There is a poem that seems to be looking for him in a dream, and I will always be attached to you in my life. I hope this poem is complete.

Qingyu case

Yuanxi

One night, the east wind made up thousands of trees and flowers, blowing off the stars and rain.

BMW carved cars are full of incense. Phoenix flute,

Jade pot photo, fish dragon dance all night.

Moths, snow, willows, gold thread, laughter and incense are all gone.

Looking for him in the crowd, suddenly looking back, the man was there, dimly lit.

Explanation:

Jade case: The name is transferred from Four Sorrow Poems in the Eastern Han Dynasty. "Beauty gave me a splendid festival. How to report the jade case?" Also known as "Hengtang Road", "Xihu Road" and "Guests on the Qinglian Pool". Two tones, sixty-seven words, and rhyme.

Lantern Festival: The fifteenth day of the first lunar month is the Lantern Festival, and it is called Yuanxiao or Yuanxiao at night.

Hundreds of flowers and thousands of trees: all the trees are full of lanterns.

Stars like rain: refers to fireworks falling like rain.

Jade pot: refers to the moon.

Fish Dragon Dance: refers to dancing fish and dragon lanterns.

Moths, snow willows and golden wisps: all are ancient women's jewelry. This refers to women who make up.

Yingying: How polite.

Suddenly: suddenly, suddenly.

Dull: a scattered and sparse appearance.

Comments: There is an article "Out of the East Gate" in The Book of Songs Zheng Feng. The first chapter says: "Out of its east gate, there are women like clouds. Although there are many clouds, I think of people. Wear clothes and towels and chat with me. " Among many girls who have a spring outing in the East Gate, only the latter appreciates her simple and elegant style. This "jade case" is similar to it, but the spiritual realm is higher. This word strongly exaggerates the grand occasion of watching lights on the Lantern Festival. Write a lively scene with bright lights, singing and dancing. Flowers are thousands of trees, stars are rain, jade pots are spinning, and ichthyosaurs are dancing. The city is brightly lit and colorful, just like Xinghai, with unprecedented pomp. Then write a happy scene of tourists traveling by car and horse all night. Some people who watch lanterns come by BMW, and some women wearing moths and snow willows come together, wearing fragrant clothes and temples. In the carnival of the whole city, the poet settled down to meet the right person secretly at the night of watching the lights. After a long time, he suddenly saw that person in the "dim light". The last four sentences show the noble character of the author's refusal to go with the flow by "the man's arrogance and self-admiration". When people are eager for competition, they can tolerate cold, relaxation and loneliness. This is Xin Qiji's self-reported embrace after repeated rejections, which is very meaningful. Advance is vigorous and earth-shattering, retreat is immune, self-indifference and loneliness, which are the ethics of people with lofty ideals. The former is a hero and the latter is also a hero. In the Qing Dynasty, Peng's Jin Su said that the end of the word was "a good situation in Qin and Zhou Dynasties". Different people have different views and can coexist. The whole word is novel in conception, skillful in language, subtle in twists and turns and endless in aftertaste.

Comments on the solution 1

short review

"As a graceful poem, this poem Jade Case is not inferior to the graceful poets Yan Shu and Liu Yong in the Northern Song Dynasty in terms of artistic achievements. Starting with the colorful and lively scenes of the Lantern Festival, the lyrics reflect an aloof and indifferent female image different from the golden powder, and pin on the author's aloof and arrogant character of being unwilling to go along with the secular after political frustration. From the very beginning, the word "a thousand trees bloom in the east wind" tries to render the lively scene of the Lantern Festival: the city is brightly lit, the streets are crowded with tourists, and the red trees and silver flowers are singing and dancing all night. But the author's original intention is not to write about scenery, but to compare the differences between people in dim light. This word describes the lively scene of all-night lights in festivals. Liang Qichao said, "Self-pity is lonely, and those who are sad are different. "I think this word has a kind of sustenance, which can be described as a confidant. The first part is a lively scene with bright lights and tourists like clouds on the night of Yuanxi, and the next part is about a disgraceful and exclusive beauty image. The image of beauty is the embodiment of the author's ideal personality. Looking for him in the crowd, suddenly looking back, the man was there, dimly lit. Wang Guowei calls this realm a great cause, and the third realm of university questioners is really the insight of university questioners.

Distinguish and appreciate

There are countless words written by ancient poets about Yuanxiao, but this one by Xin Qiji is not considered dispensable, so it can also be called a hero. However, in fact, there is nothing unique about uptown except rendering a lively grand occasion. The author writes the wahoo tree as a fixed lantern and the "star rain" as a flowing fireworks. If so, it would be nice to imagine that the east wind has blown off the silver flowers of the Lantern Festival before urging the flowers to bloom. It not only blew away the snuff on the ground, but also blew off colorful stars from the sky like rain-fireworks first rushed into the sky and then fell from the air like a meteor shower. Then write "Jade Pot", a fairyland where horses and chariots, drums, lights and the moon meet, and then write a hundred plays of "Shehuo" with folk artists singing and dancing, which is very lively and dizzying. In the meantime, all kinds of kind words such as "treasure", "carving", "phoenix" and "jade" are just to give a vivid description of the atmosphere of Yuan snack, which is probably beyond the reach of pen and ink. Fortunately, there are these kind words, just to help.

