Landscape composition should be based on observation, especially for the middle part of the exercise. It is absolutely impossible without careful and accurate observation. Therefore, teaching students the method of observing scenery and letting them know what they are doing is the basis of writing a good article about scenery description.
First of all, students should learn to observe various organs and achieve the "five senses": sight, hearing, smell, taste and touch. Describe the scenery from different feelings, which makes people feel intimate. Such as: "Guilin Landscape" Lesson 1 "The water of Lijiang River is so quiet that you can't feel it flowing; The water in Lijiang River is very clear, and you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. The water in the Lijiang River is really green, as if it were a flawless jade ... "The author wrote from what he saw and heard, highlighting the quiet, clear and green characteristics of the Lijiang River. Another example is: "Watching the Tide" class "The tide is getting closer and closer, just like thousands of white horses go hand in hand and gallop; The sound was like a landslide, as if the earth were shaking. " The author writes vividly according to what he has seen and heard.
Second, let students learn to grasp the characteristics of the scenery and observe it from multiple angles, that is, grasp the shape, color, smell, sound and size of things ... For example, Xiao Hong's class "The flaming clouds here have changed a lot, from red to gold ... and there are some colors that can't be said or seen." "After a while, a horse appeared in the sky, with its head facing south and its tail facing west." How can the author's keen observation be unconvincing? Another example is "Lin Hai" written by Mr. Lao She, which is very skilled in color matching. On his palette, green is so changeable: just like a skilled painter, in his "deep, shallow, bright, dark and indescribable green." It's really beautiful and wonderful.
Third, let students learn to observe in order. There are usually several orders to describe the scenery: one is the time order, for example, when writing a tree, we can write what it looks like in each season according to the time order of spring, summer, autumn and winter; The other is the spatial order. For example, when we describe a mountain peak, we can write what it looks like from a distance, what it looks like from a close look, or what it looks like from above, what it looks like from below and so on. So that we can write in the order from far to near and from high to low; There is also the order from the whole to the part, from things to people, from dynamic to static; You can also write in sequence by changing the scene. In short, only by grasping the order of observation can the scenery described be clear and natural.
Second, use rhetoric skillfully and imagine properly.
Observation is only the accumulation method of material for scenery description and the prelude to writing a good article. On the basis of careful observation of the scenery, spreading the wings of imagination and depicting the state, color, sound and smell of the scenery by rhetorical means will leave a deep impression on people.
1, clever use of rhetoric. For example, "a thrush flew out, startled by our applause, flew into the leaves again, stood on a twig and cried excitedly." That song is really nice. " He vividly wrote the liveliness and loveliness of thrush by personification. Another example is "Guilin Landscape", in which the author develops association and imagination on the basis of observation. From the "strangeness" of Guilin Mountain, the author imagines that there are many kinds of strange peaks, including old people, elephants and camels. The rhetorical devices of metaphor are used to enrich the content of scenery and fully express the author's thoughts and feelings. Appropriate use of figures of speech such as metaphor, personification, exaggeration, quotation, rhetorical questions and parallelism. It is a necessary method to make words vivid. 2. Appropriate imagination. For example, in the article Lin Hai, the author thinks of architecture, wood and daily furniture from the beautiful and evergreen Lin Hai in Qian Shan. "How many provinces and cities have used the wood here!" This sentence closely links Daxinganling with all parts of the motherland, making people feel its existence and its decisive role in socialist construction, and the feeling of "kindness and comfort" surges in their hearts. With a reasonable imagination, you can write the scenery that will not be rumored vividly.
3. Add branches and leaves and use accurate words. Choose verbs and adjectives that can accurately reflect the characteristics of the scene. Accurate and vivid verbs and adjectives can vividly describe the form and dynamics of the scene and enhance the expressive force of the text. For example, the article "Golden Hat" used "a dark cloud sneaking in from a clean blue sky". How vividly "sneaking around" and "walking around" reflect the scene and dynamics when the dark clouds first appear! This is a vivid example that can inspire students. Of course, don't forget to embellish it with some idioms!
Third, the combination of static and dynamic, scene blending.
Writing landscape articles should impress readers more deeply, not only writing static scenery, but also writing its dynamics. Only by combining static and dynamic can the landscape come alive. For example, "the banyan tree is in a period of lush foliage, and it seems to show us all its vitality." There are so many green leaves, one on top of the other, leaving no gaps. Green is shining in our eyes, as if there is a new life trembling on every leaf. This beautiful southern tree! "The author of this description captures the charm of the big banyan tree in its lush branches and leaves, which makes us feel that she is full of vitality and belongs to a static description." At night, frogs croak, woodpeckers peck at tree trunks and beetles buzz. Yanko lay by the river and listened quietly. "The author of this clip describes it by capturing the sounds made by frogs, woodpeckers and beetles, which reflects the love of young musician Yanko for music and belongs to a dynamic description. If you write about the beach, you can not only write about the beach like a golden carpet, but also write about the scenes of children chasing and playing on the beach. This is a combination of dynamic and static.
