I don’t think the writing is ugly, some of my classmates also have similar calligraphy
I think if you are not a calligrapher, you don’t need to deliberately “practice” if you want to write well. Just be careful when writing.
Of course, practicing calligraphy is also beneficial, and the font standard on it
lz I can give you some specific suggestions on the picture. I feel that some are better than the strokes, such as the strokes of the calendar. , when the character Xian is written down, it becomes vertical. There are also character structures, some of which are not arranged well. For example, the character "明" is written open and the day needs to be smaller. The character "su" is written larger in the middle. The character "道" is written longer horizontally and narrower to look better. . .
The strength of each gesture is almost the same. It is recommended that the middle part is thick and the two ends are light, and the horizontal ends are heavy. . . Pay attention to the weight of the gestures
I don’t know if lz feels that the overall look is a bit left-leaning, especially the words "spirit" and "man" that are more horizontally and vertically. . .
The Chinese text has been written, will it help the English text? ——Yes
Practice the copybook first. Once you have basically finished writing, you don’t need to stick to the copybook. After all, everyone has their own characteristics, right? It will come out as you write
The above are my non-professional opinions (not a calligraphy practitioner, but also a homework writer), for reference only