It is incorrect that the word order of multi-layer attributives exceeds 2/3. Improper order of attributive head words 4. Adverbial position obstacles and improper word order of coordinate words or phrases 6. [Example 1] With good working experience of 30 years, the topics and related vocabulary of Professor Peking University are out of order. Reading: Peking University, 30 years experience, excellent professor. 2。 Writing the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been in the reading room in recent days, eagerly reading books. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. He jumped out of the pond and came to the swimming pool. The swimming passed quickly. He jumped out of the pond and reached the swimming pool, and the swimming passed quickly. We studied it carefully and listened to your opinions. Words may reflect the order of acceptance, and must meet the objective requirements of the semantic order of words with serious degree in primary and secondary schools. Learning to "listen" In this case, the relationship that has been reversed should be changed to "listen") Five students and teachers' leaders attended the opening ceremony. (Should replace "leaders, teachers, students") 6. Take a look at the flowers blooming in the wilderness. It should be an open competition of "Let a Hundred Flowers Bloom for Brilliance" and "Wild Mountain Flowers as Backup". The Palace Museum recently exhibited cultural relics newly unearthed more than 2,000 years ago. In the original sentence, it was more than 2000 years ago, but this is not the case, because there is no word order at present (what is "heritage"? The exhibition of "Zhuanli" was newly unearthed after the misunderstanding of ideographic meaning. )8。 This village has well implemented the Party's policies and become rich. Not only sold the grain tax to the country, but also gave the country 6 million Jin of relief, not eating. This road. They explore their own judgment, what they are looking for, what they are thinking, (they should read "for their own way, think about their own judgment, they are exploring, they are looking for") [Analysis of the classic questions in the college entrance examination 1] (improper word order) 1. Some problems in the document are in the economic field, and they are specified in detail and expounded profoundly in theory and policy. (1994) Through research and discussion, we found and solved the following problems in extracurricular activities. (1995) [Is classroom consolidation training a mistake? The FBI arrested professional spy Em, which opened the door for intelligence personnel who provided top secret information in American intelligence history. 2。 Many masterpieces of China's ancient paintings and calligraphy are not only artistic treasures among human treasures, but also national artistic treasures. (97) Not only his love for playing Go, but also his history and research expertise in the development of chess. wrong
Related words don't match. Attributive prefix (host country) does not match. Incorrect verb-The predicate of does not match 5. Improper collocation of subject and object. Automatically fill in the adverbials and head words (predicates) of mismatched edges and both sides [Example 2]. The life of a standard person is constantly improving. At that moment, his revolutionary spirit returned to my mind. ("Spirit" and "emerging" are not verbs. Spirit and image) 3. Make a rustling sound, waves and the sea? What kind of beautiful picture the silver composition should be. (The theme of "sound wave" and "sea", sound wave can not be predicated to form subject-predicate relationship, which comes from rustling, sound wave or other verbs) 4. Due to close planting and strengthened management, rice production in this county generally grows well. ("Production" and "good-looking" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship, so we should show "deletion" and make "rice" the theme) 5. Every time I look back on my life and his daily life, his amiable voice and smile, and my mother's teaching come to my mind. ("teaching" and "forming improper verbs can get rid of the relationship between" mother teaching ". "It's better to add" in my ear "6 to the verb relationship." The novel Song of Youth describes the heroic deeds of Lu Jiachuan, Jiang Hua and Lin Hong brilliantly. ("Shaping" and "deeds" can't form the SVO relationship, "standing to become a Buddha" and "image") 7. The soldiers braved the heavy rain and muddy roads to make rapid progress. ("Chuangguan" and "Path" cannot form the relationship between predicate objects. Add "middle" and "upper" before muddy path) 8. The students watched and listened to the report of Laoshan hero with admiration. (The joint predicate "Look" cannot match the object's "Report" and can be deleted) 9. Farmers' cultivation of private plots is a kind of legal labor (improper guest), which conforms to the relevant policies and regulations. Two parallel lines with short regulatory rules will always be the elusive end point. (The judge ruled that the patrons in the sense are not patrons. In this sense, they are equipped with the same area to engage in. In this case, the improper "endpoints of two parallel lines" are obviously matched correctly, and the "endpoints" are used instead of "straight lines") 1 1, and we firmly believe that China's industry and agriculture will become a developed country in such a day. The object of the sentence is a verb phrase, but the backbone of life with short predicates, industry and agriculture, have become guests with obvious improper national significance, and "country" has changed to "industry". (92)2。 All of them are extremely unfavorable climatic conditions and geographical conditions, and the climbers still overcome difficulties and successfully climbed to the top. (93 )3。 With a compass and clouds, you can see the sun sooner or later and you won't get lost. (92)4。 Their difficulties are not frustrating, but our trust and caring strength have established confidence to overcome them. (1997) 【 Analysis of the classic questions of the college entrance examination 2-B 】 Driven by technological progress, a factory is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes and new materials. (95) Do bees know how much labor is contained in a catty of honey? According to scientists' statistics, bees collect about 500,000 pollen per pound when brewing honey. (1993) 【 Analysis of Classical Questions in College Entrance Examination -C 】 He immediately called the Standing Committee to make unified arrangements, including contents, time, attendance and issues that should be paid attention to in the meeting. ( 1995)8。 Education and assistance to backward youth cultural centers, preservation of youth space and cultural stumbling have been commended by superiors many times. (93)9。 In recent years, China has accelerated the development speed and scale of higher education, and colleges and universities will further expand the enrollment scale and focus on building a number of high-level/>; , illogical
