One day during the winter vacation, Tintin and Dongdong made a snowman by the wall outside the school.
Look, how serious they are! Dongdong rolled a small ball. She said, "This is the snowman's head." Tintin said, "I will find my nose, eyes and arms." Tintin brought carrots, black stones and two broom sticks.
The snowman is finished. Tintin and Dongdong happily sang and danced around the snowman.
This is the diary of a first-grade pupil. The language is full of innocence, and the narrative is clear and complete. In some places, the words are more accurate, such as "serious", "happy" and "singing and dancing". The writing is fluent and the structure is reasonable.