The purpose of scenery writing is not to write scenery for the sake of scenery writing, but to reflect the author's thoughts and feelings. Only in this way can we inject vitality into the article and write vivid articles. "All kinds of scenery and words are sentimental", which clarifies the relationship between scenery and scenery. There has never been an article about scenery written solely for the purpose of writing about scenery, otherwise it will only be a dead scene. Only through vivid and meticulous description, expressing one's feelings and penetrating the scenery description of the author's true feelings can the article be more dynamic and touching, and the article can be integrated with emotion and scenery.
Fourth, the structure is complete and the key points are prominent.
When it comes to structural integrity, you will first think of the beginning and end of the article. The beginning is as beautiful as a tiger's head, the content is as concrete as a pig's belly, and the end is as graceful as a phoenix tail.
As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". So, how to start a landscape composition? Such as The Sea: 1. Example: Some people like the mirror-like West Lake, others like the majestic Mount Tai, but I like the magnificent sea. 2. Lyrics and famous sentences always start. Example: "When I was a child, my mother told me that the sea was my hometown. I was born by the sea and grew up in the sea." 3. Cut to the chase. Example: My hometown is by the sea, and I have special feelings for the sea since I was a child. 4. suspense. Radish and vegetables have their own tastes. Do you know why I especially like the sea? 5, exciting. Dear children, you must like going to the seaside as much as I do. The sea is our hometown. Welcome to our hometown. I will be a little guide to take you to the seaside. 6. Lyric style. Exodus I saw the sea for the first time. The sky is so blue and the sea is so vast. How I want to sing a song to express my happiness! How to write the ending of a landscape composition? Such as "The Sea": 1, lyrical praise. Ah, the beautiful sea, you are boundless and magnificent, which makes people linger. How can I not be attracted to you? 2. summary. The day's tour will soon be over. I got many "trophies", including shells and starfish ... I saw the sea with my own eyes, which surprised me. The beautiful sea left me with good memories. 3. Poetic style. Exodus: This is really "the sea rises and the moon rises, and the horizon is * * * at this time"! 4. Be careful at the beginning.
Appreciation of excellent works
Corner of the campus
Walking into the westernmost part of the teaching building of our school, you can see a wide and flat playground.
When I came to the playground, the first thing I saw was a straight artificial grass runway. Artificial grass is green and soft, just like stepping on the lawn, very comfortable! Its runway is crimson, which is a good place for our activities. The left side of the runway
There are two small bunkers, which are specially used for long jump and high jump. The sand in the bunker is very delicate and soft to the touch! On the right side of the runway are four basketball stands. The tall basketball stands are on both sides of the playground. The surface of the back plate is glass plate, and the railings are painted. It's really like four sentries standing guard on the playground. There is a flag-raising platform on the playground, where the students attend the flag-raising ceremony and look at the bright red five-star red flag with dignity. From time to time, everyone recalls those martyrs who died heroically for the victory of the Anti-Japanese War.
After school, the students came to the playground one after another, some playing basketball, some running, some playing football, and some skipping on the playground. On Wednesday, Shi asked me to play basketball and said that he would compete with me. We went to the playground and saw people playing on every basketball court. There is no choice but to use this basketball stand with others. In an instant, a basketball slipped from the basket. Who's so good? It turned out that Shi voted. As soon as the basketball landed, someone grabbed the ball and plopped it! I tried to catch it, but I couldn't catch it. I'm getting a little impatient. In the evening, when all the students went home, the campus became quiet and entered a sweet dream with people.
This is our playground. It witnessed our happiness and growth.
A scene on campus
When I walked into the school gate, I saw a big flower bed with colorful flowers in it.
In spring, the flowers in the flower bed slowly grow green buds, which indicates that spring has come and winter has gone. In late spring, the buds grow green leaves, and some even grow flowers and bones.
In summer, the flowers and leaves in the flower bed gradually turn dark green. A gust of wind blew, and the leaves on the altar sang and danced as if welcoming the arrival of summer. And it will make you feel that the green elves are fanning away the heat of summer and getting the coolness of autumn. After dozens of days, the little flowers will open their smiles and try their best to make their beauty bloom to the extreme. When a wisp of wind blows, flowers will dance, and colorful and dark green leaves will make your vision enjoy to the extreme.
In autumn, flowers slowly fade, some leave green leaves, and some leave black seeds for future generations to survive.
In winter, the flower beds are covered with a thick layer of snow, and the seeds are sleeping, waiting for the next spring.
Autumn scenery
Unconsciously, autumn came to the world. The soft sunshine shines on the earth and people feel warm. Look, a flock of geese are flying south in the blue sky. The leading geese quack, as if to say, "Autumn is coming, winter is coming, and we are going to fly to the south for the winter."
In the autumn fields, the golden rice is ripe, the autumn wind blows, and the rice is shaking like a happy wave in the ocean. It's really cute. How splendid autumn is!
