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Yuan Zhen? Tang dynasty
The residual lamp has no flame shadow. I heard that you have fallen into Jiujiang this evening.
Sitting up in a dying illness, the dark wind blew the rain into the cold window.
The light will go out and a vague shadow is shaking. I suddenly heard that you were demoted to Jiujiang tonight. When I was seriously ill, I suddenly sat up in bed, and the wind and rain blew into the window at night, feeling particularly cold.
This poem was written after the author learned that Bai Juyi was easily degraded. This poem sets off feelings with scenery, writes feelings with scenery and expresses feelings with emotion, which shows the author's deep affection for Bai Juyi.
The first sentence describes the dark background of his life, which sets off the desolation and pain of the author being demoted and ill. The second period indicates the meaning of the question; The third sentence describes the scene when Bai Juyi was demoted, which shows a lot of meanings; In the last sentence, the bleak scenery and bleak mood are combined into one, and the mood is sad. The whole poem expresses the author's extreme shock and sadness after learning that his friend was demoted.
Appreciate:
The middle two sentences of this poem are narrative romance, which shows the author's sudden surprise when he first heard the unfortunate news. Language is simple and emotional. Both the first sentence and the second sentence of the poem describe the scenery, vividly depicting the bleak and desolate scenery around, with rich and profound feelings.
Yuan Zhen was exiled to other countries, seriously ill and in a bad mood. At this time, I suddenly heard that my best friend had been wronged and demoted, and I was extremely shocked. I am full of discontent and worry. With this sad mood, all the scenery becomes gloomy. Therefore, when I saw the "lamp", I thought it was a "residual lamp" without flame; Even the shadow of the lamp has become the "narrowest"-a dim and swaying appearance.
"Wind", originally indifferent to light and shade, has now become a "dark wind". The "window", originally cold and hot, has now become a "cold window". Even the wind, rain, lights and windows have become "disabled", "dark" and "cold" because of the migration, irradiation and infiltration of family ties. The words "the narrowest shadow without flame" and "the cold window with black wind blowing rain" are both sentimental words, expressing sadness with sad scenery, which is "wonderful and boundless".
In the poem, the sentence "Startled up when dying" is a vivid pen. Bai Juyi once wrote two poems: "My pillow suddenly rises and my clothes are upside down", which was written when Bai Juyi was demoted in the early Yuan Dynasty and took office in Jiangling. It shows that he heard the messenger knocking at the door and couldn't wait to read Yuan Zhen's letter, which is very vivid. The same is true of Yuan Zhen's sentence.
Among them, "shock" is "emotion"-the feeling of shock at that time; Among them, "Sit Up" is about "shape"-what it looked like at that time. If you just write "feeling", don't write "shape", don't "sit up", but "get a fright", I'm afraid it's boring. The word "sitting up in shock" is a vivid description of the author's sudden surprise at that time.
Coupled with "dying", it further strengthens the depth of feelings and makes the poem more vivid. Since it is called "dying", it is naturally difficult to "sit up". But the author "sat up" in shock, which shows that the shock is no less than acupuncture; Unity and sympathy. The profound friendship between Yuan and Bai can be seen here.