Drip empty steps to drain the rain. All the way to Yancheng is full of drums. A shallow dream came into being and was blown away by the east wind. There is no evidence. There is no evidence. Xie Han hung down and wanted to do it.
Translation translation
Sporadic raindrops fell on the steps, and drums sounded in the distant city. Just fell asleep, but was awakened by a cold wind. The dream was blown away by this gust of wind from the beginning. The milky way in the sky outside the window has fallen, and it is almost dawn.
Annotation explanation
Empty bill: nobody walks's order. In the Southern Dynasties, Liang's "Farewell to the Old and Welcome to the New Night" has a "rainy night without a ladder".
Tiáo delivery (dì): It looks far away. Yancheng: A heavily guarded city. In the Tang Dynasty, Huangfuran said that "going up a tree is close to Yancheng". More drums: drums were louder in the old days.
No evidence: without evidence, dreams have no evidence. Song Huizong's poem "Yanshan Pavilion" is "groundless and a dream. If you are new here, don't do it. "
Inclined Han: tomorrow will incline to the Milky Way, so it is called inclined Han. Drooping: The appearance of drooping. In Tang Dynasty, Xue Jianyou "shakes the leaves lightly in the wind". Shu: It's just dawn.
Creation background
This word was written in the 30th year of Guangxu in Qing Dynasty (1904). At that time, Wang Guowei was teaching in Nantong Tongzhou Normal School. Because Wang Guowei was ill and in a trance, he wrote the feelings of spring night in his words, which made him feel lonely. There are also different opinions about the time and background of the word. Scholar Fochu believes that this word was written between 1904 and 1905. Qian Jianping believes that this word was written in 1905.
Appreciation of poetry and prose
This small print is about the feeling of sleepless night, paying more attention to conception and skills. It is the first song in the draft of A Tale on Earth, and is regarded as Wang Guowei's early works.
Poems about insomnia are relatively straightforward, such as "leisurely and comfortable, tossing and turning" in Guanju and "sad, sleepless, clothes falling" in Nineteen Ancient Poems. Poets don't like to make noise when they write about insomnia, for example, the article "More Leaks": "The plane tree, it rains in the middle of the night, and it is bitter not to leave love. A leaf, a voice, and empty footsteps fall into the light. " Insomnia, insomnia. The word Wang Guowei also uses euphemism and twists and turns.
The sound of "dripping water", "empty steps dripping rain" and "the city is full of drums" is not enough to affect people's sleep. But in the silent spring night, if these two rhythmic sounds are close together, it will inevitably make people who can't sleep more agitated and more difficult to fall asleep. These two sentences are about scenery, but the scenery touches someone's feelings.
"A shallow dream came into being and was blown away by the east wind" means that I finally fell into a dream and suddenly woke up from it. The author didn't directly say that he woke up from a dream, but said that the dream was blown away by the east wind. It is another skill to describe abstract and invisible dreams as seemingly tangible things that can be blown by the wind. "No evidence" means "no evidence". This refers to the initial dream that was "blown away by the east wind" and the dream that ended at the beginning. So is this a dream about love or an ideal? What I dream of is a "heaven and man" who does not hesitate to ask questions, or a "wandering back to the island" who picks up the stars and covers his sleeves. The poet didn't say anything, and he didn't seem to have time to think. Because the sky outside the window is already low at this time, and it will be dawn soon.
Such a short word can express the feeling of losing your eyes overnight in a more euphemistic and tortuous way, which shows that the author has made great efforts in conception and skill. But when it comes to the weight of feelings, it is obviously not as good as the song "I hate coming late, but I am easy to wake up, and I am suspicious in my dreams, let alone hurry up" ("Su Mu is tired"). Of course, Su Mu's head is a eulogy. After the great blow of Where Are You Going, the author couldn't sleep all night and was in a trance. That feeling doesn't need any clever rhetorical skills.
