Second, there are too many seals, usually one casual seal and two name seals.
Third, the rules are too full and unstable. The seal script should be evenly distributed, with 20 characters in four or two columns, left and half right, and the seal script is too large and too dense.
Fourth, don't write stray songs from the beginning. It is also wrong to interpret the position. The general explanation is written on the left side of the seal script, which can be explained word by word or written on the left side. The title of the poem should belong to the content of the inscription, and it is superfluous to write it at the beginning!
Five, "slow" and "dense", overlapping words should be replaced by two points.
Sixth, seal script should be studied, not copied. For example, back to the end of the word, don't fold to the right, the word is short and crooked, the center of gravity of the secret is too large, and the two vertical lines are afraid of being parallel.
I'm just saying, you wrote well, don't mind.
The fault of your seal script is the same as the above picture, but the composition of the above picture is better.
This is a little better.