1. There is nothing more indifferent than a clock in the world: at the moment you are born, at the moment you are picking the flowers of youthful dreams, it is the same every second. Tick ??tock.
——Golky's "The Clock"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphors, symbolism, personification and other techniques to express the ruthlessness of the clock and remind us to cherish time.
2. When people walk in the autumn colors, what they step on, what they wear in their hair, and what seems to be floating on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally are bright gold and gold.
——Yu Guangzhong's "Palmprint of the Left Hand"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid and vivid.
3. The snow is so white that it is illusory, and so cold that it is clear and sober. The overwhelming momentum of the snow makes it difficult to breathe, and makes people feel cold and sore.
——Yu Guangzhong's "Listen to the Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping words to show the phonological beauty of the text and the coldness and sadness of the snow.
4. The petals were still bright and dazzling when they fell to the ground, like the shed feathers of a big bird offered on the altar, and left with a heroic lament.
——Zhang Kangkang's "Peony's Rejection"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare falling flowers to feathers, showing the outstanding grace of peonies.
5. The orange-red houses are like old monks in bright cassocks, with their heads lowered and eyes closed, receiving baptism from the rain.
——Zhang Ailing's "Autumn Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare the house to an old monk, and writes about the calmness and desolation of the house in the rain.
6. Time is like a sharp knife. If used improperly, it will carve deep lines on a beautiful face and wear away the vigorous youth month after month and year after year. Lost.
——Zhang Ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphors and symbolic rhetorical techniques to express one's own views on time. Time is a knife. Is life good or bad? It depends on how well you grasp it.
7. Like a slap, bright red, bright red; like a fan, spread flat; like a blooming flower, never wither!
——"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses the rhetorical techniques of metaphor and parallelism to describe the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, and expresses the autumn leaves and autumn colors. of beauty.
8. A few friends are using the moonlight to draw bamboo shadows. You draw one stroke, and I draw one stroke. The colors are uneven, bright and dark, and it is a bit like Chinese painting.
——Feng Zikai's "Bamboo Shadow"
Appreciation: In just a few strokes, the scene of several friends painting is described. It is humorous, concise and unique, and full of emotion. The unique charm of Feng Zikai’s works.
9. The sun is shining brightly in the sky, the mountains are stretching, and the clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river.
Appreciation: Using metaphorical rhetorical techniques, comparing flowers to rivers, the language is exquisite, beautiful and contagious. The words are full of love for tung flowers, making readers feel as if they are seeing the tung flowers all over the mountains and plains. The scenery of blooming flowers.
10. He sadly raised his eyes to look at the sky. The stars were like jade-colored lilies floating on the clear lake.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical techniques to describe the stars very vividly. It compares the stars to lilies to highlight its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to the lake surface to describe its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am about to die, which reflects my regret.