[Ming] Li Rihua
It's warm and cold at first, and there are several pear blossoms. Dressed up to lean on alone, I am dark and sad.
If you want to go to Du Yu, the remnant clouds are scattered in accordance with sand and Zhu. The willow smoke in Hengtang is thick, and the smoke in Weizhou is deep.
(1) What kind of woman image did you draw at the last minute? (3 points)
Reference answer
The image of a helpless and sentimental woman who is leaning on the bar alone (counting flowers) because she is about to say goodbye to her sweetheart.
[3 points. Farewell to my sweetheart, Alone on the fence and Helpless Emotion are 1 respectively. As long as it has the right meaning. ]
Additional remarks
Emotional connotation 1, emotional tone 1, detail description 1. (Emotional connotation is written as waiting for a husband, missing a lover, and not giving points. Emotional analysis is inconsistent, no score will be given. For example, it depicts a carefree, free and lonely woman. )
Scoring example
3 points:
It depicts the image of a "parting" woman who is about to leave her husband. After dressing, she leans on the edge of dryness alone, silently counting the fallen flowers, sad and unwilling to give up.
It depicts the image of a woman who silently counts the fallen flowers in the boudoir but is sad for leaving.
2 points:
I drew a lonely and sad woman just now. After putting on makeup, the woman leaned against the dead tree alone, quietly counting the fallen flowers on the ground, full of sadness.
It depicts the image of a boudoir woman leaving her lover and being sad alone.
1 min:
It depicts a woman looking forward to her husband's return, full of sadness and loneliness.
Just now I drew a lonely, sad, spring-injured woman.
0 points:
The image of a woman waiting for her husband to come home.
Described a lonely, helpless, disguised as a boudoir disgruntled woman.
Classmate problem
1. The question is not carefully examined and the answer is not standardized.
The stem expresses a word, but some candidates regard it as a metrical poem.
The question is, "What kind of female image was drawn at the last moment?" "Student's Answer" depicts the image of a lonely woman, who, against the backdrop of pear rain, falling red and residual clouds, looks at the distant boat. Using the method of scene blending, the bleak farewell feeling is integrated with the bleak scenery. "
2. The typo is serious.
Melancholy is written as "melancholy" and sadness as "melancholy".
3. The label still exists.
For example, the last movie uses the images of pear blossom rain and falling red to describe a lonely woman who misses her lover.
(2) What are the two meanings of the last two sentences in the next film? (4 points)
Reference answer
On the one hand, it clearly points out the inscription "Liuzhou is waiting for parting", which conveys the reluctant parting feelings of the people in the painting; On the one hand, the picture turns to reality, expressing the poet's parting feelings with Liu.
[4 points. The correct answer is 1.2 points. As long as it has the right meaning. ]
Scoring instructions
This small question requires candidates to accurately understand the meaning of sentences and analyze the author's feelings contained in key sentences on the basis of reading the whole words, which is the basic requirement of poetry appreciation. It is also consistent with the form of this question in 13 and 14. Most students can understand the meaning of the last two sentences from the perspective of parting feelings. However, it is difficult for students to understand the separation of these two levels. Most candidates either only talk about the parting of the woman in the painting, or only mention the feelings of the poet and his friend Liu. Few candidates can understand the theme of the author's "integrating the feelings of the poet and his friends with the painting meaning of the topic, and expressing the feelings of parting with his friend Liu through the vivid depiction of the feelings of men and women in the painting". Because to understand the meaning of the word "from the feeling in the painting to the feeling of the poet when he bid farewell to his friends", he needs to have considerable literary literacy, which has exceeded the requirements of the examination syllabus for "simplicity" of ancient poetry. Of course, if candidates can understand poetry as a whole and comprehensively consider the information such as poem title, verse and stem, they can still gain some experience.
