and my hatred, the meaning of fate is alert, and the metaphor is clever, making the abstract truth concrete, thus giving people a profound feeling. 2. Zhuzhi Ci rewrites prose.
Bamboo Branch Poetry Tang·Liu Yuxi The willows and green rivers are level, and I hear the sound of singing on the bank.
The sun rises in the east and rains in the west. There is no sunshine but there is sunshine on the bank, which is green. The willow branches rippled with the spring breeze, caressing the calm river from time to time.
I heard the elder brother singing on the river, and I was so mesmerized! It is sunny, and there is indeed continuous spring rain in the west. It is not a sunny day, but there is sunshine! The poetry style evolved from the folk songs of ancient Bashu. Liu Yuxi in the Tang Dynasty turned folk songs into a poetry style for literati, which had a great influence on future generations.
In the long historical development of Zhuzhi Ci, due to social history. Affected by the changes and the author's personal thoughts and sentiments, his works can be roughly divided into three types: one is folk songs collected and preserved by literati; the other is folk songs with rich flavor created by literati absorbing and integrating the essence of Zhuzhi lyrics and ballads. Colorful poetry; the third type is seven-character quatrains written based on the style of Zhuzhi Ci. This type of poetry is more popular and is still called "Zhuzhi Ci" ================. ================================================== ===== Liu Yuxi's "Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches" (Part 1) Appreciation of the spring grass growing at the top of Baidi City, the clear water of Shujiang River at the foot of Baiyan Mountain
People from the south come up to sing a song, and people from the north are moved by their nostalgia. "Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches" is a folk song style Yuefu poem that chants local customs. This poem is the first of "Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches".
One or two sentences describe the beauty of the majestic landscape. "Spring grass grows at the top of Baidi City" is written in a high place.
Baidi City is located on Baidi Mountain near the Yangtze River. It was spring, and the grass on the city wall was lush.
The word "生" indicates that the herbs appear in sequence according to the line of sight, and also expresses how widely the herbs grow. The grass is refined because of the city, and the city is full of vitality because of the grass.
"The Shujiang River is clear at the foot of Baiyan Mountain" is written in a low place. Shujiang refers to a section of the Yangtze River at the foot of Baiyan Mountain: the clear water of the river reflects the sky, and the Baiyan Mountain towering into the sky serves as the background. The mountains and rivers reflect each other, each in its own way.
"The Southerners Come Up and Sing a Song" describes the locals singing loudly against the backdrop of majestic mountains and clear waters. Although this sentence does not directly describe the content of the song and the sweetness of the song, readers can naturally appreciate the beauty of the song because of the majestic and beautiful landscapes in the first and second sentences.
In the four sentences, the writing is about a stranger on the road being infected by the singing, triggering a feeling of homesickness. This sentence should be the main theme of the whole poem.
One of the wonders of the whole poem lies in the expressive verbs and the use of line drawing to outline a tasteful character. In the third sentence, "come up" can be understood as "climb to a high place" or "come out". No matter how you interpret it, the image of the song's full of emotion and uncontrollable emotion is ready to come out.
The word "moving" in the fourth sentence is even more expressive. "Northerners" refer to outsiders.
He had no intention of appreciating the majestic and beautiful scenery of spring, and was only hurriedly on his way. Suddenly, the locals sang a song that made him stop and listen. His heart skipped a beat and his spirit flew over him. The word "moving" expresses the expression of the northerner, which also arouses the readers' screams.
The second one is used for two purposes in one scene, to accentuate and render the characters. The mountains are high, the grass is green, the water is clear, and the beautiful spring scenery highlights the local people's unhappiness and exuberance, and also highlights the alienation of people who are not here. One scene, two colors, one stone, two birds.
The third lies in the long and graceful meaning and the lofty realm. The poet's third sentence changes from scenery to people; in the fourth sentence, he uses the singing of local people to contrast the nostalgia of foreigners. This is the second change.
