It’s okay, but there are still many problems.
Wave: It is best not to protrude from the left side of the lower "lift". The "vertical lift" should be coherent.
Bian: ?Since it is written in running script, it is best to write "辶" in the form of running script. What you wrote is similar to regular script.
Tao: ?The "捺" of "辶" should not be tilted up at the end, it should be flat.
Yes: ? The "日" above is too wide and uncoordinated.
Wall: ?The upper side is too wide and the lower side is too small.
Master: ?I gave you my opinion last time, but it seems that it hasn’t changed. Too wide, too loose and unsightly.
Many: ?It seems to be written in cursive script. But if it's cursive, it seems to have an extra twist. When writing like this, it neither resembles running script nor cursive script.
Jie: The “four points” at the bottom are too hard, not soft, and lack beauty.
Overall evaluation: Looking at "氵", it seems to have a slightly "European style" feel. Maybe it imitated a little European style. But only a little bit. This may indicate a lack of focus on one practice.
The structure is not reasonable. Some characters appear very wide and heavy at the top.
The strokes lack flexibility, that is, they appear stiff.
This shows that the training time is not long enough. So if you want to write well, it's best to focus on a certain one and work hard to practice.