Stroke has been able to write light and heavy changes, and most words have stable center of gravity and symmetrical structure.
The first picture is vertical and horizontal, and the smell is plain and clear.
If we only discuss brushwork and composition without considering age, there are still many places to explore and improve.
Take the first picture as an example:
1 brushwork: the number of individual strokes is less and slightly heavier. For example, the vertical hook of the water character in the first column and the vertical pen of the moon character in the second column; The strokes are too straight. Include hook, etc. Every word has this problem, so I don't give examples. You should understand the meaning of twists and turns.
2-character method: write correctly. You wrote some wrong strokes. The first two strokes should be skimmed first and then vertical, but you may have skimmed horizontally and then vertical, so it is too long. Correct stroke order can accurately ensure the relative position of strokes, and then the structure is accurate and beautiful. The structure should be symmetrical. Besides, some words in your works have uneven density. Such as songs (too dense on the left), queque (too full inside), cold (too dense on the bottom), sunny (too dense on the left and too thick on the right), shadows (too wide and flat on the mouth) and so on. Some words are not the right length. If there are (too long and too short), why (too short and a little cramped), victory (too long at the bottom), light (too low sun), sleep, sunny days (eyes and the sun are too high). Breathe in words. Words such as Song, Ming, Moon, Harmony, Stone and Zen. There is a closed space, so leave as many mouths as possible. For example, the two horizontal or right sides of the moon are not sealed or even connected.
3 composition: the writing format is balanced vertically and horizontally, and the overall composition has begun to take shape. But I feel that the name of the tablet should be in the middle of the first column; The first column of the upper gate is not empty; There can be empty words between the upper and lower que; The last column cannot be empty, so it is better not to fill in the row; It might be better if you try to get rid of punctuation.
Let's talk about this for the time being. If children like calligraphy, practice it well. The future is limitless!