At the same time, when writing about nostalgia, the vast rivers and mountains and the endless spring grass are used to illustrate and exaggerate. Of course, what is written is not the love of children and the beauty of a small family, but the vast nostalgia for the hometown that everyone knows. Complex. 3. Zhuzhi Ci rewritten as prose
Baidi City is located on Baidi Mountain near the Yangtze River. The word "生" (生) indicates that the herbs appear one by one in the line of sight, such as Xiaojiabiyu, but the vast nostalgia, each in its own way.
"The Southerners Come Up and Sing a Song" describes the locals singing loudly against the backdrop of majestic mountains and clear waters. Although this sentence does not directly describe the content of the song, the song is pleasant to the ear, but it is because of one thing.
One of the wonders of the whole poem lies in the expressiveness of the verbs and the use of line drawing to outline a tasteful character. In the third sentence.
On the shore of the warm spring scenery, the strangers on the road were affected by the singing, triggering homesickness. This sentence should be the main theme of the whole poem. The green willow branches are rippling with the spring breeze. The mountains are high, the grass is green and the water is clear. Of course, what is written is not the love between children. Due to the influence of social and historical changes and the author's personal thoughts and emotions, his works can be roughly divided into three types. The road is not clear but there is sunshine, and the west is indeed full of spring rain. , let’s say it’s not a sunny day. "Northerners" refer to outsiders. The majestic and beautiful scenery in spring, the sound of singing on the shore, and the grass on the edge of the city are full of life. "Come up" can be understood as "climb to a high place" or "come out", no matter how you interpret it. "Shujiang Qing at the foot of Baiyan Mountain" is written in the lower part. Shujiang refers to a section of the Yangtze River at the foot of Baiyan Mountain. God flies over it. The beautiful scenery in spring highlights the unhappiness of the local people and the sense of ambition that foreigners are not here. One scene has two colors, one stone and two birds. This type of prose is quite popular and is still dubbed "Zhuzhi Ci"! (Qing - can also be used as - Qing~ This love can also be written as a girl's admiration for her elder brother~)
Zhuzhi Ci is a style of poetry that evolved from ancient folk songs between Bashu and Shu. . Liu Yuxi in the Tang Dynasty transformed folk songs into a poetry style for literati, which had a great influence on future generations. In the long historical development of Zhuzhi Ci, the country's nostalgia is set off by the vast rivers, mountains and endless spring grass. He just rushes on his way, and suddenly, he has no intention of enjoying it. In the fourth sentence, the local people's singing is used to contrast the nostalgia of the strangers. These two change. at the same time! To the east is the sun, which caresses the calm river surface from time to time. Youyou heard the elder brother singing on the river, and the image of being intoxicated and unable to control yourself came to mind. Caoyincheng is refined from vulgarity; the third category is a seven-character quatrain written based on the style of Zhuzhi Ci.
The sun rises in the east and rains in the west, but there is the sun, and the singing is full of emotion. The locals sing loudly and make them stop and listen. This turn also writes about the vastness of the growth of hundreds of grasses.
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Appreciation of Liu Yuxi's "Nine Bamboo Branch Poems" (Part 1)
Spring grass grows at the top of Baidi City,
The Shu River is clear at the foot of Baiyan Mountain.
People from the south come up to sing a song,
People from the north are moved by nostalgia.
"Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches" is a folk song style Yuefu poem that chants local customs and customs. This poem is the first of "Nine Poems on Bamboo Branches".
Write one or two sentences about the majestic beauty of the landscape. "Spring grass grows at the top of Baidi City" is written in a high place. It was spring, and the grass on the city wall was lush. The word "moving" in the fourth sentence is even more expressive: one type is folk songs collected and preserved by literati: the clear water of the river reflects the sky, and the white salt mountains towering into the sky as the background, the mountains and rivers reflect each other.
The third lies in the long and graceful meaning and the lofty realm. In the third sentence of the poet, the scenery and the people make his heart beat wildly; in the second category, the literati absorbed and integrated the essence of Zhuzhi lyrics and ballads to create a poem with a strong folk song color. The word "moving" expresses the expression of the northerner, which also arouses the readers' screams.
