First, the font is chic and modern, but there is a gap with traditional calligraphy, which is not heavy;
Second, the lines are too tasteful and ugly;
Third, the basic skills of stippling are not enough, such as three-point water (sand, washing and sinking), hook (iron), dew (lang) and crab claw (general).
Fourth, there are disputes about writing methods, such as: literacy, the division of Zhao, and Joe's sketching;
Fifth, the seal is not exquisite, and finally the seal is too big. Is there an extra chapter?
Sixth, the question of signature, the previous paragraph is too low, at least flush with the text, what is top? At the end of the next paragraph, Chinese characters are too abrupt;
Seven, the font size is uneven, the handwriting is messy, but the pen is too mechanical, and the bones are fleshy and less beautiful. It should be noted that small words are thicker, such as "self". After all, calligraphy is not a montage, and running script is not cursive or freehand brushwork.
But overall, it's still good, and I will achieve something, much better than what I wrote.
Oh, it's adopted. It is human nature to like to listen to good words.