Xu Ningshi: When spring comes, the thunder never stops. The ages are like flying white, and the world is broken.
Su Shi:
In ancient times, there were only immortal words. What do you know about flying and splashing? Don't wash evil poems for Xu Ning.
Throughout the ages, there are countless articles and poems, but how many immortal works can there be like Taibai? The emperor sends the milky way down. In ancient times, there were only fallen immortal poems. How many people know about jet stream and spray? They don't wash evil poems with Xu Ning. "In order to compare and thoroughly understand these two poems, we should first find out a little knowledge. In ancient times, the unit of measurement was seven feet or eight feet. Xu Ning wrote that at that time, the height of the waterfall was seven or eight thousands of feet, and now it is 2.5 kilometers. Xu Ning is more exaggerated than Li Bai. The word "eternity" is used in Xu Ning's poems. Let's talk about ancient times first. Ancient times refer to the past years far away from modern times. The historical stages in China mostly refer to ancient times before the middle of19th century (1850 years ago). In addition, the era of slave society was specially created in ancient times, sometimes including the primitive commune era. In this way, Xu Ning's "eternity" refers to a long period of time. He praised the age of Lushan Waterfall, but Li Bai didn't talk about it. In Xu Ning's poems, "White Lotus" is a white silk. Xu Ning's poems describing the waterfall as a kind of silk are written from four aspects. First, Jango (one kilometer). Fourth, Xu Ning also wants to write about the beauty of Lushan Waterfall and its eternal farewell, but as can be seen from the following analysis, he failed to do so. In fact, Xu Ning only wrote the feelings of non-poets. According to what I say now, his feelings are too popular. Facing Lushan Waterfall, even ordinary tourists can tell the height of the waterfall, thunder and flying silk white. The tearing of beautiful green mountains and so on, especially the poem "A Broken Green Mountain", only expresses the real scene in front of the poet, and his imagination is quite lacking. It can be said that there is almost no imagination, so the whole poetic landscape cannot be naturally extended. Of course, his poems are limited by the previous poetic thoughts, and it is impossible to have unexpected effects in the end. In a word, Xu Ning is too confined to the thing itself and lacks the window of imagination that a poet should have. The poet's imagination must fly. Up to now, some people only know how to write poems, but what they write is just self-righteous. Actually, it's not enough. We guess that Li Bai must have felt Xu Ning before writing the poem "Looking at Lushan Waterfall", but Li Bai just couldn't satisfy this superficial feeling. Any deep feeling will come from superficiality, but not superficiality. Until it can't be deepened, the first sentence of Li Bai's poem describes the majestic beauty of the mountain, outlines the background of the waterfall and buckles the word "king". Although straightforward, this sentence has played a great role, so that every reader can enter the grand scene from a distance. The third sentence "Flying, Down, Three thousands of feet" exaggerates its height. Writing its voice, we don't feel that the eardrum is shocked; We don't think it's long to write about flying stream. Li Bai said high, and we thought it was high; Without words, we feel their voices; Without words, strength and potential are far away, but our body and mind have already felt it. Why? I thought it all came from Li Baiyou's extraordinary imagination. He only thought of a "galaxy" image, which made everything enough. Why is the Milky Way above nine days? When there was no life on the earth, the Milky Way already existed. Why not long ago? The Milky Way has been pouring down for nine days. Does it sound like thunder? Is white silk the enemy of the Milky Way? In this way, Li Bai's poems can't be sung forever, but who can? Another feature of Li Bai's poems is that a towering "step" is cleverly set at the key point. We suspect that after seeing the waterfall, Li Bai's imagination deepened, so that "waterfall" and "Galaxy" have long been linked, but when writing, they are particular and appear suddenly. What should I do? " Flying down three thousands of feet ",Li Bai first raised the waterfall to a height by exaggeration, allowing readers to imagine going up a high step first, and then approaching nine days after boarding it. Next, "Suspected Milky Way Falls for Nine Days" is beyond imagination and reasonable. "Three thousands of feet" is not the ultimate height of the waterfall, but layers of "steps" reaching the sky, laying the groundwork for further imagination. So far, only the appearance of Galaxy shows the extreme height, majestic momentum, magnificent sound, brilliant light and the power to wash away everything of Lushan Waterfall, drowning readers in the surging Galaxy. "Galaxy" embodies the subjective feelings in Li Bai's poems. The power of "breaking a green hill" is too small. It seems that writing poetry can find the images of "meaning" and "emotion".