Conceiving the arrangement, just saying it directly is enough to deeply impress the readers. In addition, the idea that "dreams without foundation are difficult to realize" is actually not Wang Guowei's creation. From Song Huizong (Yanshan Pavilion), the word "Why don't you think about it, except in your dreams?" There is no evidence. Dreams are new. "As some scholars have pointed out, Wang Guowei sometimes likes to apply or transform the sentences of his predecessors. Of course, the effect of adaptation depends on the specific works. But as far as this practice is concerned, it is obviously a deliberate pursuit of skill and literary talent. It can also be seen that although Wang Guowei's comments on Ci were still "ingenious" in the Five Dynasties and the Northern Song Dynasty, they were not excluded in his own creation, and sometimes he deliberately pursued "ingenious craftsmanship".
Read Li Qingzhao's two poems, Appreciation of Dream Poems II, Complete Question 9- 1 1. (5 points)
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I often remember the pavilion, by the stream of the pavilion, until the sunset, intoxicated by the beautiful scenery, lingering. Always had a good time, but lost to the swimming pool deep in Zhu Feng. How to row a boat out, accidentally, but scared a group of Oulu.
Wulingchun
The wind has stopped the dust, the fragrant flowers have blossomed, and I am tired of combing my hair at night. Things are people, not everything, and tears flow first. It is said that Shuangxi Spring is still good, and it is also planned to make canoes. I'm afraid the ship can't carry much worry.
1, find out the sentences in Wulingchun that turn emptiness into reality and describe sadness. ( 1)
2. Talk about the beauty of the word "quiet" in the sentence "Starts up a beach of gulls and herons" in the dream. (2 points)
These two sentences are the works of the poet before and after crossing the south. What are their emotional differences? (2 points)
Reference answer:
1. I'm afraid the ship can't carry much worry. ( 1)
2. The word "Jing" not only metaphorically describes the speed of the ship, but also vividly describes the state that the gull heron parked on the small continent was scared and panicked. 3. The last song: Cheerful, cheerful and passionate about life (1 minute); After a song: sadness, sadness and loneliness (2 points).
Appreciation of Poems in Dreams III: Dreams in Dreams, Pecks flowers in warbler's mouth slip red.
Qin Guan
The warbler is more ruddy with its beak, and the swallow sweeps up the green ripples with its tail tip. Cold is cold, Yu Sheng is cold, but people in blowing sheng are excited to play the tune Little Plum, and the sound is melodious and resounding, and the listener is excited, vigorous and full of spring. People say that blowing like this and calling like this will make people and young people handsome.
The title of this word is "Spring". It is because of spring injury that I think of people.
The first two sentences are written in a straight pen. Singing and dancing, the flowers are red and green, aiming to highlight the beauty of natural spring scenery. Three or four sentences turned into bitterness. I used the sentence of "Mountain Huazi" by Li Jing, "The small building blows through the jade and calms the cold". Beautiful spring scenery should have a comfortable and pleasant feeling, but why does the heroine have such a sad mood that is incompatible with the external scenery? "Still, still, people and poplars are thin." "Is a pen for the point. Catkin and Yang Shuhua mark the aging of spring scenery and the passing of spring. At the same time, it is also the artistic carrier of acacia. It is the feeling of missing people that is constantly being cut and confused. Because of the depth of acacia, I have a thin waist. " People are as thin as poplars. "Expressed feelings with vivid images, the meaning of" waste for Iraq "goes without saying. Let people imagine a picture of falling flowers flying, and beautiful people sigh and feel sorry for them.
In the poet's heart, he still wants to use the ups and downs of spring to express his feelings of hurting spring and missing distant places in the alternation of festivals and sequences. The word begins with a happy scene, which is intended to compare the more miserable his mood is. However, in order to achieve the maximum contrast effect, the poet even spared no effort to carve the scenery with air animals, and finally fell into the threshold of attack and cutting. The word "slip" is written in the bright color of the bonus, while "wrinkle" is written in the state of water ripples, which is unfortunate! However, the end of the taste lacks charm! The reason is that the carver is fine. Just like its sentence "the sky is even with the grass", if you change the word "even" to "sticky", you will lose it! Therefore, the Record of Blowing the Sword is called "the mouth of the warbler": "The chanting is similar, not as vivid as it is, and it takes so much effort to use the branches of red apricots." It can be said that it is right. In fact, many critics have accurately pointed out this point: "Caotang Poetry Talk" criticized: "The sentence is strange and steep." Yizhou Mountain People's Poetry Review commented that it was "dangerous and beautiful." "Ancient and modern words and thorns" also said: "Danger and beauty, axe marks are still there." There is indeed a reason why the word "Nazi compilation" was originally written by Huang Tingjian.