The second is used in one scene to highlight the characters and two or two sentences to highlight the majestic and beautiful landscapes. Readers can naturally appreciate the beauty of the singing.
The sky was covered with dark clouds, the weather seemed to be comparable to frost, and heavy gray raindrops were thrown wantonly on people's heads. Standing on this bare mountain top, the scene before my eyes - it is so dark and desolate, as if it makes people feel that there is only boundless emptiness above the gray sky. So, I bowed my head and sighed to myself, but I saw a listless wild flower, bowed my head, bent over, shed tears, and sighed. The soil on one side was as dry and cracked as pine bark, but it was still struggling on the edge of the endless death valley. Why cry? Why struggle? It is only because the country is broken and the family is scattered that I shed tears because of the current events! I tried so hard to block my ears! Because I don’t want to hear the chirping of birds with nowhere to escape. Those miserable and mysterious sounds are like a death clock that is ringing, one after another, rhythmic, but I can also hear the sense of urgency in it.
A gust of cool wind, like a deep tune, pulled out all my emotions painfully. That wind, no matter whether you have heart-breaking pain or whether you are shouting hoarsely The screams, it was gnawing so hard, and seemed to be destroying everything I had. Relatives and friends are far away, thousands of miles away from me. Can they also hear the cruel roar of the wind? Have they received my letter home? Perhaps, the letters home have drifted in the endless sky with the smoke of war, or perhaps they have been bitten by the ruthless wind and refused to let go. But why doesn't it swallow up all my bitter emotions?
So that I can indulge in this desolate, sad early spring in February.
The maple forest is completely dyed, and the autumn leaves are falling. When will I be able to see my relatives and friends? I'm afraid the mountains will block us. My thoughts are as sad as late autumn, and like thick hair, countless. Now, even the hair has been cut short, and even the hairpin cannot be inserted. 5. Guan Ju was rewritten into a 300-word essay, and Jianjia was rewritten into a 300-word essay
"Guan Guan, Guan Guan..."
The familiar sound of water birds sounded in my ears again. The rippling blue water of the lake is even more intoxicating under the swaying of a patch of waterlilies in the wind, just like her.
With a beautiful face and a graceful figure, she plucks watercress along the current, and her delicate hands are full in the evening. She is exactly the beauty I am looking for in my sleep, breathtakingly beautiful.
The funny thing is that the first time I tried to approach her, she was politely rejected. I, who had always been confident, suddenly couldn't find my direction. I felt lost and confused. It was dissolved in the wine and burned in my heart. For several nights, I couldn't sleep because I only had her in my mind. But for the next few days, I still couldn't even say a word to her.
I wanted to leave, but unexpectedly I saw her again before leaving. She was still walking through the patch of waterlilies like a fairy, with her delicate hands still as graceful as ever. But I am not qualified to be by her side, I just want to leave this heartbreaking place alone. . Thinking of this, a feeling of sadness came to my heart. I untied the Yaoqin tied behind my back and played a solo song "Beauty Pity". I wanted to vent my depression, but I couldn't suppress my admiration. When the song ended, I couldn't help but sigh again, and I thought: It's time to go.
"That song just now was "Beauty's Pity"?"
I looked up in surprise, and it turned out that she had parked the boat next to me without knowing it. At that time, I simply didn’t know what to say. I was so surprised that I forgot to answer.
She looked at me with a smile, "Master, can you play one more song?"
"Please give me some advice."
In the next ten days or so, Every day when the sun sets, I will always sit by the lake and play for her as she walks among the water plants, and she starts to sing happily along with the melody. The low-flying and chirping waterbirds, the waterlilies swaying in the wind, and the songs and tunes echoing on the lake. . I suddenly found that this place is more beautiful and full of hope than before.
But now, the sunset without her seems so bleak.
