Read the following materials and write as required. Material: He is a farmer, but he has established the ideal of being a writer since he was a child. To this end, he worked hard for ten years.

Read the following materials and write as required. Material: He is a farmer, but he has established the ideal of being a writer since he was a child. To this end, he worked hard for ten years.

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Turn to life

At the end of the Spring and Autumn Period, Gou Jian, King of Yue, returned from Wu. The monarch and his subjects sang and danced to congratulate him, but everyone blamed him for not seeing General Fan Li.

When Wei is in September, the sequence belongs to Sanqiu. Fan Li drove a gondola across three rivers and five lakes. Through the storm, cold and heat, we will eventually come together. Therefore, the whole body jewelry is placed in the business trip, drought is the boat, and water is the car. The way of doing business is very different from that of many businesses. After three or five years of sleepless nights, he became a rich man in Shandong. It's an alias Tao Zhu, and she's traveling all over the world.

A few days later, I went to the south, but I climbed up on foot. I think my eyes lit up. Stop and watch, but when you see the sky is high and the clouds are light, the mountains are beautiful, the trees are lush and the springs are clear, you don't feel secretly applauded. After walking 300 steps, I saw a pavilion standing by the water's edge, in which an old man with a silver beard closed his eyes and reposed. Gong Fan wanted to ask questions, but he didn't want the old man to say to himself first, "Please sit down. I wonder why the distinguished guests are here?" Gong Fan quickly replied, "It is presumptuous to be born late. There are many problems that I don't respect! Jia, who was born late in Shandong, was named, a few days ago ... "Weng was surprised. He quickly asked, "Is Weng a general of Yue and Gong Fan?" "It's all in the past, don't mention it!" Weng sighed, "I have heard so much about the general, and I have great respect in my heart. I don't want to watch it today. Nice to meet you, nice to meet you! However, I heard that the King of Yue was willing to give up half of the rivers and mountains to share the glory with others. Why does the public regard it as dirt? " Gong Fan just smiled. Weng said, "I am the nephew of Sun Gong, a former general of Wu, and I am afraid of martial arts. I hid here when I helped Fu Cha fight Chu, and now we meet by destiny. They are all people who have fallen to the end of the world, so there is no need to doubt. " Gong Fan was silent for a long time and sighed, "I have never told anyone about this world, but now I talk about it openly. The ancients said that' those who are famous all over the world are not blessed, and those who have high achievements cover their masters are in danger'. Although I am a general, I won thousands of miles to help the state of Yue perish, but after Wu's defeat, I saw the king of Yue unhappy all day. I know what this means. Think of the king as a person with a long neck, a long beak and an eagle's eye and a wolf's step, but can you be happy with him when he is in trouble? If you don't hurry, you may be in danger. "

"When Wu Zhi was destroyed, the king had a whim and wanted to give him half the country. I know I can't, and I feel uncomfortable, so I have the intention of seclusion. As the saying goes,' if you can't walk, you will be constrained, and if you don't stop, you will be disturbed'. So I went from business to market and turned to life. Now I have no worries about food and clothing. I want to travel around the world and enjoy the spring breeze, peaches and plums and autumn leaves. Therefore, as for Sri Lanka, it is a sin not to bother you. "

Weng stared for a long time, then slowly sighed, "I'm sincere." I heard that Wen Zhonggong and Mr. Wen Zhong are acquaintances. Why not invite * * * to come back together? "

Therefore, Fan Gongzhi writes in the genre, to tell the truth. Literature is enlightenment, and I want to go, but it is too late. I have given my sword for treason. Wen Zi's loneliness and anger were uncontrollable. He looked up at the sky and shouted, "What can I say now?" ? It's a pity that I've made thousands of achievements in my life, but I don't know that the birds are all hidden, and the rabbit is dead and the dog is cooked. This is the only reason. As the saying goes: when the bird is dying, its song is also sad; The dying man speaks the truth. I want to tell the world from the bottom of my heart that I first killed Nanyang for Chu and ended up as a prisoner of Yue. Being diligent and determined to serve the country all his life can be described as loyalty. However, I don't know the way to advance and retreat. The way to turn is the beginning of today's disaster. Look at future generations, learn from them, and don't let them grieve any more. "Say, drew a sword from 30.

When Gong Fan heard this, he sighed and stamped his foot and said, "Wow! How sad it is that Wen Zhonggong didn't know how to change lanes, but added trouble! But people all over the world know how to turn the corner. Sadly, everything is rebellious, which is a sigh for future generations! "

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This paper is novel in conception and incorporates the elements of "joking" on the basis of certain historical facts. The legendary story of Fan Li, a famous minister of the State of Yue in the Spring and Autumn Period, was selected for interpretation in an article. After helping to destroy Wu, he abandoned his official position and went into business, eventually becoming a tycoon and living a carefree life. But knowing that my friend's style of writing was extravagant and he pursued glory, he was finally killed by the King of Yue. Through Fan Sha's casual conversation with a retired old man, the article embodies the principle of "turning point" which is closely related to the topic and implicit but not dull. By arranging characters for the topic and comparing the situations of Fan Li and Wen Zi, it is intended to prove that knowing how to "turn" has a great influence on life. In addition, the conception of the article is all based on the high school Chinese textbooks (genre and stories are scattered in Gou Jian's Notes on Destroying Wu and Guo Qin's Theory, etc. ), it can be seen that the author is a person who carefully prepares for the exam.

This material, through the bumpy experience of Zhang Wenju, a famous hard-pen calligrapher, shows that success in life requires many factors. As far as the material itself is concerned, there are many writing points that can be triggered, such as: "the importance of encouragement" can be triggered by the editor's reply; Answering a reporter's question from Zhang Wenju can lead to "talk about courage …' talk about perseverance …' talk about ideals' and so on. However, the topic of "turn" is clearly defined in the "writing requirements", so when writing, you can only think for thousands of years in the sky of "turn", and you can't understand Wan Li without referring to other writing points in the materials.

In terms of "turning". The topic has obvious analogy (as can also be seen from the context of Zhang Wenju's speech in Raw Materials), so when examining the conception of the topic, we should focus on "emptiness" and tap its "rational interest". If you write an argumentative essay, you should pay attention to the following three points: ① Discuss the hierarchy step by step. Don't just talk about "individual", but form a progressive chain similar to "individual", "society" and "country", and strive to be deeper in conception. Don't be too pale when choosing examples, only in the narrow circle of "classmates, me, neighbors". In fact, when I think about it, Tao Yuanming "feels that today is not yesterday"; Lu Xun abandoned medicine and went to literature; The Long March Transformation in China's Revolutionary Period: The reform and opening up in the early 1980s were in line with the interests of "turning". (3) Judging from the emotional tendency of material narration, this topic is not suitable for playing pipa. If you write a narrative, you must pay attention to its vividness and prevarication. Of course, it must include the principle of "turning". And make it clear in an appropriate way in an appropriate context, such as character dialogue, psychological loneliness, discussion and disclosure. As for other styles, you can try them without deviating from the subject.