Who's the master to help me look at this calligraphy level?

it's pretty good. I work hard.

the brush can basically carry a pen.

1. You can write smaller words with fewer strokes.

2, the left and right strokes are not full of vigor.

3, the left side of the song can be slightly larger. The right side is a little smaller.

4, the flying word has no bearing and does not fly.

5, yes, it's better to write the vertical hook according to the normal characters first.

6. In normal times, you can write smaller words. If you want to write dou Fang, practice it three times on old newspaper first. (Many successful works are also practiced for a while, and a few are written after they are sure. )