There are some problems in the structure of individual words, which are generally good. The strokes are not strong enough, and there is no feeling of combining rigidity with softness. More practice should improve it. The third word is a bit frivolous, not only the font is a bit out of shape, but also the brushwork is not clear. It is suggested to contact regular script before learning running script. There are regular script, official script and seal script to choose from when getting started. It is suggested to learn regular script or official script first to lay a good foundation. Later, I will naturally learn running script and cursive script (Zhao Mengfu, Mi Fei, Wang Duo, etc. One more thing, when practicing orthographic calligraphy, you'd better pay attention to the relationship between words (size, shape, etc. ) and don't isolate every word. Think about it, this is a whole.
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