Calligraphy, my word interpretation

It is good for junior high school students to write such words. Judging from your handwriting, it is estimated that you should be a boy, and your personality should be sunny, cheerful, kind and likable. Judging from your handwriting, you still have great potential in writing. You can write easily, freely and freely. Handwriting is more correct, and many words are more durable, such as "Baizhangbing", "How to spend" and "Homesickness". Shortcomings and suggestions for improvement: 1. You lack formal writing training, and many basic strokes are irregular and inaccurate. Outstanding performance in the pen, stroke length and direction of each stroke. In short, the stroke shape is not standardized and accurate. Suggestion: Find this famous copybook and observe and study the basic strokes written by calligraphers. 2. Some strokes are too prominent and exaggerated for fun, such as the vertical hook of "don't", the long left hand of "in", the vertical hook of the words "chaos, land and death", the first stroke of "etc" and the hook of "or". Some strokes are too exaggerated, which affects the overall neatness and looks a bit messy. Suggestion: practice writing in the grid to see if there are any strokes protruding outside the grid. 3. In terms of glyph structure, many words with left and right structures are too tight to fit. For example, "Li, Hai, Jane, surname" and so on. Many words in the upper and lower structures are not harmonious, and most of them have the disadvantages of big head and short body, such as "riding, dying, answering, home and snow". The characters in the upper and lower structure should be "short on the top and long on the bottom, dense on the bottom and loose on the bottom". The longer the shape, the better it looks. You can't write like a doll with a big head. 4. The overall shape should be slightly lower on the left and slightly higher on the right, so as to have spirit. Many of your words are just the opposite, written as high left and low right, such as "inquiry, help" and so on. Suggestion: the horizontal painting should be slightly tilted to the right. Other suggestions: go to the bookstore and choose a book you like, write more according to it and make continuous progress. If you have the conditions, you will definitely get something if you ask a teacher or classmate who writes well and knows calligraphy in person. I wish you progress! Attached are two volumes of my students' (senior high school students') compositions, which are beautifully written for your reference. (To be continued)