"Poetry is based on emotion" values the power of emotion, "Ci is the body and should be refined", especially its inner emotion and artistic conception. However, due to the limitation of poetry genre, they use words to make sentences, paying special attention to tempering and washing. But this tempering is not deliberately carved. Although it is well-intentioned, it must be natural, muddy and easy to come by. The same is true of the so-called "antelope hanging on the horn, there is no trace to be found". In the word "Qin Guan", the use of the word "thin" should be said to be relatively successful. Therefore, the "Caotang Poetry Talk" also said: "Spring willows may not be thin, but they must not be' one'." This is a fair comment. Flowers and trees are thinner than people, and there are many examples in poetry. For example, Li Qingzhao said, "Don't forget me, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers." (Drunken Flowers) "Do you know, do you know, it should be green manure?" (Like a Dream) Cheng Gai "People are thinner, a little thinner than plum blossoms." ("Breaking the River City") is fresh and unique, vivid and has its own feelings.
"The article is eternal, and the gains and losses are well known." All gains and losses should be treated cautiously and fairly, which is beneficial to literary and artistic research. (Chen Qiaosheng)
Appreciation of Poems in Dreams 4 Although Li Qingzhao is not a prolific writer, there are only forty or fifty poems that have been circulated so far, but they are all useless and there are many poets. This poem "Like a Dream" is an immortal masterpiece that is "called by the world". This poem, with its characters, scenes and dialogues, fully demonstrates the expressive power of the language of Song Ci and the poet's talent. The description of the small print asking for flowers after waking up is tortuous and euphemistic, expressing the poet's love for flowers and hurting spring. The language is fresh and meaningful.
Although the first two sentences only say that I drank too much last night and haven't stopped since the next morning, there is another meaning behind this sentence, that is, I was drunk last night because I cherish flowers. The poetess couldn't bear to see the flowering of Haitang in the Ming Dynasty. She drank too much wine under Haitang last night and is still drunk.
What is written in three or four sentences is an inevitable reflection of the psychology of loving flowers. Although he was drunk all night, the first thing Xiao Qing cared about after waking up was the begonia in the garden. Knowing that Haitang couldn't stand the abrasion caused by sudden wind and rain overnight, the window must be a red mess, full of fallen flowers, but I couldn't bear to see it myself, so I tried to ask the maid who was rolling the curtains. The word "try" expresses the poet's ambivalence that he cares about flowers but is afraid to hear the news of flowers falling, and he can't bear to see them with his own eyes but wants to know what is going on. The result of "asking questions"-"But Haitang is still the same." The maid's answer surprised the poet. Originally, I thought that after a night of wind and rain, the begonia flower must have withered and deformed, but the maid rolled up the curtain and looked out, but casually replied: the begonia flower is still the same. The word "que" not only indicates that the maid is unaware of the hostess's doubts, but also indicates that the poet is puzzled after hearing the answer. She thought, "How can Begonia still exist after the rain clears?"? This naturally leads to the last two sentences.
"You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? It should be green, fat and thin. " This is not only a rebuttal to the maid, but also a soliloquy: this careless girl, do you know that the begonia in the garden should be lush green leaves and few red flowers? This dialogue shows what poetry and painting can't, and shows the complex expression and tone of the boudoir, which can be described as "a vivid pen" It should be ",indicating that the poet's speculation and judgment on the scene outside the window is extremely appropriate. Because she has not witnessed it with her own eyes, she should leave room for her speech. At the same time, the word also implies the meaning of "must" and "have to". Although Haitang is heartless, it can't bloom forever. In short, there is endless helpless love for flowers, but the predicate is shallow and profound. And this layer's affection for flowers is naturally invisible to the "roller blinds" and does not need more attention. After all, she can't be as delicate as the hostess and have a deeper understanding of nature and life. This may be the reason why she gave the above answer. The last sentence "green, fat, red and thin" is the perfect pen of the whole word and has always been praised by the world. Replacing leaves with green and flowers with red is the contrast between the two colors: "Fat" describes that leaves are lush and plump after rain, and "Thin" describes that flowers wither and are scarce because of unbearable rain, which is the contrast between the two States. Four common words are so vivid and vivid through the collocation and combination of poets, which is really a creation in the use of language. Associated with these four words, the word "red and thin" means the gradual disappearance of spring, while the word "green manure" symbolizes the arrival of green leaves in summer. This very common language is really amazing.