1。 The concept of scope is not clear. Once again, denial causes confusion. The subject and object are reversed. The related words are incorrect [Example 3]. At night, from a distance, the whole building is completely dark, and only one room is still lit. (contradiction) 2. Because, but he is still not at ease. (Related error). I'm not interested in math. The subject of the sentence is "I" and the object is "Mathematics", which should be changed to "My Mathematics". Ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered is no stranger to young people in China. (How to change China Youth ostrovsky, How Steel was Tempered, No Stranger) More than 800 people and tens of thousands of arms fought day and night in the storm and flood. How can more than 800 children be armed? It should be "thousand" and "ten thousand") and his energy went to the university to study and completed all the courses, and he spent three years in school. ("all the courses in the university" is very huge. Just three years to complete the goal, standing there watching the endless sea "all" can get rid of the shore. Our eyes will see the spectacular scene that our ancestors made at sunrise, rested at sunset and returned. Because of the "eyes" on the sea, the map should be submitted after the scene in the sea. The sentence means to see what is seen on the spot, and the land is inconsistent. "Sea" has been replaced by "vast land") This year, 90% of the students in our school participated in the "Volunteer Commando". ("All" table, and the front wheel is limited to "90%". In case of inconsistency, delete "all") 9. No one will deny that the Yangtze River flows eastward. (Do not deny, affirm, affirm that the east of the Yangtze River is obviously not in line with the objective facts, and it is still the second place.) Article 10 is not a fact that you can refuse. Shouldn't you study hard? The answer to the rhetorical question is that the opposite sentence means a sentence. If the question is not a rhetorical question, then negation is appropriate, but it is eliminated by a rhetorical question with the opposite meaning of "no". In the past 1 1 year, he also did not forget to collect and sort out folk songs and accumulated a lot of information. ("all the time" or "any time", this sentence expresses opposite meanings, "forget" and "become") 12. Young workers, old workers and women attending the railway workers' congress. Young workers and elderly workers with inappropriate quotations are divided by the same standard, while "women" is a different standard, which cannot form a parallel relationship with the previous two times. Remove "women") 13. The study efforts and scientific and cultural knowledge of all members, especially junior high school students. (Including the word "special", it needs to be emphasized that the object should be mentioned earlier, and some concepts and scopes can only be related to the students of the previously formed "League members". Students should change the relationship between the size of middle school students. ") 14。 Go shopping to buy toothpaste, toothbrush and daily necessities. (Toothpaste, toothbrush) and "daily necessities" are not tied, subordinate and can't be tied, but should be "harmony". Three taboos for sleep: one is not angry before going to bed, the other is not enough to eat before going to bed, and the third is when there is no wind. (94)2。 Lei Feng spirit, of course, you should give it new meaning, but no one can deny it. Don't you need to learn from Lei Feng now? (98) In ancient times, this kind of musical works only had written records, and without musical materials, they could not be played or sung. (1995) Cai Wenji, a complex large-scale historical drama of Beijing People's Art Theatre, is scheduled to be staged in capital theatre on May 1 day, just before the rehearsal. (200 1)5。 Newspapers, magazines, televisions and all publications have a greater responsibility to set an example in order to eliminate the phenomenon of irregular characters and raise awareness of the language norms used. (2000) On June 3, 2009 17, six members were dismissed because of the bribery scandal of the International Olympic Committee. The next day, the world's major newspapers shocked the details of international sports events. (99) 【 classroom consolidation training 】 is wrong. Is there anything wrong with the following wrong sentence? In order to prevent such traffic accidents, we have also strengthened education and traffic safety management. 2。 In recent years, I have been collecting and sorting out folk songs almost all the time. Our teenagers lack theoretical level and time experience. After studying hard, Comrade Fang scored an average of more than 90 points in the final exam. The next night, there was no one in the classroom. Amy was still looking for a flashlight in the classroom, sneaking around in a remote town, providing customers with all kinds of supplies, clothing, stationery and home appliances. A large supermarket was about to open. According to preliminary statistics, nearly 20% of the savings in 8. 10 were for future endowment insurance. The published variety of this book has more than doubled, while the total print run has remained basically the same, with an average of more than doubled per book.