Tan, specializing in writing people. From the beginning, the author wrote: These girls are all shrouded in fog and clouds, and their bodies are covered with moths and snow willows unique to the Lantern Festival. These girls dressed up are talking and laughing as they walk. After they left, only the smell of clothes was still floating in the dark. These beautiful women are not concerned by the author's original intention, but just looking for one among thousands of people-but they are always hard to find and hopeless. ..... Suddenly, my eyes lit up and I could see clearly beside the corner lamp. It's her! It's her! Yes, she used to be in this cold place, but she hasn't come back yet. She seems to be waiting! The moment I found that person, it was the condensation and sublimation of the spirit of life, and it was an inexplicable gratitude to the inscription and seal. Poets have the ability to turn it into pen marks and ink shadows and never die! After reading the last scene, I suddenly realized that lanterns, the moon, fireworks, sheng di, ballroom dancing, interwoven yuan jubilation and dazzling groups of beautiful women in the afternoon were originally designed for that one person. Moreover, without this person, what is the significance and interest of all this!

The word can't be said, but it has become a snake, destroying the beautiful realm of happiness and bitterness in priceless life. However, the snake has been drawn, but it should be added that scholars should not forget to pay attention to the fact that the word "one night" has appeared at the end of the essay. Why? Gai has explained how much time he spent looking for him, so when he came out, the lights were dim, and he echoed back and forth, with fine pen and ink and bitter heart. Alas, the world's critics often call Jia Xuan "bold" and "bold", as if he were a clown and a strong man. Isn't it a delay for scholars?

Wang Jing 'an once quoted this word in "The Thorn on Earth", thinking that those who achieve great things must go through three realms, and Jiaxuan's realm is the third and highest realm. This special metaphor has nothing to do with literary appreciation. Mr. Wang has made it very clear that we have no problem here.

From the tone of words, the jade case is unique. Originally, it was disyllabic, and the upper and lower parts were the same, but the second sentence in the upper part became a broken sentence, full of ups and downs. There is no such thing as breaking the stack. There are three sentences in the seven-character rhyme, which can be arranged and changed according to the poet's mind, but the trend of sentence arrangement is the same. The warning sentence can't be forced out until the parallelism is over.

Qinyuan Chunxue Mao Zedong

Look at what the northern countries have shown: a hundred miles of frozen Go; Thousands of miles of snow. Looking at the inside and outside of the Great Wall, I saw the vastness, the river was up and down, and I lost my way. Mountain dancing snakes, originally wax elephants, want to compete with God. When the weather is fine, look at the sunny market. What a charming sight!

This land is so beautiful that countless heroes bow to their knees. Cherish Qin Huang Hanwu, slightly lost literary talent, Tang Zong Song Zu, slightly less coquettish. Genghis Khan, the hero of the throne, only knows how to draw a bow and shoot arrows. These characters are gone, a few heroes who can make contributions, look at today's people.

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Comments and explanations

This word strongly exaggerates the grand occasion of watching lights on the Lantern Festival. Write a lively scene with bright lights, singing and dancing. Spend thousands of trees,

The stars are like rain, and the jade pot turns to fish and dragon dance. The whole city is decorated with lights and colorful, with unprecedented pomp. Then write about the joy of tourists who travel by car and horse all night.

Music. Some people who look at lanterns come by BMW, and some women with moths and snow willows on their heads come together. slanting

During the carnival in the city, the poet put his mind on the night of watching the lights, secretly met the right person, but after a long time, he suddenly saw that person there.

"The lights are dim." At the end of the four sentences, through the arrogant self-worship of "that man", it shows that the author is unwilling to go along with this noble product.

Grid. The whole word is novel in conception, skillful in language, subtle in twists and turns and endless in aftertaste.

Set comments

Peng's "Jin Su: Jia Xuan" suddenly looked back, but the man was in the dim light, and the good times of Qin and Zhou Dynasties were not bad.

Tan Xian's Tan Ping Ci: Jia Xuan's mind is full of talents, and if he changes it, he will expand it. Judging from the two sentences, different colors make the place harmonious.

Wan.

Wang Guowei's poems on earth: people in ancient and modern times, people who achieve great things, and universities must go through three realms:

"Last night, the west wind withered Yushu, and I went to the tall building alone to see the horizon." So is this first place. "If my belt widens gradually, I won't regret it.

It's worth getting tired for my coquetry. "So is this second condition." I looked for him in the crowd, and then I saw him. It was, uh, dimly lit.

Location. "The third condition, too. These words are not beyond the reach of great poets, but if we interpret them in this way, we are afraid of Yan and European countries.

No, not really.

In Selected Poems of Tang and Song Dynasties, people praised Xin Qiji's bold and gloomy poems, as well as his graceful and restrained poems, among which

The poem "Jade Case" is one of the representative works of the latter, which has always received many beautiful comments. The advantage of it is that it creates

A realm.

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