Second, because the title is a rich carrier of information such as the content and form of poetry, it is an important starting point for us to understand poetry. Some titles summarize the important contents of the work, some reveal the clues of the work, some lay the emotional tone of the work, and some reveal the time, place, object, event and theme of writing. The title of this poem reveals the events and basic contents of writing. However, the last sentence of a poem often expresses Zhang's ambition or hints at the theme. Therefore, in order to understand the meaning of the last two sentences in the next film, it is necessary to link the title of the poem with the content of the whole poem and understand the poem as a whole.
Third, based on the above two points, so in the process of marking, as long as the candidates can only talk about the sadness of the woman in the painting, or mention the feelings of the poet Liu and his friends, we will give at least two points as appropriate. I got full marks for both aspects, even though the answer didn't mention the key point of "from love in painting to love when the poet sent his friends away".
Some Views on Reference Answers
The first point is whether it can be said that the painting title of "Liuzhou is waiting for parting" in the title of this word is pointed out, which expresses the feelings of the people (women) in the painting for travelers.
The second point can be expressed in this way: from the picture to the reality, take care of the content of "seeing Liu" in the inscription. It expresses the poet's reluctance to say goodbye to his friend Liu.
Make an appreciative comment
This is an inscription and a farewell speech. The genius of this word lies in the ingenious combination of the feelings of poets and friends and the painting meaning of the title. By vividly depicting the feelings of men and women in the painting, it is quite innovative to express his parting feelings with his good friend Liu.
The world's first film focused on the separation of women in painting. "It's warm and cold at first, and there are a few showers of pear blossom rain", which shows the season at the beginning of the picture: it's warm and cold in spring, and pear blossom rain is everywhere. Spring is a time when flowers bloom and people are relaxed and happy. However, the girl in the picture feels "not in the mood" because her sweetheart will leave her for a long trip. In this situation, the delicate spring willow seems to be a delicate hand that can't be lifted, and the falling pear flower rain is like a sad parting tear. The following sentence "dressing up alone, cursing, worrying about the sky" is the concrete manifestation of the woman's "unintentional insertion of willows into the shade" Most people say that "women are pleasing to themselves", but the women in the painting are not appreciated after makeup, and the inner loss is not difficult to imagine. Leaning alone on the fence and counting the fallen flowers, these two vivid pictures point out her inner loneliness and sadness. And isn't this fleeting loneliness a portrayal of her own experience? At this point, the image of a lonely, helpless and sad woman has been clearly presented.
The next part continues the previous one, further pointing out that women's sadness is because Iraqis will go by boat, organically blending the sadness of men and women in the painting with their parting with their friend Liu.
The sentence "Du Yu's voice makes people want to go away, and the residual clouds disappear in the sand" reveals the reason why the heroine is "sad and silent" with meaningful scenery description, and uses a clever pen. Here, the poet does not directly write the scene of people "holding hands and looking at each other with tears", but uses cuckoo birds to urge them to return, suggesting that they are about to leave and have no choice, and pointing out the season of leaving here; The poet doesn't directly describe how to be reluctant to part when leaving, but uses the remnant cloud's infinite attachment to the sandbar to symbolize the love that is difficult to leave people. Using inanimate natural scenery to see through the inner world of living characters not only makes the inanimate scenery have emotional significance, but also vividly externalizes the emotional image of people who are difficult to describe in detail, which is very wonderful.
The sentence "Shili willow smoke is thicker than Hengtang, and Weizhou is in deep smoke" continues to describe the scenery here: in Shili Hengtang, which is full of willow trees, a boat is moored in the deep smoke of willow trees and ready to go. On the one hand, these two sentences point out the theme of "Liuzhou parting", on the other hand, they also imply the inevitability of parting, which not only conveys the feelings of the people in the painting, but also shows the universality of the tragedy of human parting, thus naturally shifting from the feelings in the painting to the feelings of the poet when he bid farewell to his friends at that time, which has the effect of killing two birds with one stone, thus making the word contain two levels of emotional core of sadness, thus producing a more colorful farewell speech different from the general one.