This is a poem by the poet Zhang Zhimin. The meaning of poetry is not difficult to understand: on the surface, it is calligraphy. Many powerful people in the past dynasties liked to dance ink to decorate their faces. They practiced the word "fame and fortune" very well, and even spent their whole lives, but even the simplest word "person" was not well written, lacking bones and flesh, and crooked. The profound meaning is that some people pursue external things all their lives, such as fame, power, scenery, or so-called "face", but ignore people's internal pursuits, including soul, dignity, spirit and personality, which is very ironic. Without inner people, there can be no higher moral pursuit, nor can there be noble personality strength.
Intentional quotation:
The key words of poetry are: powerful people, appearance, life-long efforts, fame and fortune, simplicity, boneless and crooked. Grasping these keywords and understanding the meaning of poetry, it is not difficult to produce some intentional angles, such as:
①? People can't just pay attention to the facade and superficial scenery, and unilaterally pursue fame, power and status.
② People should pay attention to the improvement of inner self-cultivation, such as attaching importance to soul and dignity, and shaping spirit and personality.
These two ideas only focus on one aspect. Candidates who are relatively general and deep in thinking should see the dialectical unity between the two and combine the two aspects to make ideas, such as:
(1) Externality and essence (Externality refers to appearance, fame and fortune, scenery, etc. ); Intrinsic refers to spirit and personality), appropriate external pursuit is understandable, but what is more important is people's moral level and personality shaping.
② From calligraphy to being a man and doing things, the simplest things are often the most abundant and the most difficult to do well. Indulge in the external scenery, it is easy to lose the most essential connotation.
In addition to the above ideas, if students have other opinions, they can justify themselves according to the poems, and the marking teacher can consider them as appropriate.
Fan Wen:
Standing in the mountains
I often think, what kind of posture should a person stand in?
Standing in the ocean, even with the spirit of all rivers running into the sea, it is easy to rise and fall. Standing on a big tree, there is also the danger of being struck by lightning after being 100 feet high, and it will not stay still; Standing in the flowers, after the brilliant and noisy colors, it is still a piece of red and messy everywhere; Standing like a cool breeze and bright moon, although detached, it has lost its composure; Standing on the plateau or flat ground, though firm, is unremarkable. What kind of standing posture is the most obvious, which makes people have no regrets for life?
As if through time and space, a deep echo floated from the ancient sky: "Capital life is like a mountain!" " "
Mountains are the backbone of the earth and the foundation of high altitude. The mountain never speaks, nor does it need to speak. The posture of the mountain shows its soul. Mountains always inspire and overlook all sentient beings in a primitive form. People who live like mountains will be the most regretless people?
Yes, standing in the mountains, you forget the ups and downs of the sea. Standing in a mountain will break the emptiness of intrigue and collusion between officials and businessmen, and will sweep away the drift of seeking profits and clinging to power. Standing like a mountain, I remember the fearlessness of "the head can be broken, the blood can flow, and the scholar's day can't be bent", and I abide by the unpretentious code of conduct, and unswervingly support the admirable human dignity between the loess and the gravel. I remember Mr. Ba Jin once said, "To be a man, you should be a soldier who will not put down his gun until you die." Ba Lao's persistence explains the strength of the mountain, a kind of courage to go forward through thick and thin, and Ba Lao really has "China conscience". There is also Professor Chen Shengshen, whose last words to future generations are just "I'm leaving, there must be beauty of mathematics in heaven". It is such a master of mathematics that I am glad that there is no Nobel Prize in mathematics. Throughout his life, he has always stood in a mountain indifferent to fame and fortune with his unpretentious original style.
A person's life is to write the word "person" with his own life. Some are illegible in black and white, while others are crooked and have no trunk. But there are also some capitalized "people" who just stand up straight, with vigorous brushwork and stand in a mountain posture. Wang Guowei died for culture just because he stood on a big mountain. Only then did Tan Sitong's blood splash at the mouth of the food market, "I laugh at the sky with a horizontal knife, and my liver and gallbladder are two Kunlun mountains"; Lu Xun went to Japan to explore the truth of saving the country. "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood."
Because standing on a mountain, you will be upright, upright, calm and calm, and have no regrets.
Standing in a big mountain, this is the real capital life.
The center of the word "mountain" in calligraphy is the word "person". Only when people stand in a mountain posture can they smile at the world without regrets and proudly say at the end of their lives, "Although my life is not full of colors, I have written a capital word" people ". I can be tall and straight enough in this world. "
Comments:
This exercise can grasp the meaning of this poem well and explain his unique understanding. "To be a man, it is necessary to establish a mountain", which vividly interprets the theme of poetry in a metaphorical way. In writing, the theme is more distinct by borrowing contrast and comparing the two. With clear thinking, rich examples, neat structure and fluent language, this exercise is a masterpiece of reasoning and writing.