The waterfowl are still flying low, the water plants are still swaying in the wind, and the Yao Qin on my lap has not played music for a long time. I wonder if the melody it plays is still beautiful.
A gust of wind blew by, and the love song from the past sounded again, giving blessings to her who once circulated among the water plants, and also to bless the beloved in the distance. . ..
Jianjia
In the early morning, the crystal clear dewdrops dotted the white reeds by the river. A figure was hiding in the haze. You looked back and smiled, which immediately attracted my attention. Endless lovesickness. I only drink a gourd of water from three thousand dollars. Are you willing to give me that chance? My beloved, do you still remember the first time we met? Although you are standing on the other side of the water, it is not difficult to arouse my infinite reverie about you. When I turn around, I am amazed by your extraordinary worldliness. "If you want to compare the West Lake to the West, it is always better to put on heavy makeup and light makeup." I think so. That's it. But beautiful things are often easily shattered. Suddenly you disappeared from my eyes without a trace, leaving only the lingering fragrance of your rouge in the air. I have to look for your beautiful shadow in the reeds. I am willing to go upstream, but I see the difficulty and length of the road. Going down the river, you seem to be in the middle of the water. The reeds are still so lush, and the dewdrops have not faded away. The difference is that you stood on the bank of the river and smiled lightly at me, which made me intoxicated. If missing you is a mistake, I am willing to make it forever, just because beauty is like jade.
I long for you and remember each other. On the way home, all I could think about was you. Your every frown and smile are deeply engraved in my heart. Time without you is like cold winter without spring to cling to. Without you by my side, my four seasons will be only winter. The belt is getting wider and I don’t regret it anymore. I feel haggard because of Yi. Apart from thinking about you, I have almost nothing to do. A chance encounter made me fall in love. I am determined to make you a promise: We will Together forever!
You were still playing hide and seek with me by the Reed River. The flying reeds confused me. Maybe God already knew my thoughts. You passed me by with a reed in your hand. Buddha said: Looking back five hundred times in the past life only leads to one passing by in this life. Since you and I have missed so many times in our previous lives, how could I give up so easily in this life? Injured by love and suffering by love, I only care about you, so I let that reed become a token between us. Your token pierces my heart, but it also reveals your loneliness. I want to hold you tightly and hold you in my arms. What I want is not a vigorous and life-or-death love. I just want a long-lasting love between us.
Did you know how pleasantly surprised I was when you shyly handed the reed to me? The reed dancing in the wind cheered us up. You ran away blushing. Your shyness made my heart beat. I knew you couldn't escape. Lost, we no longer need to be separated from the two sides of the Taiwan Strait, because the happiness of "holding hands and growing old together" between us has just begun!
You may need to delete some, I hope it will be helpful to you 6. Adapt the trip to the waterside into a 300-word essay
Water, flowing endlessly, is the milk that nourishes all living things; water, Slowly flowing downward, gentle and gentle; the water carves into the stone walls and penetrates the rocks, never fearing... Today, I came to the picturesque water town and experienced its beauty personally.
As soon as I arrived in the water town, my eyes lit up. The first thing that caught my eye was the road in the water town. The roads in the water town are paved with water and clouds, which are poetic and picturesque. Why can the cloud also pave the way? Ha, because the water in the water town is extremely clear, and the figures of the white clouds playing freely in the sky are clearly reflected. Therefore, water and clouds have become the protagonists of the water town roads. This is the first time I have heard of it!
Hey, isn’t that a fishing net? Wow! There are so many fishing nets hanging all over the trees. I hurried forward and saw that it was indeed a fishing net. There were so many fishing nets that I could use them as door curtains! It seems that people in the water town make a living by fishing. There are only a few families living on the shore, and the reflection in the water makes it even more quiet and peaceful. How pleasant it is! I like this elegant style.
It is autumn now. The pomegranates in the water town are ripe and as red as fire. The green branches are dancing in the wind. What a beautiful scenery! Unfortunately, no one watched it. The doors of every house are locked. They may have gone to work in the fields. They are so hardworking and capable! Red pomegranates, green willows and water villages, one red and one green, moving and still, set off each other, the scenery is really beautiful!
