Second, the content of praise is mainly to write clearly who to praise and why to praise. As long as the facts are clear, no details are needed. This letter of commendation describes Wang Yijia's process of helping others. Some details, such as "separating everyone", "lifting gently", "squatting down", "panting" and "wiping the sweat on your face", need not be written.
Third, at the end of the commendation, it is necessary to emphasize what spirit or quality of the commended person is worth learning. This commendation noticed this point, such as changing it to "Wang Yijia's spirit of helping others is worth learning from all students" or "Students, let's all learn from Wang Yijia's spirit of helping others!" It would be better this way.
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She won honor for the school.
In this regional calligraphy competition, Zhang Chunhong of our class won the first prize and won honor for the school. Zhang Chunhong began to practice calligraphy at the age of six. Over the past few years, she has been persevering, practicing calligraphy for more than an hour every night, and humbly asking for advice, so she has achieved good results. She said that the calligraphy art of the motherland has a long history, and I must make unremitting efforts to continuously improve my calligraphy level. We wish her persistent efforts and great achievements!
Comment and analysis
This commendation takes less than 150 words to praise this "little calligrapher" who won glory for our school. Focus on her calligraphy practice. The content is concise, but it explains the problem. After reading it, people clearly understood why Zhang Chunhong was praised and why her calligraphy level was first-class in the whole region. The comments at the end were replaced by the words of the praised person and the author's wishes, and the effect was very good.
Learn from Lei Fenggui and stick to it.
The fifth (2) squadron of our school "Red Scarf Pumping Station" insists on doing good things like Lei Feng and being served well by the society.
Five (2) The squadron "Red Scarf Pumping Station" has been established for more than two years, and the young pioneers of the whole squadron have actively participated in this convenience activity. In the morning, four young pioneers are on duty, carrying pump and team flag, standing on the roadside to serve the passing cyclists. Whether it is cold winter or hot summer; Whether it is windy or rainy, they never stop. In the service, they learn from Uncle Lei Feng, treat passers-by as warm as spring, and bring convenience to the masses.
(2) The squadron "Red Scarf Cheering Station" learned from Lei Feng with practical actions, which is worth learning from the young pioneers of the whole school. Let's work together to make the spirit of Lei Feng shine forever in our school.
Comment and analysis
In the name of the Young Pioneers Brigade, this commendation praised the "Red Scarf Pumping Station" of the Fifth (2) Squadron. The draft briefly describes the story of "pumping station" learning from Lei Feng and serving the people.
This commendation meeting was written around "learning from Uncle Lei Feng", which played a role in encouraging the members of the "gas station" and calling on the young pioneers of the whole school.
It's valuable to find money without ignorance.
On Sunday, my classmate Zhang Lin found a wallet in Guangming Shopping Mall. He waited for a while, but when he saw that no one claimed it, he handed his wallet to the security team in the mall. There are RMB and 500 yuan in the wallet, as well as deposit slips and various certificates. With the help of the shopping mall, the owner was found. The owner went to the school to express his gratitude, praised Zhang Lin's spirit of collecting money, and thanked the school for cultivating such good students. We should learn from Zhang Lin's noble character and let the flowers of spiritual civilization bloom on campus.
Comment and analysis
This letter of commendation praised Zhang Lin's spirit of finding money by simply describing the process of finding the wallet. Finally, I call on all students to learn this noble character. The praised content is true, the praised students are admirable, and the praised spirit is no exaggeration.
A good example of studying hard.
Among the fifth "Top Ten Teenagers" in our school, there is a good student who studies very hard. He is Li Xiaoning from Class Six (4).
Li Xiaoning studies very hard at ordinary times. Every day, he consciously reviews what he learned that day and previews the subjects he will learn the next day. His academic performance has always been excellent. Last winter, unfortunately, Li Xiaoning hurt his right wrist and got a cast, so he couldn't write. He just took a day off on the day he went to the hospital and went to school as usual the next day. The teacher allowed him not to do his homework. However, Li Xiaoning insisted on doing his homework with his left hand. Although it took him several times longer, he finished it bit by bit and handed in his homework on time every day. In the final exam, Li Xiaoning achieved excellent results again.
