The introduction of looking at pictures and writing words in the park in the second grade is as follows:
Chapter 1
On a sunny morning, Xiaohong, Xiaogang and I were together Go to the park to see lotus flowers.
We smelled a faint fragrance as soon as we entered the park, and we couldn't help but walk towards the fragrance. We came to the middle of a bridge and looked down. Some of the green lotus leaves looked like big umbrellas, some looked like green discs, and some looked like small cattail fans. It was really interesting. . The lotus flowers are also quite beautiful, some are in full bloom, some are still buds, like shy little girls hiding in the arms of mother lotus leaves, and some have only opened two or three petals, like beautiful girls.
It’s time to go home, and we reluctantly left this beautiful lotus pond.
Comment: The lotus is not only full of beauty, but also has various postures. The lotus pond in summer is really beautiful!
Chapter 2
On Saturday morning, my mother and I went for a walk in the park. We smelled the fragrance of lotus and ran over eagerly. When we got there, we saw the lotus flowers. Some were fully opened, like beautiful skirts; some were still flower bones, like oval red balloons; some had only two or three petals, like a A shy little girl hides behind the lotus leaves. The lotus leaves are crowded together like open umbrellas.
On the ground, several children were doing morning exercises. They kicked their legs and bent over. Several grandparents were running and very happy. Others are skipping rope, playing shuttlecock, and playing football. The morning view in the park is so beautiful!
Comments: Your writing has improved, your imagination is so rich!
Chapter 3
This morning, my mother and I went to the park to play. ah! There are so many people doing morning exercises in the park! Several children are doing morning exercises. They stretched their legs and bent their waists, and they were so energetic! Several grandfathers and grandmothers were running slowly in sportswear, their faces glowing red. As we walked, we saw that some of the lotus flowers in the lotus pond were in bloom, and the green leaves were crowded together, like big open umbrellas. Ah, the morning view in the park is so beautiful!
Comment: You wrote in detail about the people doing morning exercises in the park, and briefly wrote about the beautiful scenery of the lotus pond. The details are appropriate, good!
Look at pictures and write words: Morning view in the park
One morning, Li Yan, Meimei and Xiaogang went to the park to see lotus flowers. As soon as we entered the park, we were greeted by the fragrance of flowers. ah! smell good! We welcomed the fragrance of flowers and came to the lotus pond. Some lotus flowers there were in full bloom, like the smiling faces of children; some were still flower bones, like big and red peaches; Fairy in pink dress. A little dragonfly flew on the lotus leaf, making it more beautiful.
Seeing this, I suddenly remembered Yang Wanli's poem: The little lotus has just revealed its sharp corners, and a dragonfly has already stood on it.
The lotus pond in summer is so beautiful!
Comment: Quoting poems and writing is more literary, good!