4 Unstructured
Two different sentence patterns are mixed 2. From customer to customer 3. Halfway [Example 4]1. The school has assigned our class a task, and we have an indescribable sense of honor. China people's (mixed) ideology is Marxism-Leninism, because under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong, the China Revolution has greatly changed its face. (midway) 3. Schoolwork burdens students, and the whole buried work pile of teachers is too hard. (a year of anti-customer. As a leading cadre of the proletarian party, I think this issue should proceed from the fundamental interests of the party and the people. From the second half of the year, "two-mixture", from "to") 5. Throughout the ages, no one can deny genius and diligence. The predicate part is a mixture of a judgment sentence and a statement sentence, which together with the sentence structure at the end of the sentence constitutes "..." Emphasize "yes") 6. Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House will also be deleted. The author of Survival is a writer who has lived overseas, Canadian and China for 20 years. (rhetorical questions and declarative sentences, it is conceivable to remove the words "harmony" and "political achievements". ") [College Entrance Examination Classic 4] (Structural disorder) problem. With the rapid development of electronic industry and its extensive penetration into all walks of life, the key is to speed up the training of a large number of professional and technical personnel. (93) The failure to cultivate "innovation" is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country and the fundamental task of education. (96) How to make everyone rich The key knowledge of IT has played a decisive role. The lack of knowledge will inevitably lead to the prosperity of the poor, and sufficient wealth is often based on the richness of knowledge. (200 1 Spring) It is not difficult for us to see that the fundamental reason for delaying a fair judgment is the party's style of work. (200 1)5。 The Consumer Protection Law is very popular with consumers, because it strengthens people's awareness of self-protection and protects their rights to the maximum extent. (99) [Classroom consolidation training] Are the following wrong sentences wrong? Being good at discovering and using people's practical ability plays an important role in the development of enterprises. 2. At the end of the 20th century, the ability of peaceful people to enter the new century depends on their sober judgment of the trend of the western capitalist world and their wise use of force against freedom. 3。 It is a major new issue concerning whether the party's educational policy can be fully implemented and whether students can really be cultivated into "four haves". Thanks to his hard work and perseverance, he has made such great achievements. 5。 When the superior announced this task, we felt a sense of glory and happiness, which is really indescribable. 6。 With the remarkable rapid growth, international trade, international investment and transnational operation have become a new economic force, showing its great role in the international arena. Bird migration is often affected by changes in the external environment. Unrecognized ideograph 1 is not difficult to understand. Ambiguity refers to the unknown [Example 5]1. Because the teacher is strict with myself, I have made great progress in my three years of high school life. ("own" actually refers to the teacher's words, or "I" is unknown according to the context.) Two days ago, old alumni met in Zhang Qing and Wang Jie, and he said, "Do you know him?" (The study of "harmony" refers to Zhang Qing or Wang Jie changing "Zhang Qing") [Analysis of Classical Chinese Test Questions in College Entrance Examination 5] (meaning unknown) 1. The notice from the county asked Zhang Zhaoxiang to report on June 5th (1994) 2. Someone wrote in the letter of the secretary group of the academic conference: As long as your unit agrees to reimburse travel expenses and accommodation arrangements, the conference may solve this problem. ( 199 1)3。 When the vagrants found out that the Forestry Bureau took the lead in smuggling timber, they were generally very angry. Four people entered the teaching building. The history and posters of Macao are hung on the walls on both sides of the corridor. You will see all the photos. (Spring 2000). At the beginning of this year, the United States and Britain have formed a very deterrent force, once the clouds of war gather in the Gulf region. It is necessary for students who are interested in liberal arts to strengthen the counseling service for liberal arts, but should we just study physical chemistry in science study? In order to make students have a reasonable knowledge structure, our answer is yes. How did he do in class? According to the actual situation reflected by his teachers, this is not the case. [Classroom consolidation training] The following sentences are wrong: 1. It is not allowed to set up billboards outside stations, docks, airports, parks and commercial areas. How to improve students' language expression ability quickly is a special concern of a middle school Chinese teacher. The heads of three departments criticized him. I saw Bird carrying a black handbag and helping the old man out of the car. In the interview, the reporter denied that the alien's visit to W State and N City was based on 6. With the development of economy and traditional morality, what else do you want? How to choose benevolence, righteousness and propriety? Our answer is yes. Further bowl, is it brave to catch and kill? According to some historical records, this is not the case. Knowledge innovation and technological progress industry, the development of this industry will be in a rapid rising stage and become a sunrise industry; Instead, it became a sunset industry. 9。 It is not easy to collect historical materials, and it is easier to identify and apply them than China's past writers.
