One, both sides have become the burden of this exercise, one is that the size is uncomfortable, and the other is that the construction is not in place. It seems that the study of composition and layout is not enough, so we need to read more ancient posts and experience the composition and layout.
Second, the number of words is not much, the flesh is boneless, and the pen strength is insufficient. Individual strokes are too far-fetched and thin. For example, the word "Cai" is curly, and it is a failure to float lightly, and the intersection of the horizontal pen and the word "Wan" is a failure.