1. The composition is rewritten from Mulan's poem (short description of the daughter's mood and detailed description of the battle scene)
It was late at night, the moonlight shone on the lake, and suddenly, a drop of dew fell on the water, breaking the
The silence of the night. Mixed with the chirping of insects, the wind blew.
Under the dim light, a graceful woman sat in front of the loom, letting out a long
sigh.
Late last night, Mulan, you received a notice from the army, and it was exactly the same.
The man at home had a sad face, and the military letter read twelve Every word, every word is urging your father to fight again
You have no brother, your younger brother is still underage, and your father is very old.
What to do?
He had no choice but to join the army on his father's behalf.
The next morning, you prepared your war horses and all fighting tools, said goodbye to your parents, and set out on your journey.
You came to the Yellow River at night. The water was low and the river roared. You sat alone by the Yellow River
and looked up at the moon. You missed your hometown again. On a normal day, your eyes are moist, it rains heavily, and the rain drops on your face.
I don’t know whether it was tears or rain, but they dripped silently on the ground, cooling my heart.
You stood up and wiped away your tears, heading towards the top of the Black Mountain. In the distance, you could faintly hear the roar of war horses
The roar of soldiers fighting.
You mount a war horse, hold a sharp weapon in your hand, and rush into the enemy's formation. All the soldiers beside you
fall down one by one. You brandished sharp weapons and fought and fought with all your might.
You are half-kneeling on the ground, your face is covered with blood, and the sharp weapon is stained with the blood of the enemy.
You cover your wound and lean on the stone to look up at the sky.
You think back to your parents’ backs again. Are your parents okay? My brother has grown up already
right? Is your sister also married?
You wiped the blood from the corner of your mouth with your hands. The moonlight shone on your cold armor. You used your blood-stained hands to straighten your hair that was messed up by the wind and looked up at the sky. , fell into deep thought... 2. Rewrite the battle part of "Mulan Poetry" and write about 400 words in detail
The neighing of war horses came from the sky above the ancient road.
A heroic female general wearing armor was vaguely visible at the front. She was waving her riding whip vigorously and running on the rugged ancient road.
This female general who is eager to return home is the famous Hua Mulan. It is said that more than ten years ago, Mulan's family received a military notice from Khan to recruit soldiers for war.
The kind and filial Mulan wanted to prevent her elderly father from suffering the pain of war. Mulan, a delicate woman, decided to disguise herself as a man and join the army in place of her father.
In the battle, she fought bravely and returned triumphantly with great achievements. Faced with the tempting fame and wealth, Mulan remained unmoved and returned to her longed-for hometown without hesitation.
The news of Mulan's return home in fine clothes reached her village, and the whole village was in a state of excitement. The faces of the villagers all showed unprecedented joy, and Mulan's family was even more happy.
Finally, this day came. Mulan’s parents held each other’s arms to welcome their daughter’s arrival, and the villagers also gathered to welcome the approaching army. The biting cold wind howled, and the two old men The hearts of the villagers and the villagers were hotter than ever. listen! A burst of horses' cries came from far and near.
Suddenly, the road was filled with dust. Suddenly, a powerful horse flew out of the confusion. Hua Mulan jumped off the horse and threw herself into her mother's arms.
Calling emotionally: "Mom, Lan'er is back, your Lan'er is back!" The mother stretched out her trembling hand and touched her beloved daughter's cheek. She didn't say a word, but she broke down in tears. My father couldn't help but burst into tears.
Everyone present was moved by this scene. There are colorful lanterns hanging high and the sound of firecrackers everywhere in the small village.
Mulan's sister came out with a fresh make-up. Looking at the mighty general in front of her, she was really surprised and happy. "Little sister!" "Sister!" The long-lost sisters held their hands tightly.
"Sister, why don't you see my little brother?" "He is busy!" My sister pointed to the backyard mysteriously. Mulan heard the sound of sharpening knives and came to the backyard.
After more than 10 years, the little naughty boy of the past has grown into a handsome and strong young man. In order to cleanse his sister, he was killing pigs and sheep: "Report to General Hua, everything is ready!" Mulan looked at her younger brother with a smile on her face.
When the hall was closed, there was the sound of everyone laughing and drinking. Mulan came to her girlhood boudoir.
The furnishings in the house are as before, and the loom in the corner seems to be telling stories from the past. Mulan took off her shirt and put on a beautiful red dress. She sat tenderly in front of the mirror and dressed up carefully... After combing, Mulan moved lightly and came to the main room shyly.
For a moment, everyone was stunned by this charming beauty. An old friend said to Mulan's father in surprise: "Dad, I didn't expect you to have such a beautiful daughter!" Mulan's father smiled heartily and said to everyone: "Look carefully, she is Mulan. "Ah!" "What?" Everyone couldn't believe their eyes. Hua Mulan, who had been with them for more than ten years, was actually a young girl! Seeing this, Mulan waved her sword and danced freely, dazzling and amazed.
