The boys in our class wrote 600 words.

Writing ideas: In order to avoid verbosity and highlight the theme, we must cut out the materials and don't cover everything. We should use transitional words or sentences to make the connection between paragraphs more natural.

The model essay is as follows:

Speaking of boys in our class, it's too good to say anything.

Laughing Star-Fan Zhonghe

It's funny to mention Fan Zhonghe. He is a comedian in our class. Usually, he likes to make up some jokes to make everyone laugh. Once, when he was teaching Einstein and Edison in a science class, he recited a poem: "Einstein invented briefs, Edison invented diapers …". Cause the whole class to burst into laughter.

Mrs. Zhang Peng

Although Zhang Peng is a boy, he really doesn't look like a boy at ordinary times. He speaks hesitatingly, takes small steps and nibbles at food, and is a "lady". But in the sports field, he was full of energy and struggled hard, completely losing the image of a "lady".

"troublemaker-Ye Yongmao"

Ha ha! Look, Ye Yongmao is making trouble again. Ye Yijia got up to answer questions and was about to sit down. Ye Yongmao quietly reached behind Ye Yijia's chair and quickly moved away. Ye Yijia fell to the ground with a bang, and the whole class burst into laughter. ...

Naughty King-Huang Yiheng

"Hee hee!" Hearing this strange laughter, the students all looked into their schoolbags to see what was strange. This was to guard against him! Because he always puts it here and there in his schoolbag, which makes it incongruous, but he laughs beside him.

"The King of Composition —— Analysis of Hu Hao"

Although Hu Haoxian is short and ugly. If you read his composition, you will be surprised, wonderful and strange! He wrote such a good composition.

Although I don't like fighting with boys at ordinary times, life will be much less fun without them!