Keywords: Butterfly Grade 4
This article is suitable for: Grade 4
Composition source:
This 4-word composition is about Grade 4, with the title: "Flowers and Butterflies"-two imitations.
Original:
Flowers and Butterflies
Flowers are butterflies that can't fly, and
Butterflies are flying flowers.
Butterflies are flying flowers,
Flowers are flying butterflies.
A flower is a butterfly, and
A butterfly is also a flower.
Analysis
"Flowers are butterflies that can't fly, and butterflies are flying flowers. Flowers are butterflies, butterflies are flowers "a few simple words outline a wonderful picture of nature: several dancing butterflies, a garden full of delicate and charming flowers." Sometimes, butterflies stand between stamens and turn into flightless flowers; Sometimes, the flowers move with the wind, swaying colorful, and a group of flying butterflies in Wan Ru are full of demon postures in the sun ...
Appropriate and vivid metaphors and lively and lively poems show readers a harmonious and wonderful drunken scene of "Butterfly Lovers" and "Butterfly Lovers".
Imitation 1:
Street lamps and stars
Stars are dancing street lamps, and
Street lamps are dancing stars.
Street lamps are stars that can't dance.
Stars are street lamps that can dance.
Stars are street lamps, and
Street lamps are stars.
Appreciation
The stars are blinking on the Tianhe River, glowing with soft light, making the earth look quiet and hazy. The street lamp is an elf in the dark. It stands aloof from the rest of the world and always silently spreads light and dedicates love to those who come home late.
Stars and street lamps, one in the sky and the other on the ground, are engaged in the same lofty cause as angels ...
Imitation of "tidbits"
My mother said, "I like Flowers and Butterflies very much, and the poet expressed them clearly and emotionally in a few words, vividly!"
The daughter said, "There are many iris flowers downstairs, which look like butterflies. Sometimes butterflies are really like butterflies when they lie motionless on flowers. "
Mom said, "The poet caught the similarities between the two, so he got this fresh and lovely poem. Think about it, can we also find that there are two similar things in life? Maybe you can become a parody poet! "
my daughter suddenly became interested. But no particularly similar associations were found.
so, mother and daughter put it down. And smiled at each other.
In the evening, mother and daughter go out for a walk together. The lights on both sides of the road glowed with soft orange light. Suddenly looked up, but was hit by the stars in the Milky Way. So, my mother asked softly, "Why do you want to set up so many street lamps?"
The daughter said, "Street lamps are used to illuminate people who come back late after working overtime at night!"
"Good, there will be so many street lamps on both sides of the road soon!" Mother admired it with joy. I couldn't help asking, "Why do the stars come out at night?"
"There are people who work overtime in the sky. Look, WU GANG is still cutting down trees! Hey, where's WU GANG? The moon at the moment is really like a boat, so curved! "
"Hehe, is our little poet inspired now?" Under the mother's tickle, my daughter seems to remember the beautiful poem Flowers and Butterflies ... < P > So, there are Street Lights and Stars and Moon and Boat. Although simple, it also hides the little girl's observation and imagination.
Imitation II:
The Moon and the Boat
The curved moon is a boat that can't swim, and the boat is a curved moon that can swim.
The boat is a curved moon that can swim.
The curved moon is a boat that can't swim.
The curved moon is a boat.
The boat is also a curved moon.
on the night of June 15th, 21.