It is not easy for a poem to be both clever and graceful. Many of the poems written by Rabindranath Tagore, one of the top ten writers in the world, whom I admire very much, are exquisite works. Poems such as "The scabbard is satisfied with its own dullness in order to protect the sharpness of the knife" and "Once the wings of a bird are tied with gold, it can no longer fly high in the sky" and other poems indeed reveal a spirit of elegance, but they are too philosophical and cannot Shen Yun is far from flying. Many of the poems by Bing Xin, an outstanding modern Chinese poet who I admire very much, are clever and beautiful works, such as "The flower in the corner, when she admires herself, the world becomes smaller", etc., but they also lack the soaring charm. And your poems and prose are both smart and charming.
Example 1, "The Rhythm of Spring"
The first verse: "No matter how many worries you have behind you, they all turned into spring breeze and drizzle all the way." These verses follow "Carrying the Color of Dreams" After carrying my luggage and embarking on the journey of youth, it is indeed smart and full of charm. "Dream Luggage" and "Journey of Youth" are ingeniously connected: a young woman full of dreams is about to travel far for life. With beautiful wishes and dreams that only she knows but cannot explain, she bravely walks her youth. The road, no matter how many worries are behind you, will turn into spring breeze and drizzle to follow you all the way, letting them nourish the flowers of your youthful dreams. The imagination is strange and impressive. People who are not clever can not come up with such clever sentences. These poems hide the flying spirit without any trace - otherwise, how could "all the worries behind me turn into the spring breeze and drizzle"?
Section 2: "The wind and dust of the sun and moon fall all over the forehead. When I stop and look back, the dove of faith flies out of the green eyes." These verses are like pearls, beautiful and moving, full of charm and charm. On the road of life, when "I", who have been tormented by time and hardships, stop and look back at the life path I have traveled, not only am I not depressed, but I am more confident. The comparison of "the dove of faith, flying out of the moist green eyes" is really exquisite, and the meaning is very profound. It is impossible to read the true meaning without a certain level. These two lines of poetry are quite similar to Fu Jianglin's "The sound of wooden fish, swimming." There is no way out of this deep temple." The two sentences are similar. The "dove of faith" actually refers to the firm belief of a person "embarking on the journey of youth" flying out of his eyes, indicating that he will never look back and is full of green confidence in the future. But if expressed directly, there will be no aftertaste. Such a bold use of leaping metaphors and implicit expressions is truly a clever and graceful work, full of grace and charm!
Example 2: "Spring Plowing"
There are not many poets who have written about the relationship between farmers and the land throughout the ages. Maybe it is not easy to express the relationship between farmers and the land, right? It is not difficult to express it in an article, but it is really not easy to express it in countless lines of poetry. The poet Zang Kejia wrote about the relationship between farmers and the land in "Three Generations". He only used three sentences: Grandpa is buried in the soil, father sweats in the soil, and son bathes in the soil. This poem very concisely expresses the characteristics of our country's farmers who have been passionate about the land for generations, who were born here and died here without leaving their homeland. It can be called a masterpiece. However, this poem only describes how the farmers treat the land, but it does not There is no description of what the land does to the farmers, and the relationship between man and the land is not shown. But you expressed it in only a few sentences, and this is the only masterpiece I have seen. In addition to the above-mentioned shortcomings, Zang's poems do not have the spirit of elegance or soaring charm. Your "Spring Plowing" is not only comprehensive in expression, but also has the characteristics of elegance and charm: farmers regard the land as their mother, mothers love their children, mothers are willing to selflessly contribute to the happiness of their children, and children are willing to make their mothers more beautiful. What a clever idea! It's rare that a young girl like you wrote such a refreshing poem while studying.