In autumn, the apples in the orchard are ripe, like a little girl's blushing face; The pears in Huang Chengcheng are small on the top and big on the bottom, as if they were golden gourds; Red persimmons hang high on the branches like festive lanterns; Pomegranate burst into laughter; How lovely it is in autumn when mangoes bend over!
Autumn is the season when maple leaves, chrysanthemums and laurels are in full bloom. Look, the maple leaves are burning from east to west. Chrysanthemums show their talents, red as fire, pink as chardonnay and white as snow. The distinctive "dragon claw chrysanthemum" is like countless fountains and a little girl's curly hair. There are also "Jin Juhua" like festive fireworks. Oh, by the way, how can there be no osmanthus skirt in such a beautiful season? Look, the little yellow flowers are hidden in the green leaves, and their fragrance is intoxicating. How charming autumn is!
Xiahe
There are thousands of varieties of flowers, and some people like elegant peony; Some people like pure lilies; Some people like plum blossoms with frost and snow; Some people like elegant orchids. .........................................................................................................................................................................
Lotus grows in a pond full of silt. Although it was surrounded by black mud when it broke ground, it still got out of the mud and was not dirty. You see, the lotus leaves that set off the lotus are next to each other, green, green and dark green, just one.
The seed yield is different, but it is smooth and shiny, like a big green jade plate. Under the tall and straight lotus leaf, there must be stems. The turquoise stems are dotted with naughty little thorns. Lotus, lotus leaves and stems are connected together, just like a slim girl with an open skirt. Several frogs jumped on the lotus leaf and immediately formed a dazzling "diamond", rolling around on the lotus leaf.
Between the "big green jade plates", there are scattered holy and elegant lotus flowers. From a distance, the blooming lotus flower is like a beautiful girl enjoying youth, blooming graceful posture at will; The lotus in full bloom is like a shy girl, shyly hiding her face; The budding lotus flower, like a little girl who is about to grow up, has stepped onto the stage with all her strength. Look closely, the delicate petals of the blooming lotus also care for the tender yellow stamens, as well as the small blue-yellow lotus. White petals are like a girl's white and tender skin, which will break when blown; It is also like flawless white jade, which makes people feel pity. When lotus petals wither, lotus seeds will bear fruit, which is a kind of food with high nutritional value. The root of lotus root is also edible, that is, lotus root, which is delicious and has the function of clearing heat and detoxifying. "The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely blue, and the lotus flowers are of different colors." Lotus is so magnificent, it also selflessly dedicates its whole body and writes its magnificent life.
I appreciate lotus flowers. The taste of lotus is immortal. May our "flower bones" dye the fragrance of lotus flowers.
Youshifeng park
On April 4th, I went to Youshifeng Park in Zhuzhou City.
When I got off the bus and entered the gate of Shifeng Park, a long stone step appeared in front of me. Stepping on these 84 steps, I saw a lush landscape around me, full of vibrant scenes everywhere. A group of children were having fun there, regardless of everything around them, and my troubles were taken away by them, so I ran to the rose view like them.
Go through the antique wooden door and step into the small garden full of spring. It seems that everything attracts my attention with its own magnetism. I'm a little overwhelmed. Walking through the stone steps of the small pool, willow branches brushed my face. I don't like to brush away willow branches, because I think it is very happy to let nature touch me. When you are tired of running, you sit down and rest your feet, let the wind float around you, and then watch the small fish play in the pond. Let me have a sense of pleasure.
I walked on, and then I came to the cherry blossom forest. Cherry blossoms spread all over the floor, laying a carpet full of fragrance and spring. Just walked to the center of the cherry blossom forest, suddenly it started to rain in sakura rain. I welcome this fantastic pink rain with open arms. I look at the cherry blossoms in full bloom on the tree. How happy I am, because they are still alive and happy. How sad I am to see the flowers scattered on the ground, because they have no pain of life. I sat quietly on the grass, looking at the cherry tree, and then I remembered the cherry tree in my hometown. This spring, they experienced a rare ice and snow disaster once in 50 years. What happened to them? Has it blossomed? Still dead?
Through two paths and a road, I came to Yunfeng Pavilion, and I was very excited when I looked at this "behemoth" in front of me. Buy a ticket immediately and rush to the top of Yunfeng Pavilion. A phoenix in Yi Long is painted on the ceiling, which makes people feel that they have become gods in the sky, as if they were the masters of dragons and phoenixes. Looking down at Zhuzhou, I feel extremely satisfied, because I have never seen the panoramic view of Zhuzhou at a glance! Looking at the chimney that spoils the scenery, I can't wait to take it out and tear it down now, so that the air in Zhuzhou will be fresh. Looking at the tall mountains and tall trees, I suddenly felt the power of nature.
It is getting late. I left the park and looked at it. I sigh, Zhuzhou, with such a good park, I believe the environment here will be better.
writing
Writing an article about places of interest or beautiful scenery around you requires: clear structure and neat handwriting;
Can write in a certain order and grasp the characteristics of the scene; Can express true feelings.