The students all praised Li Xiaoning's diligence. He said: "Studying hard is what every student should do. If you don't learn knowledge well today, what will you use to serve the motherland in the future? " All our classmates should learn from his spirit of consciously studying hard.
Comment and analysis
Because Zan is one of the "Top Ten Teenagers" in the school, the length is a little longer. After introducing Li Xiaoning's spirit of hard struggle, this paper focuses on an example to illustrate it. It's really commendable that you can persist in going to school and doing your homework with your left hand after your hand is injured. He is a good boy who studies hard. Finally, Li Xiaoning pointed out his motivation to study hard in his own words, just right.
A campaign speech generally consists of three parts: title, title and text.
1. Title. There are two common ways for the title of campaign speeches: one is single title. Namely: reason+language. It is to directly explain the position of the election and show the language. The second is the double champion. It consists of a title and a subtitle. The main title is at the top, summarizing the central content of the speech, and the subtitle is below, connected by dashes, indicating the reason and language.
2. Address. How to address it depends on the audience. Generally, general terms are used, such as "Leader Flying" and "Comrade". Address forms should be written in capital letters and arranged in an orderly manner.
3. Text. The main body of a campaign speech consists of three parts: the beginning, the body and the end.
(1). Generally speaking, campaign speeches don't last long. Therefore, a wonderful and powerful beginning is very important. It is necessary to attract people's attention and immediately grab the audience's attention. There are three common beginnings:
(1) Sincere thanks. That is to express your gratitude in sincere language.
② Introduction method. Just introduce yourself briefly at the beginning of the speech. Although it is a brief introduction, there is also the problem of introducing art. In the practice of campaign speeches, some speakers introduce themselves just like filling out resumes. This kind of introduction can hardly arouse Xin Zhong's emotions. On the contrary, if the speaker can pin his self-introduction on a concise and meaningful language carrier, the effect will be very different.
③ Expression of emotions. Is to express your feelings when you run for office.
(2) Theme
The main contents of campaign speeches should include the following aspects:
1 show advantages. This part is actually to explain why and why to compete. As we all know, the purpose of campaign speech is to let the audience have a full understanding of the speaker, so as to identify whether he is qualified for the position. If they think you are qualified, they will not hesitate to vote for you. On the other hand, it will be anonymous. Therefore, when the speaker introduces himself, he must be targeted, that is, introduce his education, experience, political quality and professional ability to build momentum for the election. In the introduction, he should show his strengths as much as possible. Such as existing political achievements, higher education, strong dedication, profound theoretical foundation, rich practical experience, consistent quality, hard-working spirit, etc. Of course, these advantages should not be comprehensive, but should be selected according to the function of the elected position. In other words, it is necessary to explain in detail the work experience, experience and achievements related to the election position, and you can leave out the irrelevant ones.
2 briefly introduce your own shortcomings. We should show our weaknesses artistically, that is, turn them into advantages. There is something positive in the suppression, the devaluation is false, and the praise is true. Pay attention to discretion when introducing shortcomings. If you introduce your shortcomings too much and too carefully, it will damage your image in the eyes of the masses and the judges.
(3) indicate your plans after taking office. A candidate's own good basic conditions are the prerequisite for his successful election, but this alone is not enough. Many people are more concerned about the candidates' plans after taking office. Therefore, candidates must make their views clear in concise language when making campaign speeches. It is necessary to closely focus on the hot and difficult issues that the audience cares about, put forward clear work objectives and practical measures, and gain the trust and support of the audience.
(3) End
There are two common ways to end a speech:
1 hope type. It is at the end that I hope to get the support and help from New China.
2 attitude. It is to show your attitude at the end, that is, how you will perform your duties if elected.