Six components are redundant or incomplete.
1 is the main force of subject-predicate repetition 2, and its composition exceeds 1. The modifier of the sum of the three predicates of the object with repeated predicates is repeated four times left and right, and the attribute is repeated five times relative to the head language. Representation of adverbial central language [Example 6- 1]. Generally speaking, the official salary of foreign experts should be higher than or maintain the probation period, and the salary should not be lower than the probation period. (It has been above or maintained below the "limited explicit exclusion", and then the probation salary is lower than the repetition, which should be deleted. ) 2 Star Winery decided to keep Chen Xinyao in the factory for two years, with monthly living expenses and bonus free. Before the second sentence, there is a statement about living expenses, which has excluded the bonus, saying "bonus", which should be deleted. Xuelian brand shirts, both in style and quality. Still packaging, it can be called first-class in the country. ("worthy" means "can", then "before", wordy, it should be from "can"), judging from his weak breath, he didn't die there, but our breath. (Previously called "weakness" and "death" have been included) 5. I didn't do well in the exam this time because I didn't check the teacher's requirements carefully. After the redundant subject "reason", "because" repeatedly gets rid of "reason" because) 6. Lao She's writing style has always been that people share weal and woe. (It should be from Style) 7. The handouts borrowed from the hospital are finally printed and can be distributed to students before class. The predicate "redundant" should be deleted. Ten players on the basketball court are all great. ("HIT" is redundant and should be deleted) 9. Life's efforts, complete works of the novel "Human Tragedy" written by Balzac, a famous French novelist. Today, I came to Slender West Lake and visited Baita, Diaoyutai, Wu Ting Bridge and scenic spots. ("local" is redundant and should be deleted) 1 1. Fertile land and rich mineral deposits, the mountains are covered with countless treasures. (The redundant component "various" should be deleted) 12. Before the start of the new semester, we were engaged in military training, and the military training coach was in charge of the company's beard and small eyes. (Responsible for military training "is redundant and should be deleted) 13. It is a nature to judge whether it is a positive or negative way of thinking. (The redundant "whether" should be deleted) 14. Fruits all over the mountain: pears, apples, persimmons ... (Because of the repetition of "All over the Mountain" and "Everywhere", it is better to delete "Everywhere" because of its emphasis) 15, simplifying the number of words and slightly deleting them. (The former "omitted" repeats "part" and can be deleted) [Analysis of Classical Questions in College Entrance Examination -A] (Extra component), he is always quiet at ordinary times, but as long as he talks about his favorite major in academic conferences, he is extremely active and talkative. (97 years old), everything depends on the masses, otherwise it has nothing to do with yourself. (88 years old). Yesterday was the last day of the transfer deadline. China Football Association and 25 players they accepted submitted transfer applications. (98)4。 The only classic view of this book has been widely circulated and enduring for nearly 300 years, and it is still regarded as a valuable anthology. (Spring of 2000) 5 Short Online Participants Apart from the staff of Peking University, teachers, students and scientific and technological workers from Tsinghua and other 15 universities also participated in this study. [Classroom consolidation training] Are the following wrong sentences wrong? Establishing good learning ethics is the primary task of all kinds of sports workers. . Listening to the introduction of people who look at the upside-down family, I feel sincerely admired and happy. We must give severe legal sanctions to those laws and government cadres who know the law and break the law. 4。 There are many silent subtext behind this sentence. Cotton production in central China is very important, and it is pointed out that cotton production has a great development and accelerated direction. During the meeting, we also visited several township enterprises and experienced the development of Hongqi Town in a way of "introducing from inside". The third reason for the accelerated development of natural science is the most concentrated, creative and adventurous talents in the scientific field. "8。 