This little word is only six sentences and thirty-three words, but it is written in a tortuous and euphemistic way, which is very hierarchical. The poet drinks heavily because he loves flowers, but he "questions" because he knows the gratitude of flowers, and asks questions because he doesn't believe the answer of "confinement". So he turned around step by step and expressed his love for flowers in a swaying way.
Famous comments
1, Xu Mingshi Jun's "Ancient and Modern Ci Series" Volume 4: "Huajianji" Cloud: This word is the most difficult to define in the Permian language. "Do you know, do you know?" The tone is full. If he is "quiet, quiet" and "insomnia, insomnia", he will not succeed.
2. Xiang Jing Jun by Xu Boling in Ming Dynasty: At that time, Shi Li, the wife of Zhao Mingcheng, was named Yi 'an Jushi, whose poems were particularly unique and praised by the gentry. His sentences of "green manure and red thinness" and "thin people have yellow flowers" have spread from ancient times to modern times.
3. Chen Qingting Zhuo's "Yun Shao Ji" (signed by Chen Shi? ) Volume 10: "Just a few words, layers of twists and turns. Disciples call it' green, fat, red and thin', or it is skin deep. " Bai Yuzhai Volume 6: "Poets are good at making colourful words, such as Zuo Yu's Dripping Powder to Wipe Crisp, Liu Afraid, Green Fat and Red Thin, and Fu Hua". Although the sentence is difficult, it is not elegant.
4. Wu: This word shows the love of flowers and spring scenery and the unique concern and sensitivity of women. There are only thirty-three words in the whole word, and the question and answer with shutter is written skillfully. The questioner is full of emotion, but the respondent is indifferent, thus forcing out the sentence "Do you know, do you know?", which is flexible and affectionate. The words used are skillful, such as "the rain is sparse, the wind is sudden", "deep sleep" and "residual wine". In this sentence, the green leaves are replaced by red flowers, which is common in previous poems (such as Tang Yan's poem "Red residual green is full of begonia branches"), but the word "red" is associated with "thin"
5. Wu Xiaoru's poem: This word was written by the author with a fresh and elegant pen? The feeling of beauty and elegance, written in words, is a boudoir language. The so-called person is more real than a thrush, so no third person is allowed to introduce people. The first two sentences are solid realism, but they are both implicit and interesting. When Jin Shengtan criticized Water Margin, he reminded readers not to be fooled by the author. Readers are advised to read the word Yi 'an layman, and don't be fooled by her. Until the next morning, the young woman was still sleepy, so she asked her husband who was rolling curtains, how was the spring outside? The answer is that Haitang is still in full bloom and has not been destroyed by wind and rain. On the surface, Han is used here? The last four lines of the poem "Lazy": "It rained in the middle of the night last night, but it's cold today. Is the begonia flower here or not? Look at the other side of the shutter. " In fact, cherishing flowers means lovers' hearts. The husband said to his wife, "Haitang remains the same", which is a gentle and considerate word. But the wife said, not necessarily, she should be "green, fat, red and thin" and her youth is about to disappear. Compared with Du Mu's "green leaves turn cloudy and branches are full of branches", elegance and vulgarity are completely different, so it is known that Yi 'an lay man is out of reach. "Do you know" is a refrain that a young woman's own worries are not known to her husband. It can be seen that although the second half is also realistic, it is still relatively hidden and interesting. If it is a conversation between a rich girl or a servant girl, it will be really disappointing and boring.