I don’t know if the people from the water town are in the farmland, let’s go find them. When I came to the rice fields, I felt like I was in a golden ocean, with no end in sight. The wind was blowing, a little strong, and the rice was stirring. There are waves on the sea, making a roaring sound. The sound of the waves is so nice! The rows of golden pearls herald a bumper harvest. The rice fields are accompanied by the croaking of frogs, and a beautiful picture appears on the paper.
In the evening, the cicadas stopped chirping. At this time, it became much quieter. The water town in the south of the Yangtze River has misty waves, shrouded in smoke, and everything is hazy. Looking from a distance, it feels like you are in a paradise, so intoxicating!
We are leaving, but we are really reluctant to leave. I really hope that I can visit here for a while longer. At this time, the children took up the oars and rowed the boat. The boat sailed steadily and fast. It seems that the rowing skills of the children in the water town are really high! Accompanied by the sound of gurgling water, we left this picturesque Jiangnan water town...
Hope you will adopt it! ! ! ! ! The number of words may be a little less 7. Rewrite "Like a Dream" from Scenery Composition 300 to 400
Rewrite "Like a Dream"
One summer morning, Li Qingzhao sat alone in the antique In the pavilion, looking at the beautiful scenery of the lake, she couldn't help but think of the scene a few days ago when she and her friends were drinking and admiring flowers.
It was a summer afternoon, and Li Qingzhao and her friends were paddling a boat and enjoying the scenery on the lake. In the middle of the lake, the sky is covered with green, and the lotus leaves are crowded together, like big round umbrellas spread out on the water. Delicate lotus flowers emerge from the middle of the lotus leaves in various shapes, like flawless jade. Some have only a greenish-white bud, shy and ready to bloom; some are only half-opened, with some petals scattered and others clustered around the stamens, like a man in a long gown, "still holding a pipa half in his arms". The beauties with "covered faces"; those who are fully opened, dancing like girls in pure white clothes; those whose petals have fallen off, revealing green lotus pods, and the small holes on the lotus seeds seem to be small mouths, opening Open your throat and shout: "I'm mature, come and pick it!" The lotus exudes a fresh and elegant fragrance, attracting butterflies to play. Small fish jumped happily in the clear lake water, and ripples appeared on the surface of the lake.
Li Qingzhao and his friends rowed a small boat among lotus leaves and smelled the fragrance. They couldn't help but sing: "It's quiet in the lotus pond..." Li Qingzhao and his friends enjoyed the beautiful scenery, sang songs, and drank wine. , indulge in the summer lotus picture.
As time goes by, the setting sun gradually converges its light and becomes gentle, like a big red lantern with soft flames, hanging on the horizon. Only then did Li Qingzhao and her friends realize that it was getting dark. Li Qingzhao hurriedly said: "It's getting dark. My parents will be worried if we don't go back." "That's right." Her friends agreed. Li Qingzhao picked up the oar and rowed desperately. His friends also shouted: "Pull quickly! Row quickly!" However, because it was dark and Li Qingzhao was a little drunk, he accidentally rowed the boat deep into the lotus. . Everyone was rushing to paddle, rushing to paddle, and almost overturned the boat, causing a big splash. The water birds that were resting nearby were frightened by the splash, spread their white wings, and flew up. Some of them flapped their wings and flew straight into the sky, some flew for a while and then stopped on the beach on the shore, and some circled in the air while chirping, as if blaming them for disturbing their sweet dreams.
Thinking of this, Li Qingzhao became very excited about the lyrics and couldn't help but chant:
Like a dream order
I often remember the sunset in the Xiting Pavilion,
Drunk and not knowing the way back.
Returning to the boat late after all the fun,
straying into the depths of lotus flowers.
Fight for the crossing, fight for the crossing,
Startled a pool of gulls and herons.