Ask your friends to help you evaluate your calligraphy works.

Generally speaking, it's not bad. At first glance, I thought it was a style of study, but after careful investigation, the brushwork, especially the strokes of the words "Jun", "Zi" and "Bu" in the second picture, was exactly the same as that of Zhao Ti. I learn very well. If you put more effort into some strokes and overall changes of white cloth, you will certainly gain a lot.