1, the rhyme must be in 1, 2, 4 or 2, 4. There are four sentences in your poem that don't rhyme.
2. Poetry should avoid loneliness and dullness, and the words "figure alone" are all flat sounds, which makes loneliness and dullness taboo.
3. "Nobody listens to complaints" I guess you mean "Nobody can listen to my complaints", but when you use this sentence, the owner who is talking to me is confused, and the meaning of this sentence is not clear.
4. It is revised as follows. The fourth song is 2 or 4 rhymes, and "escape" means loneliness. The first "shadow" is the shadow of the bright moon, and the other "shadows" can be understood as the shadow of the bright moon or the poet.
The bright moon shines in the sky, hanging on the treetops, full of worries. Who knows?
The bright moon is in the sky, sighing, who is full of sorrow?
The bright moon shines in the sky, and the court is full of clouds. Who can I tell?
The bright moon shines in the sky, and the breeze is full of sorrow. Where is the sadness?
5, the original intention is not to reply, please forgive me! Seeing that the wicked attacked me for no reason, I came in and explained as follows:
What a junk rotten hemorrhoid, what an oriental corpse soul, what a corpse thief, what a modern corpse cockroach, what Lijiang squid, all rushed out to attack me anonymously! Again, I didn't force Yi An to commit suicide. Yi An likes to pick 60-year-old Bad Old Man Returning from Overseas and A Bloody Battle. Unfortunately, I am not suitable for her special age hobby! After his infidelity was exposed, he sprayed people everywhere with other ids, warning: I will be careful to ask X to kill you when I get angry! Pity the "anonymous" who was attacked above. Why don't you come forward? Last time you voted with XXX on the same stage, they insulted you. I didn't worship in my bridal chamber, giving you bad breath!
If it's a man's, stand up!
I have decided not to be with these clowns anymore, but they are the same thing, you know? The same pollution seems to be no good now. I want to come in this post and make a statement, haha. The only anonymous post, which was sent too late to log in, specifically indicated that it was my wedding!
Unfortunately, it was deleted-can I sleep without deleting it? Hehe:
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