The power of habit makes them turn a blind eye. The public security bureau detained me for no reason and arrested me. Incomplete subject and incomplete predicate. An incomplete object. Incomplete modifier. Incomplete [Example 7]1. With the help of teachers and classmates, I have made rapid progress. Due to the preposition or preposition structure used, the original topic lacks adverbial. The theme of the sentence is dismemberment, mainly the main body of the sentence, which should be "harmony" or delete "harmony" from "harmony" The tiger kidnapped zhou wenbin, a gifted scholar in the south of the Yangtze River. A tiger took him home and sent him to his sister Wang Xiuying's room. The school's teaching achievements are remarkable, and the provincial education commission, which has been overshadowed many times, is also worthy of attention. The subject of the previous sentence is "political achievements", and then there is a misunderstanding of the first one-the second theme of "school" should be added before the first clause, which is omitted, and the theme is "school". After a winter's hard work, a 4-meter-high, 700-meter V-shaped weir dam stands tall beside Tianmu Lake in nanpu bridge. (Because the long sentence says or forgets the structure of the previous predicate, it is the main reason for the incompleteness of the predicate. In this case, the topic in front is whether "Nanpu people" echoes the predicate behind, and whether it should be "so" in front. The business sector should respond to the call of an active government and publicize and educate people about the significance of product sales in a big way. The students in our school discussed that the meaning of life is dedication. After a semester, the school looks great. In the old society, working people had enough to eat and lived a warm life. (Or remove "fate", "eat enough and wear warm clothes" as predicates, or "short life" before "eating") The Party Committee of No.8 Middle School discussed the patriotic health campaign carried out by teachers and students. In this case, there is no predicate that the center of the object discussed should be its end point, and so on. The History of Entrepreneurship is a novel describing the socialist revolution in rural areas. The text is written in the newly established unit, Liangbaoguo County purchased new rice for the realization of the wheat and rice plan (to be added in the predicates of "telling stories" and "writing") 10. They enthusiastically for the country, for the world, vigorously carry forward the courage to fight, and finally won the championship. (In "Dare to Blog", add "Spirit" and "Predicate" to carry forward "Echo") 1 1, so as to achieve excellent results, we must work hard. (Lack of necessary additional items will lead to inaccurate expression. In this case, only the employers who work "did not" achieve excellent results. " Strong and effective "hedging" before labor +02. In spring, wheat grows well and the harvest is gratifying. (Time should be "supplemented") 【 JEE Classic Question 7 】 (Incomplete ingredients) Comprehensively promote the use of pig rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of animal husbandry. The county held three training courses on feeding technology (97). Why is it such a waste of talents that it is ignored by relevant departments? After (93), the old director repeatedly explained that it was to calm his anger, and finally he finally smiled on his face. (93) [Classroom consolidation training] Are the following sentences wrong? From a large number of observation facts, it tells us that it is best to grasp the changing weather and observe the data every hour. I am very moved by the conscientious and responsible work of craftsmen and their selfless work. 3。 The performance of Romanian artists won warm welcome from all walks of life, and this successful performance was highly praised. It is very serious to review the educational front destroyed by the "Cultural Revolution". The successful launch of the experimental communication satellite indicates that China has independently built, developed, launched, tracked, measured and controlled the geosynchronous orbit communication satellite engineering system test. 6。 Because of these hybrid rice, rice with high yield, insect resistance and re-education is more popular than imported rice and is welcomed by local farmers. On the way to the artillery position, the cook Zhu suddenly dressed as a tourist and faced him. The person in charge of the Technical Supervision Bureau of the State Administration for Industry and Commerce stressed that it is a long-term task to control the illegal activities of counterfeit and shoddy goods, especially the production of counterfeit wine. The report of Academician Li of China Academy of Social Sciences strengthened our efforts and basically realized modernization. By the time of the national crisis in 2005 10, only people like Professor Li could bear the fate and save the nation from peril, and designed two sets of floor exercises for the nation. 12 China strongly urges all nuclear-weapon States to negotiate and reach the conclusion that they will unconditionally not be the first to use nuclear weapons at the same time and use or threaten to use nuclear weapons against non-nuclear-weapon States and nuclear-weapon-free zones.
Seven. Improper classification
1, whether words of the same kind are put together as examples of the same kind: China Youth Daily and Science Illustrated I like to read two words of different sizes, such as autumn, mature ground crops and rice. Classification standards are different. Put the words together. Workers, farmers and young people involved in labor.