In addition to being amazed, everyone sighed: Mulan! Mulan! What a wonderful woman! From then on, the story of Mulan's expedition on behalf of her father became a legend and will be remembered for generations to come. 3. What is shorthand and detailed writing in Mulan's poem
Detailed analysis: reasons for joining the army - detailed preparations before the expedition - sketchy description of family homesickness during the expedition - detailed description of the daughter The mood is flying across the mountains and fighting on the battlefield - a brief description of the heroic triumphant resignation - a detailed description of the family's welcome - a detailed description of Mulan's modification - a detailed description of the function: (in terms of content) highlighting the moods of Mulan's children, enriching Mulan The heroic character makes the characters real and touching. The detailed outline (in structure) is appropriate, making the whole poem concise and compact. This arrangement is because the poem is arranged in detail based on the character characteristics of "Mulan is a girl", and it has the ability to Write the material that expresses the central idea in detail. Generally speaking, just write it briefly. The fourth paragraph can be divided into three scenes: first, the military situation is urgent, Mulan follows the army and rushes all the way to the border for support, and thousands of miles of mountains pass by like flying; It describes the hard life in the military camp, accompanied by the sound of patrols in the middle of the night, and the cold moonlight shining on the armor makes you feel the chill; the third one covers the life and death experience of Mulan and her comrades in hundreds of battles, and the rest of their lives after a hundred battles. The living can finally go home. One sentence describes the cruelty of war, but it also provides an emotional foreshadowing to a certain extent for the joy caused by Mulan's return home. Therefore, although this paragraph is abbreviated , but the words are accurate, the scene transitions are realistic, and the context adds to the charm. 4. The detailed and abbreviated writing of Mulan's poem
How to understand the traditional and simplified treatment in "Mulan's poem"? The following three points must be made clear: Where in "Mulan Poetry" is it complex and where is it simple? What kind of effect does this complex and simplified treatment produce? Why did the author do this? ① The use of traditional Chinese writing: Mulan's worries when she was weaving, Mulan's activities when preparing to pack, Mulan's mentality when she went to the battlefield, the joy of her family after Mulan returned home, Mulan's joy when she was dressing up as a "daughter", etc. They are all written in a complex and meticulous manner.
For example, Mulan’s purchase of a pommel horse is laid out in a parallel arrangement from east to west, north to south, exaggerating the tension and busyness of preparations before the war. Readers seem to be able to see Mulan running around and busy, and they can also imagine Mulan in military uniform. Mulan is so heroic! Another example is that Mulan repeatedly mentioned "not hearing her mother-in-law's call to her daughter" when she was rushing to the battlefield. In fact, it was a true portrayal of Mulan's mentality at this time: when the sun set in the west and the dusk fell, Mulan was sleeping alone on the bank of the Yellow River. Listening to the rushing water of the Yellow River, the calls of parents are always echoing in my heart. As they get farther and farther away, the voices of parents calling for their daughter have long been lost, but this voice always echoes in the ears of my daughter! The journey is long, when will I hear the kind call from the mother-in-law who warms my daughter's heart again? For another example, the last paragraph describes the different actions of Mulan’s parents, siblings, and others when she returns to her hometown. The same sentence is repeated three times to vividly express the joy and joyful atmosphere when relatives are finally reunited after ten years of separation. . The description of Mulan reentering the boudoir and putting on "daughter makeup" vividly exaggerates Mulan's love for life and her beautiful and lovely daughter mood.
② The use of simple writing. As for simple writing, the main purpose is to keep the description of the battle process as simple as possible. Ten years of life can be explained in only a few sentences.
Why is this arranged? What the author does not hesitate to describe is often what he wants to highlight. What this poem wants to highlight is the praise of Mulan's character of being filial to her parents and having the courage to take on important responsibilities. Therefore, the cruel war is briefly mentioned, but the content that can reflect the beautiful soul is spared no words.
In addition, this traditional and simplified arrangement seems to imply the author's yearning and blessing for a better life, and his indifference and distance from war. 5. What is detailed in the narrative of Mulan's poem, what is sketched out, and why is it arranged in this way?
Describe in detail the preparation before going to the battlefield and the glory after the battlefield
Sketch the scene of the battlefield
Because this Yuefu mainly highlights Mulan’s hardworking and kind-hearted character, her enthusiasm for defending her home and country, and her heroic fighting spirit.
This poem has strong folk song characteristics. The whole poem uses "Mulan is a girl" to conceive the legendary story of Mulan, which is full of romance. The arrangement of traditional and simplified texts is very ingenious. Although it is written about war themes, it focuses more on life scenes and the emotions of children, which is full of life. The poem uses questions and answers to depict the psychology of the characters, which is vivid and detailed; it uses numerous parallels and parallelisms to describe the behavioral moods, which is lively; and it uses interesting metaphors to conclude the whole poem, which is evocative. This gives the work a strong artistic appeal.
Baidu Encyclopedia has a detailed analysis 6. Which parts of "Mulan Poetry" are written in detail
1. Storyline: 1. Joining the army on behalf of his father and embarking on a journey. (Write in detail)
2. Go to the front line and fight for ten years. (Abbreviated)
3. Return to court, resign, and reunite with the family. (write in detail)
4. Sing metaphors and praise Mulan (write in detail)
Image of Mulan: hard-working, kind, honest, cautious (feelings of a daughter) (write in detail)
Wit, bravery, perseverance, loyalty and filial piety (heroic spirit) (abbreviated)
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